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Niallator Acres
10:55:52 Ivy - Niallator side
now, im going to go eat my lunch
Crestwood Eq.
10:55:02 Ivy / poison ivy
oh mushrooms for eating purposes, how i love thee...let me count the ways. oh wait i cant, there are too many
Niallator Acres
10:54:21 Ivy - Niallator side
banana breadddd without nuts
Angels angels
10:53:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I like both
But I have never made it before just eaten it so hopefully this goes well
Sleepwalker Centre
10:52:10 Walker
I prefer mine without nuts
Angels angels
10:51:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Me too
I wish I had some nuts to put in it too
Sleepwalker Centre
10:51:13 Walker
I loooove banana bread
Angels angels
10:50:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am going to attempt to make banana bread. Who wants some?
Sleepwalker Centre
10:50:33 Walker
I don't really have a Job right now since I'm a full time student but I have been selling car parts on the side
Sleepwalker Centre
10:48:52 Walker
Getting paid sounds nice, I do need to make some real life money soon
Glacier Bay Cove
10:48:09 Arctic Katz
Crap, you are doing better than I am
Angels angels
10:46:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivy
I get paid on Friday so If you don't have one by then I will lol
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:14 Ivy / poison ivy
Whaa*
Sleepwalker Centre
10:46:13 Walker
But also ty I won't look a gift horse (no pun intended) in the mouth
Imperial Warmbloods
10:46:11 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Walker
Lol, >3<
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:09 Ivy / poison ivy
Walker

wahhhh
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:57 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

hit me up with one of them (you know what i mean *face palm because what i just said was 100000 on the cringe factor*)
Sleepwalker Centre
10:45:44 Walker
They know what >points at those who know<
Insignia Elites
10:45:14 Em
I need to build more show geldings xD Thats the only way I can see me having a steady income at this point until I get a decent stallion on LB
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:05 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

what

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Niallator Acres
10:55:52 Ivy - Niallator side
now, im going to go eat my lunch
Crestwood Eq.
10:55:02 Ivy / poison ivy
oh mushrooms for eating purposes, how i love thee...let me count the ways. oh wait i cant, there are too many
Niallator Acres
10:54:21 Ivy - Niallator side
banana breadddd without nuts
Angels angels
10:53:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I like both
But I have never made it before just eaten it so hopefully this goes well
Sleepwalker Centre
10:52:10 Walker
I prefer mine without nuts
Angels angels
10:51:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Me too
I wish I had some nuts to put in it too
Sleepwalker Centre
10:51:13 Walker
I loooove banana bread
Angels angels
10:50:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am going to attempt to make banana bread. Who wants some?
Sleepwalker Centre
10:50:33 Walker
I don't really have a Job right now since I'm a full time student but I have been selling car parts on the side
Sleepwalker Centre
10:48:52 Walker
Getting paid sounds nice, I do need to make some real life money soon
Glacier Bay Cove
10:48:09 Arctic Katz
Crap, you are doing better than I am
Angels angels
10:46:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivy
I get paid on Friday so If you don't have one by then I will lol
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:14 Ivy / poison ivy
Whaa*
Sleepwalker Centre
10:46:13 Walker
But also ty I won't look a gift horse (no pun intended) in the mouth
Imperial Warmbloods
10:46:11 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Walker
Lol, >3<
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:09 Ivy / poison ivy
Walker

wahhhh
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:57 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

hit me up with one of them (you know what i mean *face palm because what i just said was 100000 on the cringe factor*)
Sleepwalker Centre
10:45:44 Walker
They know what >points at those who know<
Insignia Elites
10:45:14 Em
I need to build more show geldings xD Thats the only way I can see me having a steady income at this point until I get a decent stallion on LB
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:05 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

what

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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