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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Sunni

10:19:40 Sunni bunny

I walked a mile and a half today.
I am happy with myself.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:12:08 Arctic Katz

Will you be able to get a refund, Athena

10:11:52 anti gen ai

No he now has his old man fluff 😭
-HEE Click-

Sunflower Hollow

10:11:12 Sunny

Elysium
I thought he had a little beard until I checked again lol

10:10:03 anti gen ai

Sharing some of my silliest horses in this game in exchange for being ex0loded by balloons
-HEE Click-

10:05:46 Roan🦋⃤

phew 80 balloon hits? my my xD

10:02:56 Athena's SA - KNNs

damnit just bought a glass on the wrong account

Glacier Bay Cove

10:02:45 Arctic Katz

Can't wait for the next trivia game

10:01:50 Rapcoon | Jester

yeah probably. If that second EWE trains better, I'd try that stud again

10:00:42 Athena's SA - KNNs

So someone else?

09:58:15 Rapcoon | Jester

oh that's fair, probably a fluke anyway

09:55:04 C

-HEE Click-
With a Scp glass
Thoughts?

09:54:42 Athena's SA - KNNs

not dead I mean retitred

09:54:28 Athena's SA - KNNs

well that stud is dead so it'd have to be the most recent one. Except that match also gave me an EEE with a glass

09:52:39 Rapcoon | Jester

I'd probably repeat, that first EWE she threw has shit training but decent production >,>

09:48:32 Athena's SA - KNNs

It's her last year and she's given me 2 EWE so I don't know if I should do a repeat or just throw her at a random boy
-HEE Click-

09:45:33 Rapcoon | Jester

average wild pony x'D

ooh good girl!

Red Panda Hollow

09:44:59 Athena's SA-PON

Her however...she was nice this time around
-HEE Click-

Red Panda Hollow

09:44:33 Athena's SA-PON

She's been such a little bitch

09:42:56 Rapcoon | Jester

It'll probably be her very last foal lol

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Sunni

10:19:40 Sunni bunny

I walked a mile and a half today.
I am happy with myself.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:12:08 Arctic Katz

Will you be able to get a refund, Athena

10:11:52 anti gen ai

No he now has his old man fluff 😭
-HEE Click-

Sunflower Hollow

10:11:12 Sunny

Elysium
I thought he had a little beard until I checked again lol

10:10:03 anti gen ai

Sharing some of my silliest horses in this game in exchange for being ex0loded by balloons
-HEE Click-

10:05:46 Roan🦋⃤

phew 80 balloon hits? my my xD

10:02:56 Athena's SA - KNNs

damnit just bought a glass on the wrong account

Glacier Bay Cove

10:02:45 Arctic Katz

Can't wait for the next trivia game

10:01:50 Rapcoon | Jester

yeah probably. If that second EWE trains better, I'd try that stud again

10:00:42 Athena's SA - KNNs

So someone else?

09:58:15 Rapcoon | Jester

oh that's fair, probably a fluke anyway

09:55:04 C

-HEE Click-
With a Scp glass
Thoughts?

09:54:42 Athena's SA - KNNs

not dead I mean retitred

09:54:28 Athena's SA - KNNs

well that stud is dead so it'd have to be the most recent one. Except that match also gave me an EEE with a glass

09:52:39 Rapcoon | Jester

I'd probably repeat, that first EWE she threw has shit training but decent production >,>

09:48:32 Athena's SA - KNNs

It's her last year and she's given me 2 EWE so I don't know if I should do a repeat or just throw her at a random boy
-HEE Click-

09:45:33 Rapcoon | Jester

average wild pony x'D

ooh good girl!

Red Panda Hollow

09:44:59 Athena's SA-PON

Her however...she was nice this time around
-HEE Click-

Red Panda Hollow

09:44:33 Athena's SA-PON

She's been such a little bitch

09:42:56 Rapcoon | Jester

It'll probably be her very last foal lol

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September 16, 2018 06:56 PM

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Hello all! I am looking for critique I

(And help on making my art better). Don't be scared to tell me if it's horrible, I can handle it.

Will update if I finish more pieces

First piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/CxH3Z298/Untitled18-3.jpg

Second Piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/nhvdRQkf/Untitled19.jpg

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:51 PM by Ifaga Arabians

September 16, 2018 06:58 PM

Andraste Equine

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The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

September 16, 2018 07:07 PM

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Andraste Equine said:
The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

Fixed

September 16, 2018 07:22 PM

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I think this is a great start!

It's not sloppy or hard to look at.

I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!

great job!

September 16, 2018 07:23 PM

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Sunset Equestrian said:
I think this is a great start!
It's not sloppy or hard to look at.
I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!
great job!

Thank you! I've been working on shading and highlights. This piece required it

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:25 PM by Ifaga Arabians

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