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07:06:02

Oh you're cute -HEE Click-

Tamarack Mountain

07:05:56 Opal

well she is pretty -Click-

Rubygem

06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well im gonna go bye

Rubygem

06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

thanks (:

06:56:04 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby

Rubygem

06:53:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D

06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ

Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol

06:38:02 Anna/Jewel

Zwquine- I like the first one

06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ

Procrastinated so hard I did this
-Click-

Also lol
-Click-

05:05:12 Rose

Oh hello -HEE Click- <3

Nightingales Ridge

05:05:11 Issy

Wow Sierra hes gorgeous

Nightingales Ridge

05:04:11 Issy

Very nice Brody 😊

Calela Eventing

01:30:30 Cali

Hey Win

01:27:29 River / Brody

Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-

11:43:11 Win | Water

Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.

Red Horizon Ranch

11:42:03 Red

He's so pretty Win

11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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07:06:02

Oh you're cute -HEE Click-

Tamarack Mountain

07:05:56 Opal

well she is pretty -Click-

Rubygem

06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well im gonna go bye

Rubygem

06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

thanks (:

06:56:04 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby

Rubygem

06:53:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D

06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ

Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol

06:38:02 Anna/Jewel

Zwquine- I like the first one

06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ

Procrastinated so hard I did this
-Click-

Also lol
-Click-

05:05:12 Rose

Oh hello -HEE Click- <3

Nightingales Ridge

05:05:11 Issy

Wow Sierra hes gorgeous

Nightingales Ridge

05:04:11 Issy

Very nice Brody 😊

Calela Eventing

01:30:30 Cali

Hey Win

01:27:29 River / Brody

Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-

11:43:11 Win | Water

Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.

Red Horizon Ranch

11:42:03 Red

He's so pretty Win

11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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