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Sweet Valley
07:32:39 Anna/Jewel
Hi guys!
J and B
07:02:01 Catalina
Thank you Opal!
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:49 Opal
congrats
J and B
06:56:28 Catalina
Just tooting my own horn for a minute bc I actually never expected to win a HEWG
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:08 Cali
Thanks, this is the first horror\murder mystery I've made so I am quite self-conscious about it
FirstLightFarms
06:50:32 puck
No they have a definite vibe to them that suits a darker story
Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)

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Sweet Valley
07:32:39 Anna/Jewel
Hi guys!
J and B
07:02:01 Catalina
Thank you Opal!
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:49 Opal
congrats
J and B
06:56:28 Catalina
Just tooting my own horn for a minute bc I actually never expected to win a HEWG
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:08 Cali
Thanks, this is the first horror\murder mystery I've made so I am quite self-conscious about it
FirstLightFarms
06:50:32 puck
No they have a definite vibe to them that suits a darker story
Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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