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Sweet Valley
10:23:33 Anna/Jewel
Well.. Ouch. 450k??? How many riders do you HAVE?
God is Mighty Stable
10:23:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Athena
Same, 15k sounds so nice
Red Panda Hollow
10:22:39 Athena's SA-PON
mine here was 55k and on my main my riders are like 450k lol I'd love only 15k
Sweet Valley
10:21:46 Anna/Jewel
Pay All Riders. Total Paycheck: 14,800

Yikesss
😁😕😦
Two Trees Stables
10:21:44 Willow ~ TB Breeder
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Okay, first batch of TB foals, training wasn't too bad
Sweet Valley
10:21:18 Anna/Jewel
Ouch.. All my riders are pissed at me cuz I have no ebs to pay them.. Gosh.
Rising Stars Stable
10:20:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Thank you Anna
Dash and Duchess
10:20:53 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, thank you! I'm so happy TOT huge congrats on your girl too!
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thank you Willow!!
Sweet Valley
10:20:02 Anna/Jewel
Well its nice RATINGS as well :)
London Estates
10:19:58 Rainy/Fritzi
ohh ? one of my horses was spotlighted yesterday but I didn't see help
Rising Stars Stable
10:19:24 Willow ~ AA Breeder
*training, not ratings, XD
Rising Stars Stable
10:19:03 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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Very nice ratings
Sweet Valley
10:18:49 Anna/Jewel
Beautiful Brindle, Wild Hills!
Rising Stars Stable
10:18:22 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
NICE! Her art turned out so good
Glacier Bay Cove
10:17:55 Arctic Katz
Nice horse, Wild Hills
KPH Equestrian
10:17:52 Rapcoon | Jester
oh DD, what a good girl!!😍
Rising Stars Stable
10:17:46 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I'm pulling embryos next year from her, wish me luck
Red Panda Hollow
10:17:43 Athena's SA-PON
thats still impressive though
Dash and Duchess
10:17:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo KPH did i show you?
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🥹 my first AU wk 4 since my first WWW filly <3
KPH Equestrian
10:16:19 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
x'D her bravery's probably gonna suck lmao

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Sweet Valley
10:23:33 Anna/Jewel
Well.. Ouch. 450k??? How many riders do you HAVE?
God is Mighty Stable
10:23:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Athena
Same, 15k sounds so nice
Red Panda Hollow
10:22:39 Athena's SA-PON
mine here was 55k and on my main my riders are like 450k lol I'd love only 15k
Sweet Valley
10:21:46 Anna/Jewel
Pay All Riders. Total Paycheck: 14,800

Yikesss
😁😕😦
Two Trees Stables
10:21:44 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Okay, first batch of TB foals, training wasn't too bad
Sweet Valley
10:21:18 Anna/Jewel
Ouch.. All my riders are pissed at me cuz I have no ebs to pay them.. Gosh.
Rising Stars Stable
10:20:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Thank you Anna
Dash and Duchess
10:20:53 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, thank you! I'm so happy TOT huge congrats on your girl too!
-
thank you Willow!!
Sweet Valley
10:20:02 Anna/Jewel
Well its nice RATINGS as well :)
London Estates
10:19:58 Rainy/Fritzi
ohh ? one of my horses was spotlighted yesterday but I didn't see help
Rising Stars Stable
10:19:24 Willow ~ AA Breeder
*training, not ratings, XD
Rising Stars Stable
10:19:03 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Very nice ratings
Sweet Valley
10:18:49 Anna/Jewel
Beautiful Brindle, Wild Hills!
Rising Stars Stable
10:18:22 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
NICE! Her art turned out so good
Glacier Bay Cove
10:17:55 Arctic Katz
Nice horse, Wild Hills
KPH Equestrian
10:17:52 Rapcoon | Jester
oh DD, what a good girl!!😍
Rising Stars Stable
10:17:46 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I'm pulling embryos next year from her, wish me luck
Red Panda Hollow
10:17:43 Athena's SA-PON
thats still impressive though
Dash and Duchess
10:17:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo KPH did i show you?
-HEE Click-
🥹 my first AU wk 4 since my first WWW filly <3
KPH Equestrian
10:16:19 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
x'D her bravery's probably gonna suck lmao

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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