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Lunalovegood
01:19:00 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch, too much rain :(
But then again I don’t like the sun or snow
*reconsiders XD*
Transformers Acres
01:18:51 Geek, Eek
Loony

Do NOT come to America. It's shit right now.
Lunalovegood
01:18:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch
I’m in England :)
Dash and Duchess
01:18:18 DD | ~Squizard~
I honestly can't decide if I'm mad or not at my parents for passing on my skipping a few grades 🤣 I ended up on the normal timeline lol
Snitches' Stitches
01:18:00 Snitch
Loony
lmao. What country are you in if you don't mind my asking?
The Old Gods
01:17:38 Void Malign
yeah, you don't wanna come to america. it sucks here
Angels angels
01:17:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivy
Got a shot
Lunalovegood
01:16:53 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy cool
*Walks out Chat and begs parents to let us all move to America*
After a severe chat about being made of money I am back XD
Snitches' Stitches
01:16:52 Snitch
Ivy
That's what a lot of me and my friends did. Our senior years were just college classes and a few fun electives. Doing that really helped me complete my 3 majors in 4 years, so 10/10 recommend
Angels angels
01:16:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took a couple college classes in highschool too. But the two biology classes didn't count because they did them through a community college so they didn't transfer to the university system the same. I had to retake them in college:/
Crestwood Eq.
01:16:02 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

why
Crestwood Eq.
01:14:50 Ivy / poison ivy
i'm going to graduate highschool as a 16 year old so i'm going to do college classes for a year before i actually go to college
Angels angels
01:14:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My arm hurts Dx
Lunalovegood
01:12:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch intresting…

Ivy ooh nice :)

Cozmic My friend forgets hers and blames the fact that she forgot them on other people
Angels angels
01:11:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took two years off after high-school before college so I am normally a bit older than most of my classmates
Crestwood Eq.
01:11:46 Ivy / poison ivy
until i skipped a grade, i was always a year ahead in math
Snitches' Stitches
01:11:08 Snitch
My college only had an entrance exam for language. Math/english placement was based on ACT scores
Crestwood Eq.
01:10:46 Ivy / poison ivy
I entered early too. Wylder, who turn 14 in june is going into 8th grade because he started a year later than me
Cozmic Elite
01:10:01 
I almost got held back a year, didn't realize I needed glasses til grade 8. Couldn't see what I was learning Lol
Angels angels
01:09:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Same in college with the lower level maths. You could take a test to skip them but that was too much work lol

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Lunalovegood
01:19:00 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch, too much rain :(
But then again I don’t like the sun or snow
*reconsiders XD*
Transformers Acres
01:18:51 Geek, Eek
Loony

Do NOT come to America. It's shit right now.
Lunalovegood
01:18:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch
I’m in England :)
Dash and Duchess
01:18:18 DD | ~Squizard~
I honestly can't decide if I'm mad or not at my parents for passing on my skipping a few grades 🤣 I ended up on the normal timeline lol
Snitches' Stitches
01:18:00 Snitch
Loony
lmao. What country are you in if you don't mind my asking?
The Old Gods
01:17:38 Void Malign
yeah, you don't wanna come to america. it sucks here
Angels angels
01:17:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ivy
Got a shot
Lunalovegood
01:16:53 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy cool
*Walks out Chat and begs parents to let us all move to America*
After a severe chat about being made of money I am back XD
Snitches' Stitches
01:16:52 Snitch
Ivy
That's what a lot of me and my friends did. Our senior years were just college classes and a few fun electives. Doing that really helped me complete my 3 majors in 4 years, so 10/10 recommend
Angels angels
01:16:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took a couple college classes in highschool too. But the two biology classes didn't count because they did them through a community college so they didn't transfer to the university system the same. I had to retake them in college:/
Crestwood Eq.
01:16:02 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

why
Crestwood Eq.
01:14:50 Ivy / poison ivy
i'm going to graduate highschool as a 16 year old so i'm going to do college classes for a year before i actually go to college
Angels angels
01:14:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My arm hurts Dx
Lunalovegood
01:12:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Snitch intresting…

Ivy ooh nice :)

Cozmic My friend forgets hers and blames the fact that she forgot them on other people
Angels angels
01:11:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took two years off after high-school before college so I am normally a bit older than most of my classmates
Crestwood Eq.
01:11:46 Ivy / poison ivy
until i skipped a grade, i was always a year ahead in math
Snitches' Stitches
01:11:08 Snitch
My college only had an entrance exam for language. Math/english placement was based on ACT scores
Crestwood Eq.
01:10:46 Ivy / poison ivy
I entered early too. Wylder, who turn 14 in june is going into 8th grade because he started a year later than me
Cozmic Elite
01:10:01 
I almost got held back a year, didn't realize I needed glasses til grade 8. Couldn't see what I was learning Lol
Angels angels
01:09:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Same in college with the lower level maths. You could take a test to skip them but that was too much work lol

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 3326
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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