Horse Eden : Critique?

Ravenwood Farm

02:19:03

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I'm pleased with her training :)

Alpine Acres

02:13:07 Lily

Sun
unused pastures can be converted into memorials :)
Pastures can be purchased on the Upgrades page

Sundance

02:04:20 Sun/Sunny/Rose

How do I do a memorial of one of my horses in my page?

pandemoniu_m

01:59:55 pheezy

lone star
i remember having to get the same exact shots done. i was being babysat by some sketchy family members. dog bit my arm and the dad of the family put the dog down before it could be teated for rabies. i can't even go back to the ER i went to because the family never paid for the whole thing which was nearly 2k so little 7 year old me was barred from the whole hospital. american healthcare smh

Ravenwood Farm

01:58:57

Oof very sorry about that, The Lone Star, that sounds sucky and stressful. But I'm glad you were able to get those shots in the end, very important

Classic Fortune

01:56:39 Clau/Spring

Penta
Thanks!!

Lilac Fields

01:56:27 Lillie

thanks yall:)

Pentagram Stables

01:55:36 Penta - KNNs

His training will tell eventually, and his foals.

The Lone Star

01:55:31

Ugh. I just had my rabies shots. It was traumatizing. I had to have two in my arm. Then ten around the bite. Then two more in each arm and two in each thigh and they hurt like HELL. I'm also dealing with some racial garbage. I was sent away from the ER yesterday in the city and they told me they weren't going to give me the shots because they didn't believe it was serious because the skin wasn't visibly broken. I had to go to the CLSC in my community to get the shots done.

Classic Fortune

01:54:39 Clau/Spring

Penta
How can I know in the future if he is good or not?? sorry, i'm not too experienced with WWW.

Pentagram Stables

01:53:00 Penta - KNNs

too soon to tell

Classic Fortune

01:52:15 Clau/Spring

He is my first WWW bred-home horse, looking at his training, is he gonna be a great show horse and stallion??
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MakeEm Fancy

01:46:39 Ally 💜

Thanks :)

Snitches' Stitches

01:45:54 Snitch

Congrats Ally!

Angels angels

01:45:13 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Even woeksheet for school I can download and open om the notes app to write on them

Angels angels

01:43:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I only ever type on HEE on it anyways. I hand write my notes on a special notes app

MakeEm Fancy

01:41:04 Ally 💜

I just reached level 100 in explore :D

Angels angels

01:40:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mine has a keyboard that came with the case but I don't even know where it is because I have never used it lol

Lilac Fields

01:39:50 Lillie

Jp
thats cool too, I thought about the option of a keyboard tablet but I figured it would be just like my laptop lol

Angels angels

01:38:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah lol i have had mine a few years now and it only has a couple scratches on the pen from my cats trying to bite it lol

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Ravenwood Farm

02:19:03

-HEE Click-
I'm pleased with her training :)

Alpine Acres

02:13:07 Lily

Sun
unused pastures can be converted into memorials :)
Pastures can be purchased on the Upgrades page

Sundance

02:04:20 Sun/Sunny/Rose

How do I do a memorial of one of my horses in my page?

pandemoniu_m

01:59:55 pheezy

Ravenwood Farm

01:58:57

Oof very sorry about that, The Lone Star, that sounds sucky and stressful. But I'm glad you were able to get those shots in the end, very important

Classic Fortune

01:56:39 Clau/Spring

Penta
Thanks!!

Lilac Fields

01:56:27 Lillie

thanks yall:)

Pentagram Stables

01:55:36 Penta - KNNs

His training will tell eventually, and his foals.

The Lone Star

01:55:31

Classic Fortune

01:54:39 Clau/Spring

Penta
How can I know in the future if he is good or not?? sorry, i'm not too experienced with WWW.

Pentagram Stables

01:53:00 Penta - KNNs

too soon to tell

Classic Fortune

01:52:15 Clau/Spring

He is my first WWW bred-home horse, looking at his training, is he gonna be a great show horse and stallion??
-HEE Click-

MakeEm Fancy

01:46:39 Ally 💜

Thanks :)

Snitches' Stitches

01:45:54 Snitch

Congrats Ally!

Angels angels

01:45:13 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Even woeksheet for school I can download and open om the notes app to write on them

Angels angels

01:43:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I only ever type on HEE on it anyways. I hand write my notes on a special notes app

MakeEm Fancy

01:41:04 Ally 💜

I just reached level 100 in explore :D

Angels angels

01:40:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mine has a keyboard that came with the case but I don't even know where it is because I have never used it lol

Lilac Fields

01:39:50 Lillie

Jp
thats cool too, I thought about the option of a keyboard tablet but I figured it would be just like my laptop lol

Angels angels

01:38:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah lol i have had mine a few years now and it only has a couple scratches on the pen from my cats trying to bite it lol

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August 8, 2017 04:08 PM

Casanova

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Looking for critique on this art piece:

https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg

** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!

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August 8, 2017 04:22 PM

Pyramid Equestrian

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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)

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August 8, 2017 04:23 PM

Casanova

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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)

Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)

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August 8, 2017 04:25 PM

Sagamore Farms

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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background

- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.

- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!

- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse

Lighting

The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body

- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.

- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.

- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail

- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.

- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory

- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.

I hope this helps!

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August 8, 2017 04:41 PM

Casanova

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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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