Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 192   Season: Fall   
$: 0
Forecast: Moderate Temperatures and Overcast
Forecast:
Mon 05:53pm  
Stables Online:  130 
Chatbox
Valhalla Acreage
05:51:43 Eivor
-HEE Click-
WEE AA filly who is ZZ for silver no roan or sabino either
Disney Acres
05:43:20 
WEE TB filly blood bay 90k
-HEE Click-
Fire and Ice
05:42:46 
EEE WB filly copper bay with Tobi 20k or send an offer
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
05:41:33 Jessie
EEE 1/4 filly splash appy 4k or send an offer
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
05:31:36 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
Connally Stud
05:24:18 Senda
for sale
-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
05:17:06 
-HEE Click-

Brindles
Chimera
Manchados
Sootys
Peacock Appys!
Sunset horses
05:15:28 
Last Call! Open to offers on all, very flexible with pricing

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
05:12:57 Snow❆Gem
Blue (Movement) stained glass horse for sale 95k obo.
Gem
05:08:48 Tier 1 Artist
ISO W XC RID 2 year old colts. Preferably with training

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Sales
View Main Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Valhalla Acreage
05:51:43 Eivor
-HEE Click-
WEE AA filly who is ZZ for silver no roan or sabino either
Disney Acres
05:43:20 
WEE TB filly blood bay 90k
-HEE Click-
Fire and Ice
05:42:46 
EEE WB filly copper bay with Tobi 20k or send an offer
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
05:41:33 Jessie
EEE 1/4 filly splash appy 4k or send an offer
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
05:31:36 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
Connally Stud
05:24:18 Senda
for sale
-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
05:17:06 
-HEE Click-

Brindles
Chimera
Manchados
Sootys
Peacock Appys!
Sunset horses
05:15:28 
Last Call! Open to offers on all, very flexible with pricing

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
05:12:57 Snow❆Gem
Blue (Movement) stained glass horse for sale 95k obo.
Gem
05:08:48 Tier 1 Artist
ISO W XC RID 2 year old colts. Preferably with training

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Help? May 24, 2024 11:59 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1709
#1212799
Give Award
After almost 6 months of drowning under the load of school, work, and animals I finally have had some time to pick up the ole art pen. I'm SO rusty and I feel like these look odd or are missing something but I cannot put my finger on what I did wrong. I would love to get some tips or ideas about what looks funky.
Thanks loads~
.
This one was a rider removal.. it was not fun
.

Edited at May 25, 2024 08:40 AM by Pegasus Lane
Help? May 25, 2024 12:09 AM


Caprina Springs
 
Posts: 890
#1212805
Give Award
i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them

Edited at May 25, 2024 12:11 AM by Caprina Springs
Help? May 25, 2024 08:43 AM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1709
#1212864
Give Award

Caprina Springs said:
i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them


Omg thank you!!
Images have been updated on the first post if anyone else has criticism :) Links are clicky so you can really see all the details ❤
Help? May 25, 2024 08:00 PM


Angels angels
 
Posts: 1275
#1212992
Give Award
The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!

Edited at May 25, 2024 08:01 PM by Angels angels
Help? May 25, 2024 08:10 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1709
#1212995
Give Award

Angels angels said:
The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!


That's exactly what I was looking for, thank you! <3
Help? May 26, 2024 03:41 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1709
#1213233
Give Award
Alrighty, here are the current pieces. Thank you both for the advice! If there's any nit-picking to be done about anything else please don't be afraid to offend me :) It's quite hard to do lol
.
Untitled3-1-1.png
.
Untitled8-1.png
Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
Posts: 3277
#1215350
Give Award
Wow! they look awesome with those little edits! your art is stunning!
Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
Posts: 3277
#1215351
Give Award
double post erg

Edited at May 30, 2024 08:09 PM by Dash and Duchess

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh