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06:39:23 Penta - KNNs
Longhorn - you won'[t know for sure, until he's had about 8 weeks of training
Wolf Dancer
06:38:03 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Dang Nice! Glad to see the spotty butts are being nice to you!
LonghornRanch
06:37:56 
Would he be worth keeping as a stud?
-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
06:37:50 Keonah
KNN are usually pretty rude XD
Wolf Dancer
06:37:46 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Yea I want to learn how to use BM, but at the same time like even that seems like work >.> And with school about to start a long with training for 3 different sports, working 2 jobs, and working with horses I have no time lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:36:43 Athena - AAs
I'm jealous. My KNNs were rude
Nordic Designs
06:33:17 Keonah
-HEE Click- this is the highlight of my season over here
Sunset River Arabian
06:33:00 Athena - AAs
I just don't want to do dressage anymore. Too much to keep track of doing all 3
Nordic Designs
06:32:26 Keonah
mine has unintentially been downsized due to my lack of participation in hee *sobs*
Nordic Designs
06:31:52 Keonah
ah makes sense, thats been me, Ive been busy as shit for over a year and just have not been able to keep up with it. I had a month or two at the end/beginning of the year that I was rockin and rolling with it but then chaos commenced and held ever since bahha
Sunset River Arabian
06:28:06 Athena - AAs
me currently downsizing my SD lol
Wolf Dancer
06:27:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
I have a ton of SD stock just not really trained I sorta get a show high then low then high then lol, like I get excited about it for like a week or two then get burnt out, or RL happens, and forget to show/train lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:25:57 Athena - AAs
First W of the yearr and of course it was the one SH out of all my PONs
-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
06:25:47 Keonah
i thought you hadnt got into it yet
Wolf Dancer
06:23:48 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Lol My SD are not very trained >>
Nordic Designs
06:23:20 Keonah
so 198 to 256 so a little over 56% were W with absolute flailing for breeding XD as the training is at wk 6 for 7 and 8 year olds and wk3 for everything younger than that XD
Wilder ISHs
06:22:28 Wilder/Wild/Sun
Oh wow I just guess the correct number in 5 guesses on the first try. Lucky!
Wolf Dancer
06:19:18 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
That's still really good lol I haven't gotten to SD breeding yet lol
Rio_The_Appy
06:18:22 
-HEE Click-
Here's a working link
Nordic Designs
06:17:42 Keonah
Oup.. Ok minus like 30 from the W list becuase theres some leftover W from two months ago in one of the barn but still good odds

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Pentagram Stables
06:39:23 Penta - KNNs
Longhorn - you won'[t know for sure, until he's had about 8 weeks of training
Wolf Dancer
06:38:03 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Dang Nice! Glad to see the spotty butts are being nice to you!
LonghornRanch
06:37:56 
Would he be worth keeping as a stud?
-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
06:37:50 Keonah
KNN are usually pretty rude XD
Wolf Dancer
06:37:46 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Yea I want to learn how to use BM, but at the same time like even that seems like work >.> And with school about to start a long with training for 3 different sports, working 2 jobs, and working with horses I have no time lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:36:43 Athena - AAs
I'm jealous. My KNNs were rude
Nordic Designs
06:33:17 Keonah
-HEE Click- this is the highlight of my season over here
Sunset River Arabian
06:33:00 Athena - AAs
I just don't want to do dressage anymore. Too much to keep track of doing all 3
Nordic Designs
06:32:26 Keonah
mine has unintentially been downsized due to my lack of participation in hee *sobs*
Nordic Designs
06:31:52 Keonah
ah makes sense, thats been me, Ive been busy as shit for over a year and just have not been able to keep up with it. I had a month or two at the end/beginning of the year that I was rockin and rolling with it but then chaos commenced and held ever since bahha
Sunset River Arabian
06:28:06 Athena - AAs
me currently downsizing my SD lol
Wolf Dancer
06:27:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
I have a ton of SD stock just not really trained I sorta get a show high then low then high then lol, like I get excited about it for like a week or two then get burnt out, or RL happens, and forget to show/train lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:25:57 Athena - AAs
First W of the yearr and of course it was the one SH out of all my PONs
-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
06:25:47 Keonah
i thought you hadnt got into it yet
Wolf Dancer
06:23:48 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
Lol My SD are not very trained >>
Nordic Designs
06:23:20 Keonah
so 198 to 256 so a little over 56% were W with absolute flailing for breeding XD as the training is at wk 6 for 7 and 8 year olds and wk3 for everything younger than that XD
Wilder ISHs
06:22:28 Wilder/Wild/Sun
Oh wow I just guess the correct number in 5 guesses on the first try. Lucky!
Wolf Dancer
06:19:18 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
That's still really good lol I haven't gotten to SD breeding yet lol
Rio_The_Appy
06:18:22 
-HEE Click-
Here's a working link
Nordic Designs
06:17:42 Keonah
Oup.. Ok minus like 30 from the W list becuase theres some leftover W from two months ago in one of the barn but still good odds

Gem! Hemalicious! Wolf!

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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