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Ponies heaven
03:21:19 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
Greenheart Stables
03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled
Bioshock Manor
03:14:26 Storm
Its very dark. Maybe a little more light in the piece?
Calela Eventing
03:13:43 Cali
-Click-
What do we think?
Tobiano Lady
03:11:21 Tobi | Nix
Goddamn Green *.*
Bioshock Manor
03:03:17 Storm
Lol
Valhalla Acreage
03:02:53 Eivor
I love how the accountant is like your -69K in debt but all your ebs is in your savings account so you don't spend it
Greenheart Stables
02:53:37 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
Uugh he couldn't be any more gorgeous, literally spited me when I said he was gonna flop lol
Bioshock Manor
02:49:04 Storm
Yikes. Sounds like my life, but I can't get away yet. At least i have school to look forward to. Even with a speech class I dread
Deep Ocean
02:47:29 ♘Tosk
it was horrible. Worst 9 days xD but i survived.
Bioshock Manor
02:47:01 Storm
Oh haha. I'm watching him now for sure though XD love how he did. Hopefully the trip went smooth
Deep Ocean
02:46:22 ♘Tosk
No, i just returned from my work trip last night and still had to train from last week ^^
Bioshock Manor
02:45:52 Storm
We can train now??
Lucky
02:42:49 luvky
Gosky
woah that is a nice wk 7
At Wit's End
02:40:16 Gosky
holy shet
-HEE Click-
Nightfall Dressage
02:39:52 Witchy
Thank you!
At Wit's End
02:38:16 Gosky
time to train from last week still.
Vancouver
02:33:31 Ana / Van
Around 4:15
Nightfall Dressage
02:32:51 Witchy
What time can I train again? I forgot
Morning Glory Farms
12:58:49 Terici/Dino/Trish
yes double cream will hide silver

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Ponies heaven
03:21:19 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
Greenheart Stables
03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled
Bioshock Manor
03:14:26 Storm
Its very dark. Maybe a little more light in the piece?
Calela Eventing
03:13:43 Cali
-Click-
What do we think?
Tobiano Lady
03:11:21 Tobi | Nix
Goddamn Green *.*
Bioshock Manor
03:03:17 Storm
Lol
Valhalla Acreage
03:02:53 Eivor
I love how the accountant is like your -69K in debt but all your ebs is in your savings account so you don't spend it
Greenheart Stables
02:53:37 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
Uugh he couldn't be any more gorgeous, literally spited me when I said he was gonna flop lol
Bioshock Manor
02:49:04 Storm
Yikes. Sounds like my life, but I can't get away yet. At least i have school to look forward to. Even with a speech class I dread
Deep Ocean
02:47:29 ♘Tosk
it was horrible. Worst 9 days xD but i survived.
Bioshock Manor
02:47:01 Storm
Oh haha. I'm watching him now for sure though XD love how he did. Hopefully the trip went smooth
Deep Ocean
02:46:22 ♘Tosk
No, i just returned from my work trip last night and still had to train from last week ^^
Bioshock Manor
02:45:52 Storm
We can train now??
Lucky
02:42:49 luvky
Gosky
woah that is a nice wk 7
At Wit's End
02:40:16 Gosky
holy shet
-HEE Click-
Nightfall Dressage
02:39:52 Witchy
Thank you!
At Wit's End
02:38:16 Gosky
time to train from last week still.
Vancouver
02:33:31 Ana / Van
Around 4:15
Nightfall Dressage
02:32:51 Witchy
What time can I train again? I forgot
Morning Glory Farms
12:58:49 Terici/Dino/Trish
yes double cream will hide silver

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Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 07:03 PM


Rosesong Stables
 
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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 10:53 PM


Rosesong Stables
 
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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.
I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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