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Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
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12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
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Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
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Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

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Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
-
Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

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March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/411yx0ki9/CONTEST2.jpg

This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!

Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses

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March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

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March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD

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March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isnt really standing out and its super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

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March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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