Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Fall   
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pandemoniu_m
04:01:45 pheezy
still gotta gene test her
i just hope she isnt RnRn 💔
Gypsy Family Farm
03:58:18 
Oooh, she's purty. That belly shading is something else.
pandemoniu_m
03:55:50 pheezy
-HEE Click-
worky now?
Gypsy Family Farm
03:55:03 
Click no worky.
pandemoniu_m
03:54:32 pheezy
i agree but she needs a new name now lol
Angels angels
03:49:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oooo much better lol
pandemoniu_m
03:47:27 pheezy
-HEE Click-
better angel?
Echo Creek
03:43:54 Echo | River
Chestnut horse stock?
Angels angels
03:43:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Try to get a better splash
It's A Cinch
03:41:14 Sasha - Sash
oh my gosh Pheezy! shes gorgeous!
Angels angels
03:40:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes
Angels angels
03:40:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
5 minutes before I can leave then about an hour until I get home
pandemoniu_m
03:40:10 pheezy
-HEE Click-
reroll?
pandemoniu_m
03:39:54 pheezy
i just got home thank god
It's A Cinch
03:39:40 Sasha - Sash
true thank you!
Angels angels
03:39:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I want to go home
pandemoniu_m
03:38:49 pheezy
i wont say much about it because it might be sales chat speak, but just a tip Sasha: if you want it gone lower the price or just FR *shrug*
It's A Cinch
03:37:25 Sasha - Sash
i know....
Valhalla Acreage
03:37:11 Eivor
Sash that belongs in sale chat
Angels angels
03:37:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The foal

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pandemoniu_m
04:01:45 pheezy
still gotta gene test her
i just hope she isnt RnRn 💔
Gypsy Family Farm
03:58:18 
Oooh, she's purty. That belly shading is something else.
pandemoniu_m
03:55:50 pheezy
-HEE Click-
worky now?
Gypsy Family Farm
03:55:03 
Click no worky.
pandemoniu_m
03:54:32 pheezy
i agree but she needs a new name now lol
Angels angels
03:49:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oooo much better lol
pandemoniu_m
03:47:27 pheezy
-HEE Click-
better angel?
Echo Creek
03:43:54 Echo | River
Chestnut horse stock?
Angels angels
03:43:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Try to get a better splash
It's A Cinch
03:41:14 Sasha - Sash
oh my gosh Pheezy! shes gorgeous!
Angels angels
03:40:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes
Angels angels
03:40:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
5 minutes before I can leave then about an hour until I get home
pandemoniu_m
03:40:10 pheezy
-HEE Click-
reroll?
pandemoniu_m
03:39:54 pheezy
i just got home thank god
It's A Cinch
03:39:40 Sasha - Sash
true thank you!
Angels angels
03:39:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I want to go home
pandemoniu_m
03:38:49 pheezy
i wont say much about it because it might be sales chat speak, but just a tip Sasha: if you want it gone lower the price or just FR *shrug*
It's A Cinch
03:37:25 Sasha - Sash
i know....
Valhalla Acreage
03:37:11 Eivor
Sash that belongs in sale chat
Angels angels
03:37:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The foal

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
:D

Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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