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EWW
WWE
Ambrosia
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Wild WWE PON mare up 5/6 week 4. Pm reasonable offers, no trades
Horse Haven Stables
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Includes:
WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
-
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194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
BlueBirdFalls
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Tons of horses for sale!
WB, KNN, PON, ISH
RO Foals that are left will get FR.
Wc through Colors
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Boulder Creek
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Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show:

- Cross Country
- Matchy Matchy
- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

Everyone is welcome to join!
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Win EBs!

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Fluffy's Cosy Home
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Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 07:03 PM


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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 10:53 PM


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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.
I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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