Vellum Elites
11:19:18 Vell
Thank you, I appreciate all the insight!
Sagruesal
11:18:18 Ru
Vell
It comes with practice, don't worry. There's no particular need to search for it
MC Ace
11:17:55 McFossil
Ru why would your line go down? Wouldn't new options be an opportunity to increase the strength?
Vellum Elites
11:17:31 Vell
It is definitely hard to pinpoint my voice but I am sure the more I write the easier it will be.
MC Ace
11:16:56 McFossil
Nope, no AI detected. It feels authentic, as in the choice of words and candor are your own. Gypsy is right AI is good, but obvious. Especially if you have been writing for a while.
Vellum Elites
11:16:44 Vell
I am always so concerned with my word choice being mistaken for AI usage, people at work always think I write my emails with AI but the reality is I just read a ton of books haha
Gypsy Family Farm
11:15:50 
Oooh, that chestnut mare is on FIRE.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:15:11 
Oh, no, not at all, I was just agreeing with MC about authors finding their voices.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:14:39 
I'd make one change; switch "horrors abound" to "horrors arise". (It's just more poetic in keeping with your linguistic choices in the rest of the piece.)
Vellum Elites
11:13:32 Vell
Does it seem like I did?
Vellum Elites
11:13:24 Vell
I did not use any AI to write that, that was all my own thoughts.
Sagruesal
11:13:10 Ru
Ace
That also means my line is going down for a while, from #11 to #14
Gypsy Family Farm
11:13:01 
Also I very much agree with MC; AI is SO obvious. What makes a good writer is learning your own voice and leaning into it (but also taking editing well).
Vellum Elites
11:12:58 Vell
Thank you Gypsy! I don't write much but every once in awhile I will get into a flow state and put something down.
Sagruesal
11:12:04 Ru
Ace, what a beautie! Strong colors are welcome
Gypsy Family Farm
11:11:55 
Speaking as a published writer, Vell, that's a very good piece. "Carapace of destruction" is a stupendous image.
Dash and Duchess
11:11:55 DD (#2)
Ugh >.< I swear if i can't find this stupid stock i'm going to scream lol
MC Ace
11:11:11 McFossil
Nice! It's good seeing more strong horses arise.
MC Ace
11:10:50 McFossil
That's a different flax chestnut.

-HEE Click-
Sagruesal
11:10:39 Ru
Hi Ace!
RID suddenly had an influx of strong stallions
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