MC Ace
11:30:24 McFossil
I am clear cut FR'ing all stock not all up WK7 for my SD. I messed this fillys training and I'm so glad I made a note because I almost FR'd her.
-HEE Click-
MC Ace
11:25:50 McFossil
LOL Computers, that is true Gypsy.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:24:53 
Exactly; now we folk with big vocabularies are mistaken for computers! You really do have great word usage and a very distinctive style. Write more!
MC Ace
11:23:04 McFossil
Nice boy RU and both parents on the LB. That's sweet.
MC Ace
11:22:07 McFossil
I do enjoy using my own lines. Something about see my horses pop all over a pedigree. LOL But a little outside help can be great for a little jump on the LB's.

Vell Absolutely you are welcome. And feel free to reach out for insight. Gypsy is a great resource and I know there are other writers and readers here on HEE that can offer constructive opinions.
Sagruesal
11:21:16 Ru
-HEE Click- picked up this boy so he's gonna freshen up my blood
Sagruesal
11:19:27 Ru
Ace
I haven't used outside studs for a while, like months? Should give them a chance next RO, I have plenty of mares to spare
Vellum Elites
11:19:18 Vell
Thank you, I appreciate all the insight!
Sagruesal
11:18:18 Ru
Vell
It comes with practice, don't worry. There's no particular need to search for it
MC Ace
11:17:55 McFossil
Ru why would your line go down? Wouldn't new options be an opportunity to increase the strength?
Vellum Elites
11:17:31 Vell
It is definitely hard to pinpoint my voice but I am sure the more I write the easier it will be.
MC Ace
11:16:56 McFossil
Nope, no AI detected. It feels authentic, as in the choice of words and candor are your own. Gypsy is right AI is good, but obvious. Especially if you have been writing for a while.
Vellum Elites
11:16:44 Vell
I am always so concerned with my word choice being mistaken for AI usage, people at work always think I write my emails with AI but the reality is I just read a ton of books haha
Gypsy Family Farm
11:15:50 
Oooh, that chestnut mare is on FIRE.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:15:11 
Oh, no, not at all, I was just agreeing with MC about authors finding their voices.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:14:39 
I'd make one change; switch "horrors abound" to "horrors arise". (It's just more poetic in keeping with your linguistic choices in the rest of the piece.)
Vellum Elites
11:13:32 Vell
Does it seem like I did?
Vellum Elites
11:13:24 Vell
I did not use any AI to write that, that was all my own thoughts.
Sagruesal
11:13:10 Ru
Ace
That also means my line is going down for a while, from #11 to #14
Gypsy Family Farm
11:13:01 
Also I very much agree with MC; AI is SO obvious. What makes a good writer is learning your own voice and leaning into it (but also taking editing well).
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Doras X Infin 159

Color: Silver Blood Bay Sabino
Horse Nbr: 32469485
Breed: Sport Horse
Sex: Mare
Birthdate: October 3, 2022
Age: Deceased
Birth Year: 159
Height: 16.3 Hands

Home: 
 Rainbow Bridge
Barn: Rainbow Bridge

Breeder: 
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Sire: Doras X Peach 156
Dam: InfinityDream 149
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Eventing Level: 5 Preliminary
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