Horse Eden : Critique Me Please!

07:40:21

Thank the lord your a filly

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07:38:00 Sun/Sunny

For sure. Her art is stunning. Grim always does amazing work. I love the piece she did that's on my X filly. Been waiting a long time to use that one

Dash and Duchess

07:37:19 DD (#2)

Sun, that's such a pretty name!! I hope she doesn't disappoint!

Sunstone Elite

07:36:30 Sun/Sunny

Iduna :) Hoping she's strong but I am excited to get her shine into my AA program

Dash and Duchess

07:32:02 DD (#2)

Oooo sun! Have you picked a name for her yet as well? :D

Angels angels

07:28:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Don't you hate when you have a cute outfit but it is painful to wear ;-;

Sunstone Elite

07:24:18 Sun/Sunny

Ahhh my AA girl's art is done and it's so freaking pretty I can't wait until I'm on my laptop and can put it on her 🤩

Willow Grove

07:23:31 Stalker of Chat

Welp. Im sold, ill see how she trains XD

Shamrock Equines

07:20:34 Crowley

Willow
I had a EEExWWW filly that turned out to be an WWE train really well.

Shamrock Equines

07:19:03 Crowley

Min

Willow Grove

07:18:35 Stalker of Chat

She is! That shine is irresistible
I guess I might see how she trains, she may surprise me

Minerva

07:17:23 Min

Oh but she's SO pretty!! And you never know until you try them!

Embervale Acres

07:17:01 Solar Phoenix

She might do alright, you could always see how her week 4 goes and decide then

Willow Grove

07:15:41 Stalker of Chat

Ok that reads like I had a stroke.
No way she trains well either, based on her parents* xD

Willow Grove

07:14:27 Stalker of Chat

I do not know what to do with this shiny little thing.. Theres no way she trains well based on either based on her parents 😒
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Embervale Acres

07:13:06 Solar Phoenix

Well...I was looking for one P at least, but I'll happily take it XD
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Hy Brasil

07:09:57 Croft

I have re rolls but she seems pretty perfect as she is -HEE Click-

Santana Rising

06:39:13 San

My RO was so crap, the only good thing was an WWE filly I wish was a colt and my svenned match resulted in an EEE colt that I would hsve kept for colour if he hadn't been ugly and plain 🤦🏻‍♀️

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06:32:33 Peep/sam

Alrighty bye

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06:29:54 Peep/sam

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Critique Me Please!

October 9, 2019 02:27 PM

Bridle Rock

Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!

Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty

Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour

A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:56 PM

Sagebrush

Posts: 3884
#463399
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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