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I would like some critiques on my art and prices, as i think i have gotten pretty well with doing it for the past months. :3
https://i.postimg.cc/0jwX2103/Untitled110.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/7Yxs4FPd/Untitled93-0.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/RhF2bCpk/Commission-14.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/MGM8nVL4/Commission-8.jpg
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https://i.postimg.cc/ZnSxmbNF/Commission-19.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/3xfBnVyX/Untitled78-20190915201600.png https://i.postimg.cc/qvFsGmHB/Anime-Acres-Banner.jpg
Edited at October 14, 2019 11:03 PM by Snowmass Horses
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I'm bad with exact pricing, but I would say you could hop on into high tier two with those pieces!
That aside, the only critiques that I have are that the mane + tail on the first one looks like it is done with a round non-pressure-sensitive brush, therefor it looks a bit rough and doesn't flow. It looks like you fixed it throughout the next several pieces.
Next thing is that the highlights look a bit dull. This is probably because you were using a pure white color with low opacity. For highlights I use either a pastel blue or pastel yellow color (depends if your lighting is warm or cool.) Very small brush size. 1-2 px on a pressure sensitive hard brush. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do this highlighting process for the horse and hair, but you really only need to do parts that you want to draw attention to (as well as anywhere sun hits the horse.) Don't over highlight! Applying these techniques will make the image crisper and less flat. I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s Time stamp: 32:36 Edited at October 15, 2019 06:32 PM by Trillium Acres
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Thanks, Trill, very helpful! :3
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Snowmass Horses said: Thanks, Trill, very helpful! :3
No problem ;D
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