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Art critique | help! February 28, 2020 02:06 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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So, I use ibisPaint x and I need help with this piece I'm making. I like it for the most point so far, but I know I want/need criticism to help me become better!

This is still a WIP, so it's not finished.

Critique I'm looking specifically:

-legs; front leg especially! I had to repaint a lot of this horse because of tack
-hair; does it need more volume? Like thickness? And more highlights?

-body prep!

Of course, I'm looking for anything and everything else too! Image is in post below.


Edited at February 28, 2020 02:07 PM by Quizzical Quarters
Art critique | help! February 28, 2020 02:06 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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Art critique | help! February 28, 2020 02:15 PM

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Hair-the volume is great,and the shape is pretty nice,but ypu need lighter highlights,not just a shape lighter than the base
Frong leg-it does loom a bit odd if you zoom in but otherwise its fine
Body prep-perfect,i see nothing wrong with it
O must point out though:grounding
Use the goosegrass brush on the eraser ant erase part of the hooves you feel should be
Art critique | help! February 28, 2020 11:02 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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still looking!
Art critique | help! February 29, 2020 06:37 AM


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To add to the post of Ladybird regarding grounding, I would add some stronger shadows on the legs where the horse touches the ground, especially because the light comes from behind and the horse has quite a long shadow cast on the grass. This calls for more aggressive shading even on the body of the horse in my opinion. For example, the butt could be less shiny and more dark, and the outline of the back, front left leg and back left leg could have a strong shine.
Art critique | help! February 29, 2020 09:48 AM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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Thank you!
Art critique | help! February 29, 2020 10:52 AM


Sagebrush
 
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Oh, I love that peice!
Art critique | help! February 29, 2020 03:03 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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This is has been finished! It's up for auction if interested.


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