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What could've made these pieces better? Things I should work on? Things that are good? Tier suggestions? Edited at July 14, 2020 05:53 PM by Little Wolf Creek
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I would say tier 3. Very good though
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Hello! I am an artist myself and I find your artwork great! If you are wondering a price, I would pay around 30-60k, but I am not that good at pricing lol. There are some things that need touching up, like the mane and tail and the color balance. The mane and tail stand out too much to where it doesn't really look natural. The color balance is the hue of the horse. The horses kind of look like they aren't actually in that background. The second one looks good on the color balance as well as the mane and tail. Overall they look amazing! Just practice more and it will be perfect <3
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Hi there. This is an incredible start. You do absolutely lovely body prep when it comes to cutting out the horse. You are also good at making the tone of the horse match with the tone of the background. The hair is where you fall short - it pops out from the overall composition of the overall piece. Work on making individual strands in tones that match not only the horse, but the hue of the overall piece. For example, the hair in the last example is far brighter and whiter than the horse itself, making it pop unnaturally from the background and horse's body. You do absolutely lovely shadows as far as the hair is concerned, for example, the mane in example 1 has beautiful shadow work. Make the hair more natural and you can sell your work for 45-75k easily.
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Thank you all! This really helped!
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