Horse Eden : Critiques and advice

JP Show Stables

08:19:06

Same Solar. Same. I have way too many.

Rain Plains

08:16:40 Kelan/Rain

It's the hardest thing when I have to cull a pretty SD

Embervale Acres

08:16:04 Solar Phoenix

I want to do more with SD, but I have to make myself be stricter with what I keep as main breeders XD

Vyrynth

08:16:02 Vy | Nyx

I really need to stop looking at horses for sale near meÂ…

Greenheart Stables

08:12:47 Green|Gren|Grenlin

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got this guy going to have he replace Sunny

Imperial Warmbloods

08:12:11 Imp/Impie

~ Solar
I hope she behaves for ya, :D

Dawns~Souls

08:11:35

This filly angers me -HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

08:10:34 Solar Phoenix

I'm hoping this girl does well next week, even if it's just one lol
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Imperial Warmbloods

08:10:30 Imp/Impie

~ Solar
Mhm. Very surprised and pleased with her, xD

Embervale Acres

08:09:17 Solar Phoenix

Strong little lady!

Imperial Warmbloods

08:08:13 Imp/Impie

If we`re talking about SDs..
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Kryptonite Knoll

08:06:59 Blue/K.K/FHANA16

I am into Dressage SD breeding

Mythological

08:03:10 Myth/Crowley/Grinch

Alyssa
As I said all up on WK3 is rare.

Rain
Ouch xD

Legacy Leagues

07:58:32 Alyssa

Silver
You may want to think of culling him. Not a SD breeder but I think they need to go up at all on week 3 to not be as weak, I think?

Rain Plains

07:57:49 Kelan/Rain

Myth!
Things are slower today finally. I can actually enjoy being on here instead of quickly signing in and doing the bare minimum. My barn manager has been doing all my showing lately and I feel the loss

Mythological

07:56:47 Myth/Crowley/Grinch

All up WK3 is rare.

God is Mighty Stable

07:56:26 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Good morning everyone!

Mythological

07:56:03 Myth/Crowley/Grinch

Rain!

Silver Creek

07:50:46

W3*

Silver Creek

07:50:37

She has a W4 so I can keep her!
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I do have a 1 of 2 boy who didn't go up W3 at all, not sure about him now
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January 3, 2021 04:12 PM

The Dude Ranch

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So I'm just starting out with doing manes and tails and so I messed around and made this this morning, what do you guys think?.

I know I have to work on drawing out the mane (I'm not a very good drawer when it comes to that lol) but what else could I work on.

Also I will be adding credits to it as well

Edited at January 3, 2021 04:12 PM by The Dude Ranch

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January 7, 2021 07:40 AM

Shadow Woods

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Not a bad start! Definitely play around with the brush settings to see what you can get. Also, on the tail did you leave a chunk of the hair from the original picture? I can see something behind the hair that you drew. When you can make manes and tails, you should probably make it so that it's not visible. It could use more dimension to the hair, try adding shadows and highlights, that should help!

Edit: add some hair flyaways and breakup some of the patches to make it look more natural

Edited at January 7, 2021 07:42 AM by Shadow Woods

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