WeepingEye'sManor
12:56:40 
Ohhh. Ok let me go check my horses for that then. Thanks, both of you.
WeepingEye'sManor
12:56:18 
Ah. Got it. For how long? Hasn't seemed to do anything yet.
Eyrie of the Stars
12:56:02 Eyrie
Weeping go exploring and the first time the horse spooks it'll tell you their bravery.
Blue Diamond
12:55:38 Bluey
explore with the specific horse
WeepingEye'sManor
12:55:13 
Like. Test for it.
WeepingEye'sManor
12:55:05 
How do I check bravery?
WeepingEye'sManor
12:52:28 
Very pretty. Excited to see where you take it!
Blue Diamond
12:51:16 Bluey
it isn't galloping, but this is the horse and setting
-Click-
the eagle:
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WeepingEye'sManor
12:49:55 
Aw. Still pretty. Y9u should give em a long mane!
Blue Diamond
12:48:51 Bluey
the filly's adult image:
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WeepingEye'sManor
12:48:26 
And you need to mail me a link kf you do that.
WeepingEye'sManor
12:48:12 
Ok. That would be gorgeous.
WeepingEye'sManor
12:47:56 
Yeah, got that insomnia. Autism's a treat. It's worse because of anxiety/excitement for the holiday, even if I can't quite feel it.
Blue Diamond
12:47:15 Bluey
i'm thinking a buckskin with a hawk above it
WeepingEye'sManor
12:47:08 
Oh she's gorgeous.
WeepingEye'sManor
12:46:46 
Awww. I adored Spirit. Still do.
Blue Diamond
12:46:14 Bluey
Also, can anyone help me figure out why I have a good feeling about her? I don't understand and I'm gonna breed the parents again
-HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
12:45:35 Bluey
insomnia?
Blue Diamond
12:45:22 Bluey
thank you, that one was a sold auction piece. I'm thinking of doing a spirit stallion of cimmaron inspired one. My fav movie as a kid
WeepingEye'sManor
12:44:58 
Anyone have any idea how I can waste 4 hours? Can't sleep. I've tried. :']
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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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