Santana Rising
04:48:16 San
Would have been smarter if I hadn't grabbed the one shard from the falls I've already had two of by mistake (while having none of the others) 🤦🏻‍♀️
ArcticLights
04:37:48 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Ah, smart :)
Santana Rising
04:36:27 San
I'm very content with the bits usually taking about 30 minutes to craft- that way I can get to exploring to find new shards right on time 😉
Motonemi
04:35:09 AL, mum to Nemi
If a multi-craft got added I would be really happy
Santana Rising
04:34:01 San
They used to be a few hours. I'm glad Eve shortened the time on them.
ArcticLights
04:27:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Huh, never realised that crafting time varies on the same item. I have crafted some bits and its been between 5 and 44 minutes crafting time so far?
Golden Crest
04:16:46 | Eve
I believe so, it sounds exciting as I have a fair few bits and the pieces stacked up across accounts
Santana Rising
04:13:05 San
A Valentine's one? Glad we don't have to wait for Easter or the next Capture Party. I've stocked up on bits, but I use them for training so they are already earning their keep
Golden Crest
04:11:35 | Eve
It is a February event, super excited for it
Santana Rising
04:01:00 San
Really curious about that event tab. I wonder when it will be announced (as well as the new background I keep coming across but which hasn't been officially released either)
Santana Rising
03:59:18 San
Maybe you accidentally clicked on the 'event' tab? I can see the items just fine
Flying Stud
03:59:15 
Never mind i clicked event...
Flying Stud
03:58:27 
Why is the store not showing items?
Santana Rising
03:35:02 San
-HEE Click- she is a nice surprise!
Golden Crest
03:28:08 | Eve
My advice would be: Lunge the pony and make sure there is no lameness. If the pony is broken in, make the owners ride it through walk, trot and canter before you hop on. Make sure the pony is loose in the paddock when you arrive and not already caught or in a small yard / stable. Make sure there is no sweat marks as that would indicate that the owners have made the horse tired before you got there. Ensure the owner picks up all 4 hooves in front of you etc. If you would like anymore advice you are welcome to send me a message :)
Kingswood Eq
03:15:43 ghost
Going to view a potential loan pony in half an hour or so, anyone got any advice?
Santana Rising
03:01:43 San
I promised myself tofinally finish my story this year. Real life bulldozed over me last year and Ijust couldn't find the mindset to work on it. But it's so dear to my heart and I want to see it completed
Kanenoki Estate
02:56:15 Noki
green - you should!! i recently got back into writing a story for myself (which if i ever finish it, may try to get published at some stage) and i've been having a lot of fun with it lol
Greenheart Stables
02:38:02 Green|Gren|Grenlin
You know what? I need to get back into writing for the fun of it. Not to try and entertain a imaginary audience but for myself lol
Lunalovegood
02:32:16 Loony
Thanks Pera i have voted yet I may not be able to pay a lot.
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The child of the devil February 22, 2019 07:02 AM

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He had to go back there, a place he had vowed never to return to. Jax had to do it for her. He played with the strings on his hoodie as he waited for the train to arrive at his stop. Jax glanced up and briefly studied the crowd. The hustle and bustle of city life was getting further away as the train moved from stop to stop. He finally heard the announcers monotone voice “now arriving at Malic”. Jax pulled his hood over his head and slung his backpack over one shoulder. He walked along the platform avoiding everyone’s gaze. As he walked further into the town, he heard a car behind him. It couldn’t have been going that fast but it was following him nonetheless. The wind blew the hood off his head, he could still hear the engine behind him. A similar car started towards him from the other direction. He was trapped...she had led him to an ambush but why?The cars screeched to a halt blocking him in a dark ally way. Jax could attempt to fight and perhaps he could win...but the chances of that were low, you couldn't succeed; not when the heavens were against you. Jax watched as the men stepped out of the vehicles, they all carried varying types of weapons. "Stop freak" one yelled.Jax moved towards them when a dart hit his side. He stumbled and fell. The next few hours were a blur, he awoke chained in a brightly lit white room. "LET ME GO!," he yelled.

Should I continue or start again
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 07:09 AM


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CONTINUE!!!!!!!!
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 07:23 AM


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Continue!
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 07:37 AM

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Vvardenfall Estates said:
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!




Mystic Manor said:
Continue!

Working on the next part now
Will probably be us sometime tomorrow
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 07:46 AM


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Continue!
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 08:12 AM

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CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 08:42 AM

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Jax was confused, he didn't understand what these people wanted, as far as he knew he was the same as everyone else. He sighed and closed his eyes, he woke to a hand on his shoulder and a tall man stood nearby. Jax groggily sat up only vaguely aware of the other person in the room, "and what do you want," he demanded.Upon closer inspection Jax noticed the man was well muscled and had a commanding presence. The man chuckled , "do you even know who I am child?" He asked.Jax responded to this with an eye roll, "In case you haven't noticed, I've been kidnapped and chained to this wall here...so I don't know and don't care" The man smiled at this "dear boy, you are my son"This time Jax actually laughed "you aren't the first person to tell me that"Before the man could finish his captors walked in. The man said only one thing before he disappeared "If you need me say my name"Jax was confused, how could a person just disappear?He wondered how he was supposed to call if he didn't know his name.The captors walked over to him and roughly hauled him to his feet "Tell us everything you know" they said.Jax looked at them "tell you what exactly"One of the captors rolled their eyes and pulled out a knife. Jax felt his knees buckled, he was held upright by the other captor. He was terrified, he tried to move away as she walked closer with the knife. She held it close to his throat before quickly stabbing his side. He screamed and they let him drop to the floor. He could barely watch them walk out. The last thing he remembered before he blacked out was the word he muttered, "Lucifer"
The child of the devil February 22, 2019 08:45 AM

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I'm not really a fan of where this is going lol
And I don't have any idea how to finish
The child of the devil February 23, 2019 05:42 AM

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Jax awoke to an excruciating pain in his side. How wasn't he dead? The amount of blood he had lost, he should have died. He noticed the man was back, it looked like someone had bandaged his wound. "What do you want?" Jax asked.The man smiled "have you figured out who I am yet...you called for me before you passed out"The memories came flooding back, that man...the one who claimed to be his father was the devil. "Lucifer?" Jax asked.Lucifer nodded and smiled "so do you believe me yet?"Jax sighed, he was slowly coming to terms "so, let me get this straight, I'm the son of the devil and the devil is you?"Lucifer nodded , "correct, son"Jax sighed...he didn't understand...none of this added up. "Ok...so why aren't I dead" he asked.Lucifer went to respond but the captors walked in "don't tell them anything," he said before disappearing."Tell who?...who are they?" He yelled desperately.He assumed Lucifer could teleport...but what did his captors want. He winced as he was roughly hauled to his feet. "Are you ready to talk yet...son of Lucifer"Jax shook his head and frowned. How did everyone but him know what he was.He needed to figure out who they were. He was the son of Lucifer...but who was Lucifer.Lucifer was a fallen angel...the devil.Who hated his father enough that they wanted him too?

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