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Sweet Valley
02:58:31 Anna/Jewel
nice
SwankPony
02:55:41 Swanky
Heyyy didn't realize I had an embryo laying around from one my foundation mares. I guess I do get to recreate my original lines. Awesome!
Rubygem
02:49:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well now i gotta go for real bye
Rubygem
02:49:27 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
beautiful colt
Sem
Embervale Acres
02:48:27 Solar Phoenix
I hope he keeps being a good boy lol
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
02:46:02 Anna/Jewel
are the trivia winners going to be posted?
Sweet Valley
02:45:08 Anna/Jewel
oo i love brindles
Siren Sound Estates
02:40:48 S҉ Sem
-HEE Click-
Pretty guy
Sweet Valley
02:38:08 Anna/Jewel
😂 oki
Rubygem
02:37:30 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
im lost
Rubygem
02:37:26 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
oh afternoon lol
Sweet Valley
02:37:13 Anna/Jewel
It was Trivia Afternoon, Ruby. Trivia night is next sunday
Rubygem
02:36:42 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
i forgot about it
Rubygem
02:36:36 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
aww i missed trivia night):
Sweet Valley
02:35:54 Anna/Jewel
Are the trivia winners going to be posted soon?
Rubygem
02:32:58 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Oop sorry
Morning Glory Farms
02:32:43 Terici/Dino/Trish
main chat is not the appropriate spot for you to post your art shop.
Rubygem
02:31:01 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
-HEE Click-

Me forum (Im leaving now bye)
Rubygem
02:19:58 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well i gotta go bye
Bioshock Manor
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Sweet Valley
02:58:31 Anna/Jewel
nice
SwankPony
02:55:41 Swanky
Heyyy didn't realize I had an embryo laying around from one my foundation mares. I guess I do get to recreate my original lines. Awesome!
Rubygem
02:49:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well now i gotta go for real bye
Rubygem
02:49:27 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
beautiful colt
Sem
Embervale Acres
02:48:27 Solar Phoenix
I hope he keeps being a good boy lol
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
02:46:02 Anna/Jewel
are the trivia winners going to be posted?
Sweet Valley
02:45:08 Anna/Jewel
oo i love brindles
Siren Sound Estates
02:40:48 S҉ Sem
-HEE Click-
Pretty guy
Sweet Valley
02:38:08 Anna/Jewel
😂 oki
Rubygem
02:37:30 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
im lost
Rubygem
02:37:26 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
oh afternoon lol
Sweet Valley
02:37:13 Anna/Jewel
It was Trivia Afternoon, Ruby. Trivia night is next sunday
Rubygem
02:36:42 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
i forgot about it
Rubygem
02:36:36 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
aww i missed trivia night):
Sweet Valley
02:35:54 Anna/Jewel
Are the trivia winners going to be posted soon?
Rubygem
02:32:58 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Oop sorry
Morning Glory Farms
02:32:43 Terici/Dino/Trish
main chat is not the appropriate spot for you to post your art shop.
Rubygem
02:31:01 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
-HEE Click-

Me forum (Im leaving now bye)
Rubygem
02:19:58 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well i gotta go bye
Bioshock Manor
02:17:31 Storm
Uh yeah...

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Critique Me Please! October 9, 2019 02:27 PM


Bridle Rock
 
Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!


Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs
Critique Me Please! October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty
Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour
A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)
Critique Me Please! October 10, 2019 03:56 PM


Sagebrush
 
Posts: 4127
#463399
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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