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MC Ace

12:51:02 McFossil

Congrats Ally

12:48:44 Ally 💜

You had 332 horses compete in reg. shows earning 418807.

Yay :D

12:48:03 ZequineZ - ZZ

I have no idea how to work pallets myself but maybe you could find some help in the member help forum
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:45:49 Arctic Katz

Maybe one of you can help me with that in the morning, tomorrow

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:28 Arctic Katz

Help please

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:02 Arctic Katz

-Click- I want this to be my palette, but I don't know how to code it

12:21:04 High Ho Silver Awayy

oo oki, I figured it out, thank you though!

12:19:14 Lily/Alpine

Silver Heart
it must be the pallete that you're using :)

12:09:42 High Ho Silver Awayy

Question, im tryna get rid of the necy blue on the bar with the Stable and Servces abd search etc bars, how do I change the color?

ShiningStar Stables

12:09:09 Chey / Star

This WIP literally looks cursed xD

12:02:32 Diva's pawsickles

My pretty
-HEE Click-

11:57:00 Echo | River

You're a colt and a roan and that shade of buckskin I don't like but W combo ! -HEE Click-

11:41:36 luhckeigh

yes you can make albums

11:30:15 Blaze

Found it xD

11:28:18 Blaze

Does anyone here use lensdump? I’m wondering if it’s possible to make albums on there, I am super new to their site and cannot work it out lol

11:25:58 Echo | River

Since when did I have leaderboard standings O.o

Sport Pony Island

10:05:57

Thanks

10:04:11 Storm

On the horse page

Sport Pony Island

10:03:45

Where is the pedigree

10:02:11 Storm

New thing out today. Go to pedigree and it tells you more

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MC Ace

12:51:02 McFossil

Congrats Ally

12:48:44 Ally 💜

You had 332 horses compete in reg. shows earning 418807.

Yay :D

12:48:03 ZequineZ - ZZ

I have no idea how to work pallets myself but maybe you could find some help in the member help forum
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:45:49 Arctic Katz

Maybe one of you can help me with that in the morning, tomorrow

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:28 Arctic Katz

Help please

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:02 Arctic Katz

-Click- I want this to be my palette, but I don't know how to code it

12:21:04 High Ho Silver Awayy

oo oki, I figured it out, thank you though!

12:19:14 Lily/Alpine

Silver Heart
it must be the pallete that you're using :)

12:09:42 High Ho Silver Awayy

Question, im tryna get rid of the necy blue on the bar with the Stable and Servces abd search etc bars, how do I change the color?

ShiningStar Stables

12:09:09 Chey / Star

This WIP literally looks cursed xD

12:02:32 Diva's pawsickles

My pretty
-HEE Click-

11:57:00 Echo | River

You're a colt and a roan and that shade of buckskin I don't like but W combo ! -HEE Click-

11:41:36 luhckeigh

yes you can make albums

11:30:15 Blaze

Found it xD

11:28:18 Blaze

Does anyone here use lensdump? I’m wondering if it’s possible to make albums on there, I am super new to their site and cannot work it out lol

11:25:58 Echo | River

Since when did I have leaderboard standings O.o

Sport Pony Island

10:05:57

Thanks

10:04:11 Storm

On the horse page

Sport Pony Island

10:03:45

Where is the pedigree

10:02:11 Storm

New thing out today. Go to pedigree and it tells you more

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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