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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Spring

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03:00:10

Entered 10 horses in reg shows and paid 6000$ and earned 7843$
Not bad

Equile

02:51:26 Tosk's RID

How the hell o.O
-HEE Click-

02:20:35 Loony/Loony Tune

Lydia Uh Oh How many embryos did you make?

Maple Tree Eventing

02:10:32 Lydia <3

Well damn I accidentally wasted a bunch of ebs cos I didn't realise how many embryos I made this RO T.T

01:48:42 Loony/Loony Tune

Loving this girlie -HEE Click-

01:41:31 High Ho Silver Awayy

thank youuu <3

Calela Eventing

01:40:56 Cali

Silver
Oohh, I like it

01:40:14 High Ho Silver Awayy

Yall i FINALLY just finished my avi/bio/banner/pallet T-T

01:14:21

Absolutely in love with this filly -HEE Click-

12:54:33 Ally 💜

Made

12:54:26 Ally 💜

Thanks! Not as much as they mad yesterday but I will take it ^.^

MC Ace

12:51:02 McFossil

Congrats Ally

12:48:44 Ally 💜

You had 332 horses compete in reg. shows earning 418807.

Yay :D

12:48:03 ZequineZ - ZZ

I have no idea how to work pallets myself but maybe you could find some help in the member help forum
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:45:49 Arctic Katz

Maybe one of you can help me with that in the morning, tomorrow

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:28 Arctic Katz

Help please

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:02 Arctic Katz

-Click- I want this to be my palette, but I don't know how to code it

12:21:04 High Ho Silver Awayy

oo oki, I figured it out, thank you though!

12:19:14 Lily/Alpine

Silver Heart
it must be the pallete that you're using :)

12:09:42 High Ho Silver Awayy

Question, im tryna get rid of the necy blue on the bar with the Stable and Servces abd search etc bars, how do I change the color?

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03:00:10

Entered 10 horses in reg shows and paid 6000$ and earned 7843$
Not bad

Equile

02:51:26 Tosk's RID

How the hell o.O
-HEE Click-

02:20:35 Loony/Loony Tune

Lydia Uh Oh How many embryos did you make?

Maple Tree Eventing

02:10:32 Lydia <3

Well damn I accidentally wasted a bunch of ebs cos I didn't realise how many embryos I made this RO T.T

01:48:42 Loony/Loony Tune

Loving this girlie -HEE Click-

01:41:31 High Ho Silver Awayy

thank youuu <3

Calela Eventing

01:40:56 Cali

Silver
Oohh, I like it

01:40:14 High Ho Silver Awayy

Yall i FINALLY just finished my avi/bio/banner/pallet T-T

01:14:21

Absolutely in love with this filly -HEE Click-

12:54:33 Ally 💜

Made

12:54:26 Ally 💜

Thanks! Not as much as they mad yesterday but I will take it ^.^

MC Ace

12:51:02 McFossil

Congrats Ally

12:48:44 Ally 💜

You had 332 horses compete in reg. shows earning 418807.

Yay :D

12:48:03 ZequineZ - ZZ

I have no idea how to work pallets myself but maybe you could find some help in the member help forum
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:45:49 Arctic Katz

Maybe one of you can help me with that in the morning, tomorrow

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:28 Arctic Katz

Help please

Glacier Bay Cove

12:43:02 Arctic Katz

-Click- I want this to be my palette, but I don't know how to code it

12:21:04 High Ho Silver Awayy

oo oki, I figured it out, thank you though!

12:19:14 Lily/Alpine

Silver Heart
it must be the pallete that you're using :)

12:09:42 High Ho Silver Awayy

Question, im tryna get rid of the necy blue on the bar with the Stable and Servces abd search etc bars, how do I change the color?

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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