Sunset River Arabian
08:55:46 Athena - AAs
Oooh! I think I'm on to something
MakeEm Fancy
08:55:09 Ally 💜
I honestly dont think she will be over 25lbs @Athena
SJ_Foundation
08:54:21 Mack
Your work is worth protecting!
MakeEm Fancy
08:53:39 Ally 💜
Look at this dude @Athena
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Sunset River Arabian
08:52:51 Athena - AAs
Well at 7 months and 16lbs, I don't think she'll weigh much more than 25lbs as an adult but with being underfed for so long I could be wrong
Champion Acres
08:52:28 Dumpling
Oops, wrong chat 0+0
Champion Acres
08:52:13 Dumpling
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Cheap Palettes for sale! Get them while they're hot!
Sunset River Arabian
08:51:46 Athena - AAs
Ally
Honestly throw in some rat or fox terrier and I could definitely see that
MakeEm Fancy
08:49:45 Ally 💜
The shelter was claiming she was a german shepherd XD I said no way @Athena
MakeEm Fancy
08:49:17 Ally 💜
I think thats the closest I have seen of what she looks like @Athena
Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:01 Angel Cats🐈
Revel, my cat does the same thing. My opinion is that it's just a cat thing, but if it really worries you, you should take your cat to the vet
Sunset River Arabian
08:47:55 Athena - AAs
ally
Well those are supposed to be around 30lbs so its possible. Especially if its not a straight 50/50 mix
MakeEm Fancy
08:46:19 Ally 💜
Woah she does! She is 16lbs currently and almost 7 months old @Athena
Sunset River Arabian
08:45:41 Athena - AAs
Blue
I've considered asking readers to sign something saying something along the lines of it being my work and they wont steal but that also makes me feel like I'm being too paranoid
SJ_Foundation
08:43:24 Mack
It was originally my salamanders tank. But he passed last year, so now it's just plants
Sunset River Arabian
08:43:10 Athena - AAs
Ally
To me she looks alot like this border collie Kelpie mix but i don't know how big you think she'll get
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Revel Ranch
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I'm worried my cat isn't getting better. >.< He is eating grass and occasionally throws up after eating.
Blue Moon Steppe
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I beta read and proof read for my friends book series so IÂ’d be willing to do that for you if youÂ’d like but completely understand if not especially since youÂ’ve had your work stolen in the past
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Open top*
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I have a 100 gal wide open too for my plants. This is gonna sound bad but I forgot the name of my main plant. It's big in diameter. Has rubbery leaves with red tips, and doesn't flower often. She likes it more in the dry side but I do have a more humid part of the tank
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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