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Comments! this is a thread for comments on my story, I will really appreciate advice to help me improve, I understand that comma splicing is quite a problem for me (I am working on it) - you can read the story here:
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Real good PERA MY FRECKLE Edited at October 12, 2023 08:57 PM by Sage Breeding
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