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Sunni
12:19:43 Sunni bunny
Fantasy that's the first WWW his thrown so far to my knowledge. I haven't checked his foals in a while.
His thrown a EEE and EEW mixes.
Now I am tempted to try a couple of other mares I found haha.
Fantasy Horses
12:16:01 Fantasy
Sunni
Of course! That's the best way to test them easily lol
Sunni
12:14:59 Sunni bunny
Thank you fantasy, I wasn't expecting it haha.
Just decided to throw him to a few random mare's.
Fantasy Horses
12:12:16 Fantasy
Sunni
congrats!
Sunni
12:07:41 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-

O.o I am proud of my boy.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:34:00 Arctic Katz
Dropped random items in the hidden falls
Transformers Acres
11:30:41 Geek, Eek
Just put some things in the Falls.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:27:03 Arctic Katz
And randomly check the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:58 Arctic Katz
Next step is to separate my breeds and give each breed their own barns
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:16:41 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Gosh matching is hard. -_- And time consuming
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:11:28 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Thanks KHP! I will PM you once I have some studs chosen (:
KPH Equestrian
11:10:35 Rapcoon | Jester
bird
oh that's wonderful!<3
KPH Equestrian
11:10:14 Rapcoon | Jester
spotted
sure!
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:08:47 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Actually no, I need to try and match for myself. But would someone be willing to give me their opinion on my choices?
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:06:07 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Would someone match my mare for me please?
Galaxy TBs
10:59:24 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Raid anyone?
Blue Diamond
10:47:16 Bluey
I'll be back later, guys. Gotta take care of fur babies
Blue Diamond
10:45:34 Bluey
Fantasy
If I had that kind of money, all my WW+ mares would have art from TF, DD, and Imp lol
Hummingbird Meadows
10:39:06 Bird
I am so glad I took Finley with me on my trip! We got home today and I can already see how much he has grown emotionally in confidence and navigating new spaces.
KPH Equestrian
10:19:52 Rapcoon | Jester
<3

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Sunni
12:19:43 Sunni bunny
Fantasy that's the first WWW his thrown so far to my knowledge. I haven't checked his foals in a while.
His thrown a EEE and EEW mixes.
Now I am tempted to try a couple of other mares I found haha.
Fantasy Horses
12:16:01 Fantasy
Sunni
Of course! That's the best way to test them easily lol
Sunni
12:14:59 Sunni bunny
Thank you fantasy, I wasn't expecting it haha.
Just decided to throw him to a few random mare's.
Fantasy Horses
12:12:16 Fantasy
Sunni
congrats!
Sunni
12:07:41 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-

O.o I am proud of my boy.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:34:00 Arctic Katz
Dropped random items in the hidden falls
Transformers Acres
11:30:41 Geek, Eek
Just put some things in the Falls.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:27:03 Arctic Katz
And randomly check the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:58 Arctic Katz
Next step is to separate my breeds and give each breed their own barns
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:16:41 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Gosh matching is hard. -_- And time consuming
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:11:28 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Thanks KHP! I will PM you once I have some studs chosen (:
KPH Equestrian
11:10:35 Rapcoon | Jester
bird
oh that's wonderful!<3
KPH Equestrian
11:10:14 Rapcoon | Jester
spotted
sure!
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:08:47 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Actually no, I need to try and match for myself. But would someone be willing to give me their opinion on my choices?
Spotted Dreams KNN
11:06:07 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Would someone match my mare for me please?
Galaxy TBs
10:59:24 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Raid anyone?
Blue Diamond
10:47:16 Bluey
I'll be back later, guys. Gotta take care of fur babies
Blue Diamond
10:45:34 Bluey
Fantasy
If I had that kind of money, all my WW+ mares would have art from TF, DD, and Imp lol
Hummingbird Meadows
10:39:06 Bird
I am so glad I took Finley with me on my trip! We got home today and I can already see how much he has grown emotionally in confidence and navigating new spaces.
KPH Equestrian
10:19:52 Rapcoon | Jester
<3

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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