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MakeEm Fancy
06:12:28 Ally 💜
I have the trail ride quest
Black Dragon Stable
06:06:51 BDS / Black / Stormy
I can't wait until we can get moved. I'm tired of the neighbor dudes giving me the disgusted side eye because I'm driving a newer car compared to the one they're constantly out there having to fix.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:06:12 Arctic Katz
One of my current quests is to win ten jousting games. Not sure if I can do that
KPH Equestrian
05:58:05 Rapcoon | Jester
-HEE Click-
Gem Queens Estate
05:57:13 Snow❆Gem
Breed PP apricot... again? My goodness. Maybe tomorrow I'll try. I had that quest not long ago.
Gem Queens Estate
05:50:59 Snow❆Gem
This internet! O.o
Ravenwood Farm
05:44:06 
Ooo they are indeed not tiger, but they are amber! What is that? xD
Angels angels
05:43:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh Amber eyes
Ravenwood Farm
05:42:44 
Maybe I should do it just for peace of mind x3
Angels angels
05:40:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean you could gene test her and find out lol
Ravenwood Farm
05:40:19 
Ah ok. I just keep wondering why it's not blue, since she's double creme
Angels angels
05:39:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I think it is just brown eye
Ravenwood Farm
05:39:07 
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This one doesn't have tiger eye, by any chance?
KPH Equestrian
05:38:57 Rapcoon | Jester
black with creme is smokey black lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:03 Snow❆Gem
@raven

Black, brown, and bays + creme = buckskin. :D And then the pearl makes it added to the color name after that. :D
KPH Equestrian
05:37:07 Rapcoon | Jester
hm, not buckskin, she doesn't have cream. Looks like bay under the white ^^
Cozmic Elite
05:37:07 
I didn't think twice for a moment since Buckskin AAs like me Lol
But she doesn't have cream.
Ravenwood Farm
05:35:51 
I think brown or bay?
Gemstone Stable
05:33:21 Snow❆Gem
@CE

Oh lovely! She's a buckskin pearl under the white! XD *boops*
Cozmic Elite
05:30:54 
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Oh lil wild hiding prl

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MakeEm Fancy
06:12:28 Ally 💜
I have the trail ride quest
Black Dragon Stable
06:06:51 BDS / Black / Stormy
I can't wait until we can get moved. I'm tired of the neighbor dudes giving me the disgusted side eye because I'm driving a newer car compared to the one they're constantly out there having to fix.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:06:12 Arctic Katz
One of my current quests is to win ten jousting games. Not sure if I can do that
KPH Equestrian
05:58:05 Rapcoon | Jester
-HEE Click-
Gem Queens Estate
05:57:13 Snow❆Gem
Breed PP apricot... again? My goodness. Maybe tomorrow I'll try. I had that quest not long ago.
Gem Queens Estate
05:50:59 Snow❆Gem
This internet! O.o
Ravenwood Farm
05:44:06 
Ooo they are indeed not tiger, but they are amber! What is that? xD
Angels angels
05:43:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh Amber eyes
Ravenwood Farm
05:42:44 
Maybe I should do it just for peace of mind x3
Angels angels
05:40:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean you could gene test her and find out lol
Ravenwood Farm
05:40:19 
Ah ok. I just keep wondering why it's not blue, since she's double creme
Angels angels
05:39:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I think it is just brown eye
Ravenwood Farm
05:39:07 
-HEE Click-
This one doesn't have tiger eye, by any chance?
KPH Equestrian
05:38:57 Rapcoon | Jester
black with creme is smokey black lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:03 Snow❆Gem
@raven

Black, brown, and bays + creme = buckskin. :D And then the pearl makes it added to the color name after that. :D
KPH Equestrian
05:37:07 Rapcoon | Jester
hm, not buckskin, she doesn't have cream. Looks like bay under the white ^^
Cozmic Elite
05:37:07 
I didn't think twice for a moment since Buckskin AAs like me Lol
But she doesn't have cream.
Ravenwood Farm
05:35:51 
I think brown or bay?
Gemstone Stable
05:33:21 Snow❆Gem
@CE

Oh lovely! She's a buckskin pearl under the white! XD *boops*
Cozmic Elite
05:30:54 
-HEE Click-
Oh lil wild hiding prl

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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