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Angels angels
04:51:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My WWW boy that is on the ABLB was only up 4 his week 4 lol then 2 week 7
ZequineZ
04:37:07 ZEZ - ZZ
He had 2 week 7s but he wasn’t all (or any) up again till week 9

He’s been good producing but I probably am not the best at matching him I’ve gotten only 2 EWW combos from him
Angels angels
04:34:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My WWW fillies from last RO were all up and 5 up but the all up didn't have a week 7 and the 5 up was up one week 7
ZequineZ
04:33:36 ZEZ - ZZ
I have a EWW boy who was up all 6 on week 4 I was so impressed
Angels angels
04:30:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I had an EWE up 5. And she is TB with visible prl so I am happy with her. And an EWW AA but I sold her. The rest were 3 up except an EWE was 1 up but I wasn't keeping her anyways
pandemoniu_m
04:28:09 pheezy
One of my EWW girls was but thats it over here, my other EWW girl had a horrible Wk4 and got booted 🥲
ZequineZ
04:26:55 ZEZ - ZZ
My home bred WWW was only up 4 on week 4 the little stinker :( hoping the one I captured does better
Angels angels
04:26:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Mine was lol and one of my EWEs
Morning Glory Farms
04:24:56 Terici/Dino/Trish
With the way the bred WWW are training lately i would be shocked if shes all up week 4
Angels angels
03:56:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Since she is a WWW she is probably going to be all up week 4 so you won't be able to match her until week 7 atleast lol. You could either yolo it and throw her to a random ABLB dude or wait to breed her
pandemoniu_m
03:53:43 pheezy
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Not sure how im gonna match my capture day girl. Can I trust Wk4 stats when she hits it? Otherwise might just throw her at my EWW stud again until her training shows more. 😬
Black Dragon Stable
03:23:54 BDS / Black / Stormy
It's just baking powder! Doesn't even come with strong scents to burn their poor little noses.
Black Dragon Stable
03:23:14 BDS / Black / Stormy
My cats are spazzing. I put down (pet safe) carpet powder to deodorize the carpet to finish vacuuming and you would think I laid down some white death.
Wild_Potatoes
03:22:03 
Im feeling the same
Angels angels
03:21:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I got lucky to find another brindle Manchado lol my other boy is 21 now
Angels angels
03:19:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am afraid I am not going to get another one before she passes
Angels angels
03:18:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wild
I feel that. My chimmy brindle is getting old
Wild_Potatoes
03:14:55 
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This makes me sad to see her getting old to
Black Dragon Stable
03:14:16 BDS / Black / Stormy
I was not a happy camper with my doctor. She insisted that she could handle my case when all I wanted was a referral to a high risk doctor.
Angels angels
03:10:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I believe it is just straight glucose syrup lol

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Angels angels
04:51:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My WWW boy that is on the ABLB was only up 4 his week 4 lol then 2 week 7
ZequineZ
04:37:07 ZEZ - ZZ
He had 2 week 7s but he wasn’t all (or any) up again till week 9

He’s been good producing but I probably am not the best at matching him I’ve gotten only 2 EWW combos from him
Angels angels
04:34:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My WWW fillies from last RO were all up and 5 up but the all up didn't have a week 7 and the 5 up was up one week 7
ZequineZ
04:33:36 ZEZ - ZZ
I have a EWW boy who was up all 6 on week 4 I was so impressed
Angels angels
04:30:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I had an EWE up 5. And she is TB with visible prl so I am happy with her. And an EWW AA but I sold her. The rest were 3 up except an EWE was 1 up but I wasn't keeping her anyways
pandemoniu_m
04:28:09 pheezy
One of my EWW girls was but thats it over here, my other EWW girl had a horrible Wk4 and got booted 🥲
ZequineZ
04:26:55 ZEZ - ZZ
My home bred WWW was only up 4 on week 4 the little stinker :( hoping the one I captured does better
Angels angels
04:26:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Mine was lol and one of my EWEs
Morning Glory Farms
04:24:56 Terici/Dino/Trish
With the way the bred WWW are training lately i would be shocked if shes all up week 4
Angels angels
03:56:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Since she is a WWW she is probably going to be all up week 4 so you won't be able to match her until week 7 atleast lol. You could either yolo it and throw her to a random ABLB dude or wait to breed her
pandemoniu_m
03:53:43 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Not sure how im gonna match my capture day girl. Can I trust Wk4 stats when she hits it? Otherwise might just throw her at my EWW stud again until her training shows more. 😬
Black Dragon Stable
03:23:54 BDS / Black / Stormy
It's just baking powder! Doesn't even come with strong scents to burn their poor little noses.
Black Dragon Stable
03:23:14 BDS / Black / Stormy
My cats are spazzing. I put down (pet safe) carpet powder to deodorize the carpet to finish vacuuming and you would think I laid down some white death.
Wild_Potatoes
03:22:03 
Im feeling the same
Angels angels
03:21:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I got lucky to find another brindle Manchado lol my other boy is 21 now
Angels angels
03:19:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am afraid I am not going to get another one before she passes
Angels angels
03:18:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wild
I feel that. My chimmy brindle is getting old
Wild_Potatoes
03:14:55 
-HEE Click-
This makes me sad to see her getting old to
Black Dragon Stable
03:14:16 BDS / Black / Stormy
I was not a happy camper with my doctor. She insisted that she could handle my case when all I wanted was a referral to a high risk doctor.
Angels angels
03:10:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I believe it is just straight glucose syrup lol

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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