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A New Beginning (Story) June 10, 2022 08:48 AM

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I decided to make two stories at once! But I have a few things I'd like if you listened to.
1. Do not copy me, I will not hesitate to report you if you do.
2. Please comment on it in the discussion forum, but don't say anything rude please.
3. Don't rush me. <3
4. Please do not be rude about my writing issues. I haven't ever really wrote any stories..
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A New Beginning WILL Contain Content As:
Blood, Fighting, Rarely Death,
Few Sad Scenes
Read Only If You Can Handle This Please :)

Edited at September 29, 2022 09:28 AM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) June 10, 2022 09:36 AM

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Prologue

No More Prologue

Edited at October 1, 2022 04:55 PM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) June 10, 2022 09:51 AM

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Prologue

No More Prologue

Edited at October 1, 2022 04:56 PM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) June 11, 2022 09:20 AM

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Hello! I'm going to put a character sheet here in case anyone is confused of the role/appearance or other things about the characters!
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Starspeaker
Female
10 Years And 2 Months.
Human/Dragon/Cat Hybrid
Protagonist
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Firebreaker
Male
11 Years And 8 Months
Human/Velociraptor/Fox
Confidant
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Sun
Male
10 Years And 11 Months
Sabertooth/Bird
Deuteragonist
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Silversky
Female
30 Years and 11 And A Half Months
Gazelle/Horse
Deuteragonist
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Sahara
Female
8 Years And 10 Months
Fennec/Savannah
Deuteragonist
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Queso
Male
28 Years and 4 Months
Gorilla/Shark/Baboon
Tertiary
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Eric
Male
Helper, Trainer, and Releaser
31 Years
Human
Antigonist
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Lisa
Female
Trainer/Helper
33 Years and 1 Month
Human
Tertiary
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Amanda
Female
Boss
35 Years And 8 Months
Human
Tertiary
Created: Silversky & Sun
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Alex
Male
Hybrid Specialist
34 Years And 5 Months
Human
Tertiary
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Tira
Female
Docter
40 Years
Human
Tertiary
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Lilly
Female
Docter
40 Years
Human
Tertiary
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Oscar
Male
Head Security
38 Years And 4 Months
Human
Tertiary
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Sophia
Female
Security
35 Years And 7 Months
Human
Tertiary
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Many More Unknown Humans

Edited at September 26, 2022 07:20 PM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) June 11, 2022 11:06 AM

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Chapter 1

5 Months Later....
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Starspeaker glared around the hard, steel cage. She tried many times to break out, yet nothing ever worked. The hybrid next to her, was always humming from when she got put next to him, till now. And he was still humming, like, right now, the same exact way every single time. She hissed and threw her tail against the wall boredly.
"Can you please be quiet in there? I'm trying to practice my charming singing!" He said cheerfully.
"How are you still practicing? You've been doing this since I got here! And that was about, five whole months ago?" She snarled rudely. He really needs to stop. It's disturbing my quiet.
"Sorry, I'm just trying to have fun, maybe you should try too! I can make up a new song that requires there to be two of us! It might be fun?" He offered, kindly. What? Ew, he's so weird!
"No, now shut up and stop humming already." She then plopped down onto the concrete-hard floor. Sheathing and unsheathing her claws boredly. Ugh, I hope I get released soon. These annoying hybrids are driving me crazy! Oh, I hope for some water soon. My throat is like, really dry.
After a long while of being bored and just trying to entertain herself, Lisa, her favorite of the humans there, finally came to feed them. Food! Ooh I hope I get tomatoes this time. The tapping of her shoes across the marble floor was slightly calming for some reason.
"Hey, Firebreaker!" Star heard some weird noises but could slightly understand it. Firebreaker. Hah! More like annoying, stupid, useless, unneeded hybrid blah. In a few minutes, Lisa started coming to her cage now. "Hi, Star!" She opened the cage. Tomatoes? Or cucumbers? Or maybe a kiwi? Or some raw cow? The human smiled and handed her some cooked chicken and lettuce. She looked at it and the looked at the human. No tomatoes? Lisa patted her wing and then closed the cage and walked off. Dang it! Just some boring leaves and chicken.
She stretched and then bit into her chicken with her small fangs. Ooh at least I got a bone this time. She finished her chicken leg, and then noticed there was some water in the firm lettuce leaf and slurped it up. Blegh, this stuff is disgusting. It's better then nothing though. She tore into it and finished it in a few bites. Okay, bed time now I guess. Star curled up into a ball and coiled her poisonous tail up. She folded her large wings onto her back and then sheathed her claws and started to try and sleep. Maybe tommorow will be less boring. Hopefully. Then, she heard the same exact guy, humming right as she almost fell asleep. "Urgh!" She grumbled and covered her ears with her paws.

Edited at September 28, 2022 06:48 AM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) July 8, 2022 12:49 PM

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Chapter 2

Part 1-4
The Next Day...
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There was a tight grasp around her neck that woke up the hybrid. Star snarled and started to claw at it, trying to break out. What is going on. Then she noticed Eric was there and he pulled her out. She hissed and flicked her tail around aggressively. She looked around and noticed, many many hybrids staring a her. She looked back at her cage and tryed to tug back towards it,, thinking the door would close, an she'd be safe. Many of the hybrids started to back farther into their cages.
"Damn, she's tough to deny that human." One whispered. She saw her favorite human walk towards her cage, only to stop to the one next to it.
"Come on, Fire!" She smiled at the hybrid in there and slowly opened the gate. He obediently walked out and let her slip the same band thingy that was around Star's neck around his. Then, he curiously walked over on his hind legs over to Star and tried to sniff her. She stood still as he inched closer. Wait, that's humming guy I think. "You can say hi later, bud. Let's go." His human tugged him gently away and he obediently walked next to her heel. What does she mean? "You can say hi later"? She watched as they walked away and then felt a tug on her neck and went into panic mode again and starting clawing at him as he started to drag her away from her cage. No point in flailing anymore She panted and let her wing flop down and then slowly followed Eric down the hallway. Where am I going?? Am I in trouble? Star thought, nervously as she walked down the hallway. She swished her tail behind her elegantly as they stepped into a new hallway. There aren't any cages here. She thought when she realized that. This is so weird. They walked through a door and she noticed they were outside in a mulchy area. But before she knew it they were in more hallways. And many hallways later they reached a room with glass. Woah!
Star looked through the glass and saw an open clearing of dirt and after the clearing was a big forest with soft-looking grass and thick bushes and tiny flowers and tall, sturdy trees. Goodness gracious! That is cool. She realized she was being tugged away and she turned around to follow Eric into a weird box room. He tapped his leg twice which meant for her to sit. Why do I have to sit? That's also awkward. He touched a number on the wall and doors closed behind them. The floor started to shake a bit and they started going downwards. What I happening, how are we going down without stairs?? After like two minutes the doors opened again and she followed him out into the new room.
There was a cage to Star's left that she was pushed into and the rope was taken off her neck and the gate was closed and Eric went into the moving box again and disappeared. More prison?? This will be boring again I gue- A startlingly loud beeping noise started and the gate behind her started to open slowly. She leaped away nervously and then squeezed out slowly. She noticed she was in a dirt clearing like she saw before through the glass. Wait, this I the same clearing I think. She looked behind herself and saw the glass that she was looking through before and Lisa was watching her through it. Huh, okay then. Freedom? Star darted around the clearing spreading her wings out to the maximum length. She ran around in circles flinging dirt around happily. Maybe I shouldn't have flailed so much!

Edited at November 15, 2022 08:59 PM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) July 9, 2022 08:16 PM

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Chapter 2

Part 2-4
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A few hours later, Starspeaker done running around the new cage erratically and just decided to rest for a bit. She thought that is wasn't much different actually. It was just much much more room. It was better definitely but not much difference. Getting the food delivered straight to me was awesome though. There has to be some meat or something around here? She layed down and did a dramatic face while thinking about her food she would always get. Darn I miss my visits. Maybe Lisa will come and give me food now. She stood up grumpily and walked into the forest that was next to her to see if maybe some meat or tomatoes or carrots or something was hidden around. She began to look through the forest psychotically, for food. She was almost already exhausted of looking and got bored quickly. She walked not really paying attention anymore and just tried to sniff out food, and tripped over many logs and sticks and recieved frequent smacks in the face by a vine. Eww is this a swamp?
After a few hours of searching, Star finally realized that there wasn't any food around. I'm hungry. I. NEED. FooOo- Then the bushes rustled. Dang is food finally here? The bushes rustled more and then a red thing came out slowly.
"Hia! finally some possibly good company! I've been so lonely for da- wait it was only like a half an hour maybe?" He said psychotically.
"What in the world-?" She said backing away as he inched closer with a big, toothy grin. It was the same one from before, a tall red creature that stood on two legs that had sharp ridged claws at the end from. He had a fluffy tail and a flat face. He had two arms with sharp claws and his eyes were all black.
"What are you?" He asked slightly calming down. Why are you asking that question? Seriously?
"Um? I'm a hybrid like you?" Star said, hinting annoyance in her tone.
"What's your name? I'm Firebreaker. " He continued asking questions.
"I'm Starspeaker..." She replied. Isn't he that singing guy? "Oohhh... You're annoying girl! That was next to me! And hated my charming singing!" Firebreaker chuckled.
"Im not annoying!" She growled slightly.
"You sure were!" He laughed, revealing yellowish, triangle-shaped teeth. "Maybe you should wash yourself off in the river. You're covered in dust and dirt!" He said when he stopped laughing. River?? What's that? I guess I gotta follow him...
"Uh? Where's that at?" Star asked, curiously tilting her head.
"Follow me! I'll show you! I'll also introduce you to the others after!" He turned around and trotted away. "..." Star sighed and ran after him. I better not be waisting my time!

Edited at September 28, 2022 06:52 AM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) August 14, 2022 09:17 PM

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Chapter 2

Part 3-4
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After a few minutes of running, they reached a big spot with lots of water. This is pretty.
"What is this?" Starspeaker asked.
"It's a little lovely lake!" Firebreaker said charmingly. "Now hop in and wash off smelly!" She grumbled, annoyed by his not funny jokes and walked to the edge of the "lake". She put a paw in a jumped back.
"You can go under it??" She was very confused. I've never seen something like this before..
"Yes?" Fire responded. "Have you never swam before? I thought Lisa took everyone for a swim." She glared at him.
"What's a "swam" and a "swim"?". He looked at her as if he started to get annoyed.
"...I'll explain later. Just go in and don't keep your head under for too long." Star nodded and then slowly waded in the water till I was at her shoulder height. Then she dipped her head and neck under, only to jerk herself out. Ahhh!
"What the heck-?" She hissed.
"Yeaaahhh, let's go to the others now. They are awful though so try and stay away from them." He said and walked off. She followed slowly behind.
Five minutes later they reached a tree with a small hole under it's roots. Fire sighed and called.
"Hey guys... Someone new is here.. Please be nice to her." A hiss came from under the tree and two figures came out and behind the tree came another. One was a a big tiger with long front fangs and covered in thick blue feathers instead of fur. The other was a brown gorilla with a long tail a had two rows of teeth on the top and bottom. That kinda sounded and looked like he summoned his army. That was slightly funny. The other was a big white horse with grey gazelle horns.
"That's the new one? Pitiful..." The elderly female horse hybrid said.
"Darn, she's uglier then me." The male gorilla said. The tiger was silent.
"I'm not ugly!" Star hissed unsheathing her claws aggressively. So rude!
"She isn't ugly! You're atti-" Fire started.
"Everyone shut up!" The white hybrid neighed. "Now, tell me your name, new girl." Everyone turned and looked at her.
"Bet it be something stupid.." The aggressive male said.
"My name is Starspeaker." The horse-gazelle softened her gaze a bit.
"Starspeaker, huh.. Alright. I'm Silversky, the first hybrid found. The aggressive male next to me is my best friend, Queso. This silent tiger is Sun, your friend's big brother." Silver nodded to each one.
"Pleased to meet you, Starspeaker." Kind Sun said. Queso whispered something in Silver's ear, and she nodded at him.
"Now you, Firebreaker, get lost! Starspeaker, follow me and Queso." She commanded. "You can't treat him that you little-" she started. "Respect your elders you whelp! Now follow me." With that, she walked off with Queso following. Star sighed and slowly followed. Wow, they are SO mean.

Edited at September 28, 2022 06:55 AM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) August 14, 2022 10:12 PM

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Chapter 2

Part 4-4
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Star followed to hybrids to the clearing she was playing in before. On that walk, Silversky had explained that she was her mother.
"Now daughter." She spat. "Show me your strength." What? At that, Queso unexpectedly leaped at her baring his teeth. She dodged his attack and tried to run away only to be blocked by her mother's horns. She flung herself around her and clung on her side, clawing the elder's thin pelt, ripping it apart ruthlessly. The aggressive male pulled her off her mother and shoved her into the ground. She flicked her tail, opening up the barb on the end and stabbing it deep into Queso's body. And earsplitting shreak came from him and he lost focus so Star flung him into a tree. That must have hurt She winced watching him stand up slowly, and then got picked up from the ground and thrown into the glass of the viewing area, leaving a big crack in it. She fell to the floor and flopped there weakly. What the heck?? Why are they attacking me? My first day here is a fight, oh how wonderful! Eric seemed to have woken up, he sat up from his chair and grabbed a little thing with a button on it.
Suddenly a loud ringing noise came. All the others seemed to have noticed it too since Silver was backing up whipping her head around awkwardly and Queso covered his ears making a displeased face. Then it stopped.
"Okay..." They both said. "Let's go, Queso." She said and walked over to him and helped him up with her horns. Then they both left Star there alone. She sat there whimpering from the pain on her side. Welp, the one time Eric was actually helpful. For once in his life. I guess I'm slightly grateful.
After a half an hour, the pain still didn't go away, and she was still bleeding. The bushes rustled nearby and she twitched her ears, to exhausted to stand up.
"Star?" Someone said before she noticed it was Fire. Yay! Finally!
"Hrnngh." She grumbled.
"What happened??" He asked slightly worried.
"They attacked me. I think they wanted to test my strength and didn't want you to interfere." She replied slowly trying to stand up.
"They did that for me too. Probably to test if you're strong enough to join their group. Darn, what happened to your side though???" He inspected her injury.
"Mother, threw me into the glass, and it cut me." She said after she stood up. "I shouldn't have cleaned earlier."
Fire chuckled. "You stunk before! But I guess you now stink again... Of blood.. Let's go get you cleaned up again..!" He said and slowly walked in the direction of the lake. Pfft okay, I guess that was kind of funny.
"Oh! Can you tell me what a "swam" and a "swim" are now?" She asked. "Haha! I'll show you!" He responded and smiled at her.

Edited at September 28, 2022 06:58 AM by StarlightStable
A New Beginning (Story) August 14, 2022 10:31 PM

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Chapter 3

Part 1-3
A week later..
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Starspeaker woke up in her rocky den she made with Firebreaker. She and him made it as far away from her mother and step-dad as possible to lower the risks of being attacked.. again. She yawned and looked around the den. I guess Fire already left. He better not be getting into trouble.. Again. During that week, he taught her many things: how to hunt, how to swim, how to stalk things, how to fight better, about the world legends, and much more. She was focused on every bit of it. Star stood up and slowly stretched her legs and flicked her paws around. I hate waking up... It's the worst thing of the day. I wish I could just sleep forever, seriously. Sleeping is just so awesome and blah blah- She snapped back into focus noticing how dumb she probably looked just standing there, and walked out slowly to not make her muscles more sore. The breeze in her face was calming and she whiffed in the morning scents.
"Hi sleepy-head! You're awake finally!" She jumped when she suddenly heard Fire's voice. Knew it.
"Dude! How long were you up there for?" She said whipping around to face Fire, who was on top of the rocky den they called home.
"Oh, about the whole time after I woke up." He gave her a charming grin. "You are creepy, mister." She replied, giving him the death-eye stare. Laser eyes.
"Ahh stop okay! I hate that look! I swear I will-" Star stopped and grinned. "We chill now?" He asked raising his hands in the air. Hah!
"Sure. Okay! I'm going hunting now, goodbye!" She trotted off.
"Good luck without your tutor there!" Fire called after her, his laugh sounding like a maniac's.
"Hah! Just you wait, mister creeps-a-lot!" She sniffed the ground, then the air, and there was only faint deer scent from two days ago. She continued to slowly walk and sniff and the same time, hoping to smell something fresh. Ima embarrass myself again.
Ten minutes later, still nothing. Star grumbled, annoyed how she still wasn't good at predicting where prey might go and be. The bushes rustled and a blue blur darted out at something but went right past her. Then there was a deer shrieking. She peeked out to look and saw, Sun, with a deer pinned under him. He had his big jaws gripped around its neck, slowly strangling it to death. I get it. He's mostly big cat, so he hunts like them. Then he turned around and looked at her.
"Ah, were you hunting this?" He said calmly stepping away.
"Nah. But if I was better at tracking that deer would totally be mine." She chuckled.
"You want it? I can always catch more." He offered kindly. So nice!
"No! I don't want your food! You keep it. I can't imagine what jokes Fire would start about it." I don't want to imagine.
"Fire the jokester?" He smiled. This guy is so calm.. I don't get it.
"Yes... He already calls me, "Annoying girl" and, "Sleepy" and, "Smelly", I don't need anymore names." Sun looked awkward. I predicted he would make that expression.
"I gotta go before Queso finds out I've been talking to you! He was really mad after the fight." He grabbed the deer and started dragging it. Ohh that poor hybrid.
"Wait! How are they're wounds doing anyway?" She called after him.
"Good!" He responded so Star began to walk back to the den.

Edited at September 28, 2022 10:30 AM by StarlightStable

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