Horse Eden : #1 KNLB Mare 188

MC Ace

11:41:48 McFossil

Ah. I'm not quite there yet. I still need to keep some E mares to test my boys.

11:38:43 Ru

So just a handful of E fillies make it to the barns, but they're pretty good. I don't have any way to judge them but their training, so it is how it is

Sagruesal

11:36:10 Ru

Ace
I usually look at W6 for my Es, if they don't show up anything W3 and 6, they're out

MC Ace

11:30:24 McFossil

I am clear cut FR'ing all stock not all up WK7 for my SD. I messed this fillys training and I'm so glad I made a note because I almost FR'd her.
-HEE Click-

MC Ace

11:25:50 McFossil

LOL Computers, that is true Gypsy.

Gypsy Family Farm

11:24:53

Exactly; now we folk with big vocabularies are mistaken for computers! You really do have great word usage and a very distinctive style. Write more!

MC Ace

11:23:04 McFossil

Nice boy RU and both parents on the LB. That's sweet.

MC Ace

11:22:07 McFossil

I do enjoy using my own lines. Something about see my horses pop all over a pedigree. LOL But a little outside help can be great for a little jump on the LB's.

Vell Absolutely you are welcome. And feel free to reach out for insight. Gypsy is a great resource and I know there are other writers and readers here on HEE that can offer constructive opinions.

Sagruesal

11:21:16 Ru

-HEE Click- picked up this boy so he's gonna freshen up my blood

Sagruesal

11:19:27 Ru

Ace
I haven't used outside studs for a while, like months? Should give them a chance next RO, I have plenty of mares to spare

Vellum Elites

11:19:18 Vell

Thank you, I appreciate all the insight!

Sagruesal

11:18:18 Ru

Vell
It comes with practice, don't worry. There's no particular need to search for it

MC Ace

11:17:55 McFossil

Ru why would your line go down? Wouldn't new options be an opportunity to increase the strength?

Vellum Elites

11:17:31 Vell

It is definitely hard to pinpoint my voice but I am sure the more I write the easier it will be.

MC Ace

11:16:56 McFossil

Nope, no AI detected. It feels authentic, as in the choice of words and candor are your own. Gypsy is right AI is good, but obvious. Especially if you have been writing for a while.

Vellum Elites

11:16:44 Vell

I am always so concerned with my word choice being mistaken for AI usage, people at work always think I write my emails with AI but the reality is I just read a ton of books haha

Gypsy Family Farm

11:15:50

Oooh, that chestnut mare is on FIRE.

Gypsy Family Farm

11:15:11

Oh, no, not at all, I was just agreeing with MC about authors finding their voices.

Gypsy Family Farm

11:14:39

I'd make one change; switch "horrors abound" to "horrors arise". (It's just more poetic in keeping with your linguistic choices in the rest of the piece.)

Vellum Elites

11:13:32 Vell

Does it seem like I did?

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#1 KNLB Mare 188

March 5, 2024 09:18 AM

Cloverleaf Castle

Posts: 119
#1185260
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Buyer provides straw.

Items Greatly appreciated!

WWE+ Breeding requirements

They may be crossed with any breed

Embryos may be saved or used immediately

~~2Mil~~

~~ꕥ Nightshade L122~~

~~#1 KNNLB Mare~~

~~WWW Producer x 3~~

~~Second Embryo~~

ꕥ Silver Wing LL112

WWE

You can decide 1st or 2nd Embryo

AB - 200K

Edited at February 16, 2025 03:14 PM by Cloverleaf Castle

#1 KNLB Mare 188

March 5, 2024 10:03 AM

Darkwood

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#1185269
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I'd like to claim her please

#1 KNLB Mare 188

May 15, 2024 12:04 PM

Cloverleaf Castle

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#1 KNLB Mare 188

May 22, 2024 01:29 PM

BlueBirdFalls

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#1 KNLB Mare 188

May 29, 2024 01:12 PM

Cloverleaf Castle

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Price reduction :o

Ending soon!

#1 KNLB Mare 188

June 14, 2024 08:09 PM

Cloverleaf Castle

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Updated for 180

#1 KNLB Mare 188

June 15, 2024 08:22 PM

Vellum Elites

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Cloverleaf Castle said:

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#1 KNLB Mare 188

June 28, 2024 08:25 AM

Cloverleaf Castle

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ends at noon GT

Can do broods on lower 2/3

Edited at June 28, 2024 08:26 AM by Cloverleaf Castle

#1 KNLB Mare 188

June 28, 2024 08:45 AM

Former Stable

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Blackbriar - Name - Bid

Wingspan - Rina Williams - 5k eb and Gold Showing token

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Edited at June 28, 2024 08:45 AM by Rina Williams

#1 KNLB Mare 188

June 28, 2024 09:02 AM

Cloverleaf Castle

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I'm sorry Rina, but I'm only accepting bids of EBs & they have to meet or exceed the listed price for the starting bid. Wingspan's starting bid is 220,000

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