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Alpine Acres
02:45:43 Lily
MK
I'd be happy to help :)
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:28:03 
Can someone help me narrow my herd? I did that capture quest and now I'm swamped :(
Gypsy Family Farm
02:13:03 
She's STUNNING!
Moonpaw Magic
01:54:33 Diva's pawsickles
Manchies are purdy
-HEE Click-
Golden Heart
01:50:59 Gold
ignore the horrendous spelling 0_0
Golden Heart
01:50:33 Gold
Im severly contemplating getting premioum xD

BUT, just becouse school starts in a month and i dont wanna buy a membership just to barely use it lol
Dash and Duchess
01:48:10 DD | ~Squizard~
I agree with diva! premium is incredibly worth it <3
Mooncreek Magic
01:44:13 Diva's fruits
Instead of item, get a premium. It will help you more
Wild Wind Stables
01:39:13 Wind
*Match her stats

I enjoy the challenge though!
Wild Wind Stables
01:38:46 Wind
WB and X. I'm trying to do patterns and rating simultaneously so it's been a little hard to find stallions who have the right coat, catch her stats, have good ratings, and have a breeding requirement under EEE
MK Sport Horse Yard
01:38:28 
Can we crossbreed on here?
Mooncreek Magic
01:35:15 Diva's fruits
What breed you do ?
Mooncreek Magic
01:33:26 Diva's fruits
Exactly
Wild Wind Stables
01:32:17 Wind
A strong producer means generally giving foals with the same or better rating than herself?
Wild Wind Stables
01:31:13 Wind
This is good to know, thank you! I really want to build my barn from the ground up, good to know that I can wait on the expensive stuff
Mooncreek Magic
01:29:28 Diva's fruits
I built my lines entirely from ssp combo wilds, it took me around 3+ years and I'm now up to eww, I would never waste items on epp rated horses. You need to develop lineage first and make sure they are strong producers with a good training to consider even an item. You don't want to waste money on random shits that will give you false results and halt progress
Black Dragon Stable
01:07:48 BDS / Black / Stormy
Value depends upon the person. I'm a player who likes the challenge of building my lines up from the ground. So it could be worth it (although I've never actually used a glass, medallion, of sven on any of my pairings).

With that said, at 3 months, I'd honestly wait vs throwing the money at one of those aids.
Lucky Ranch
01:05:12 luhckeigh
and EPP is not worth it, and neither is an EEE unless they are exceptional and have a super rare color, bravery, come from old lines, etc that sort of thing
save your money and wait
Lucky Ranch
01:04:02 luhckeigh
definitely wait
ZequineZ
01:00:01 ZEZ - ZZ
Wind I haven’t used many glasses but I would be patient and save it for the best match you can make that’s just lacking a little of something
But pretty sure sexed medallions guarantee the gender otherwise there would be no point having it on there

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Alpine Acres
02:45:43 Lily
MK
I'd be happy to help :)
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:28:03 
Can someone help me narrow my herd? I did that capture quest and now I'm swamped :(
Gypsy Family Farm
02:13:03 
She's STUNNING!
Moonpaw Magic
01:54:33 Diva's pawsickles
Manchies are purdy
-HEE Click-
Golden Heart
01:50:59 Gold
ignore the horrendous spelling 0_0
Golden Heart
01:50:33 Gold
Im severly contemplating getting premioum xD

BUT, just becouse school starts in a month and i dont wanna buy a membership just to barely use it lol
Dash and Duchess
01:48:10 DD | ~Squizard~
I agree with diva! premium is incredibly worth it <3
Mooncreek Magic
01:44:13 Diva's fruits
Instead of item, get a premium. It will help you more
Wild Wind Stables
01:39:13 Wind
*Match her stats

I enjoy the challenge though!
Wild Wind Stables
01:38:46 Wind
WB and X. I'm trying to do patterns and rating simultaneously so it's been a little hard to find stallions who have the right coat, catch her stats, have good ratings, and have a breeding requirement under EEE
MK Sport Horse Yard
01:38:28 
Can we crossbreed on here?
Mooncreek Magic
01:35:15 Diva's fruits
What breed you do ?
Mooncreek Magic
01:33:26 Diva's fruits
Exactly
Wild Wind Stables
01:32:17 Wind
A strong producer means generally giving foals with the same or better rating than herself?
Wild Wind Stables
01:31:13 Wind
This is good to know, thank you! I really want to build my barn from the ground up, good to know that I can wait on the expensive stuff
Mooncreek Magic
01:29:28 Diva's fruits
I built my lines entirely from ssp combo wilds, it took me around 3+ years and I'm now up to eww, I would never waste items on epp rated horses. You need to develop lineage first and make sure they are strong producers with a good training to consider even an item. You don't want to waste money on random shits that will give you false results and halt progress
Black Dragon Stable
01:07:48 BDS / Black / Stormy
Value depends upon the person. I'm a player who likes the challenge of building my lines up from the ground. So it could be worth it (although I've never actually used a glass, medallion, of sven on any of my pairings).

With that said, at 3 months, I'd honestly wait vs throwing the money at one of those aids.
Lucky Ranch
01:05:12 luhckeigh
and EPP is not worth it, and neither is an EEE unless they are exceptional and have a super rare color, bravery, come from old lines, etc that sort of thing
save your money and wait
Lucky Ranch
01:04:02 luhckeigh
definitely wait
ZequineZ
01:00:01 ZEZ - ZZ
Wind I haven’t used many glasses but I would be patient and save it for the best match you can make that’s just lacking a little of something
But pretty sure sexed medallions guarantee the gender otherwise there would be no point having it on there

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 19, 2020 08:38 PM

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This story is about a 12-year-old human-animal hybrid (called an Animorphi) named Auburn, her roommates, and an evil force planning to destroy the human population and let the Animorph rise to greatness. Here's the document, for those who wish to read:
(I changed the settings, it should work)
Any ideas? Comments? Constructive criticism?
PLEASE don't edit the document, leave comments instead!
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:34 PM

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hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:37 PM

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High Altitude Horses said:
hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3


Thank you! I've been going through and deleting all the unnecessary information

Edited at December 20, 2020 02:38 PM by SweetFire Fields

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