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Angels angels
04:49:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nope not on disney
Sunni
04:47:58 Sunni bunny
I'll be back later
Prismatic
04:47:25 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Speaking of Hulu, I've been bingeing Once Upon a Time. I can't stop watching it! (I've seen a lot of it before, but years and years ago)
Angels angels
04:45:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its on the hulu live tv thing but not regular hulu. It may be on disney though I will have to check
Sunni
04:45:17 Sunni bunny
Angel I feel that broke part, also awww, is it not on Hulu?
Angels angels
04:43:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dang I cant watch the bobs burgers movie Sunni
Angels angels
04:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was able to get up lol. I am too broke for takeout xD
Sunni
04:31:45 Sunni bunny
Angel you are stuck now, best to order take out.
Make sure you order a sacrifice for the cat to XD
Angels angels
04:12:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I know DX lol
Minerva
04:11:09 Min
Rules state dinner must wait then Angel- it's illegal to move a sleeping cat for any reason
Rainbow
04:10:53 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Angel
Guess you're getting takeout tonight lol
Angels angels
04:06:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to get up and make dinner but there is a cat sleeping on me..
Mythological
04:01:22 Crowley
Min
I'll PM you.
Minerva
03:58:49 Min
Oh no Myth, what's happened?
Angels angels
03:58:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Heonk
You must have added them with the wrong discipline selected
Mythological
03:57:39 Crowley
Because that's what the BM is set to?
Mythological
03:56:52 Crowley
Min
Not good.
Tharapita Acres
03:52:15 Heonk
why is my BM showing my SD XC horses in D
Minerva
03:48:57 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh looks like I can yeet quite a few of my E brave studs for next year 0-0
Ravenwood Farm
03:43:23 
Angel that's very true, perhaps I should try to ask for a late straw lol

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Angels angels
04:49:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nope not on disney
Sunni
04:47:58 Sunni bunny
I'll be back later
Prismatic
04:47:25 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Speaking of Hulu, I've been bingeing Once Upon a Time. I can't stop watching it! (I've seen a lot of it before, but years and years ago)
Angels angels
04:45:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its on the hulu live tv thing but not regular hulu. It may be on disney though I will have to check
Sunni
04:45:17 Sunni bunny
Angel I feel that broke part, also awww, is it not on Hulu?
Angels angels
04:43:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dang I cant watch the bobs burgers movie Sunni
Angels angels
04:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was able to get up lol. I am too broke for takeout xD
Sunni
04:31:45 Sunni bunny
Angel you are stuck now, best to order take out.
Make sure you order a sacrifice for the cat to XD
Angels angels
04:12:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I know DX lol
Minerva
04:11:09 Min
Rules state dinner must wait then Angel- it's illegal to move a sleeping cat for any reason
Rainbow
04:10:53 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Angel
Guess you're getting takeout tonight lol
Angels angels
04:06:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to get up and make dinner but there is a cat sleeping on me..
Mythological
04:01:22 Crowley
Min
I'll PM you.
Minerva
03:58:49 Min
Oh no Myth, what's happened?
Angels angels
03:58:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Heonk
You must have added them with the wrong discipline selected
Mythological
03:57:39 Crowley
Because that's what the BM is set to?
Mythological
03:56:52 Crowley
Min
Not good.
Tharapita Acres
03:52:15 Heonk
why is my BM showing my SD XC horses in D
Minerva
03:48:57 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh looks like I can yeet quite a few of my E brave studs for next year 0-0
Ravenwood Farm
03:43:23 
Angel that's very true, perhaps I should try to ask for a late straw lol

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Click Here for the Google doc
Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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