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Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:55 Arctic Katz
OMG, Peacock, he is incredible
Hummingbird Meadows
10:00:13 Bird
My goal with jumping is just to stay alive. Last thing I need is someone timing me and judging my form. XD
FirstLightFarms
09:42:47 puck
oof fair enough
Savannah Stables
09:42:16 Dusty
No i get how it works im just still salty about a judge at our last show, i think hunters can be fun if you like that sort of thing though
FirstLightFarms
09:40:39 puck
Nah it's okay I used to be a hater too. But I've done a few clinics with judges and knowing what they look for and really understanding how much of an art it can be is really cool
Lady ranger
09:39:51 
Geek
Yeah I get that
Savannah Stables
09:39:21 Dusty
I need to stop being such a hunters hater sorry
Lady ranger
09:38:58 
Geek

I'm sorry I have to go Goodnight!!
Savannah Stables
09:38:56 Dusty
I would recommend you dont start now then. Im glad jumpers is going well though!
Transformers Acres
09:38:43 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just tired of them all at this point.
FirstLightFarms
09:37:26 puck
I've never really done the hunters before and Evie's doing so well in the jumpers, finally moving up to the .90s, I don't want to take her focus off that, so I'm having a lot of fun just playing around with the idea of it on Cliff. Though it's gonna take a lot of work to really get him hunter ready. And maybe a pelham
Lady ranger
09:36:46 
Geek

For real I would be too. I completely understand your situation, stuff like this has happened to me a few times too.
Savannah Stables
09:35:03 Dusty
Im sure if you cry hard enough they'll let yall in the lead line class?
I do think cliff would do great with an ammy in the 2' though, theres some tough ones out there!
I somehow do at least half of my warmup courses backwards but ive never gone off of the actual course...
Im also like kind of tired of hunters though i dont think i want to do more of that lol
Transformers Acres
09:35:00 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just done with this shit. Every damn time I say something, it's always twisted or taken out of context. I'm just gonna keep my mouth shut now.
Aura Show Horses
09:34:49 Peacock/ Pea
-HEE Click- Peacock Brindle !
Lady ranger
09:33:23 
Geek

Yeah it seem like you know your nephew well enough to be able to joke about that and yeah if he's is starting school he will be no help at all
FirstLightFarms
09:31:28 puck
I think the jumpers I could do lower, and there's a few open flat classes that I'm hoping to do Lux in next year, but nothing really in the hunters unless I exclusively did warmup classes and didn't actually compete. Which. Meh. 😂

That's still pretty damn cool!
Transformers Acres
09:30:50 Geek, Eek
Lady

I understand that my sister wants our brother over at her place, considering he starts school in August, but that kid ain't gonna help her with the damn baby. I help her with everything, literally. He always used to get to go out, I rarely get to go out as it is.
Savannah Stables
09:29:32 Dusty
For just your local org? Im also a professional but they have some classes where i can do under 2'6
I did our long stirrup until this year cause its our under 21 class for some reason 😭 ours is also 2'3 i dont know what we're on
and they just like will let me do green horse classes depending on the vibes and also maybe large pony who the fuck knows

no theyre evil but they like me lol
ive somehow convinced everyone i know how to ride after my horse came around and theres another evil pony that behaves exclusively for me and no one will believe me its just because im really quiet
Lady ranger
09:28:59 
Geek
Okay wow that's crazy like if your relationship is like that the I see no reason to flip out about the joke
Yeah I would be too I'm sorry

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Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:55 Arctic Katz
OMG, Peacock, he is incredible
Hummingbird Meadows
10:00:13 Bird
My goal with jumping is just to stay alive. Last thing I need is someone timing me and judging my form. XD
FirstLightFarms
09:42:47 puck
oof fair enough
Savannah Stables
09:42:16 Dusty
No i get how it works im just still salty about a judge at our last show, i think hunters can be fun if you like that sort of thing though
FirstLightFarms
09:40:39 puck
Nah it's okay I used to be a hater too. But I've done a few clinics with judges and knowing what they look for and really understanding how much of an art it can be is really cool
Lady ranger
09:39:51 
Geek
Yeah I get that
Savannah Stables
09:39:21 Dusty
I need to stop being such a hunters hater sorry
Lady ranger
09:38:58 
Geek

I'm sorry I have to go Goodnight!!
Savannah Stables
09:38:56 Dusty
I would recommend you dont start now then. Im glad jumpers is going well though!
Transformers Acres
09:38:43 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just tired of them all at this point.
FirstLightFarms
09:37:26 puck
I've never really done the hunters before and Evie's doing so well in the jumpers, finally moving up to the .90s, I don't want to take her focus off that, so I'm having a lot of fun just playing around with the idea of it on Cliff. Though it's gonna take a lot of work to really get him hunter ready. And maybe a pelham
Lady ranger
09:36:46 
Geek

For real I would be too. I completely understand your situation, stuff like this has happened to me a few times too.
Savannah Stables
09:35:03 Dusty
Im sure if you cry hard enough they'll let yall in the lead line class?
I do think cliff would do great with an ammy in the 2' though, theres some tough ones out there!
I somehow do at least half of my warmup courses backwards but ive never gone off of the actual course...
Im also like kind of tired of hunters though i dont think i want to do more of that lol
Transformers Acres
09:35:00 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just done with this shit. Every damn time I say something, it's always twisted or taken out of context. I'm just gonna keep my mouth shut now.
Aura Show Horses
09:34:49 Peacock/ Pea
-HEE Click- Peacock Brindle !
Lady ranger
09:33:23 
Geek

Yeah it seem like you know your nephew well enough to be able to joke about that and yeah if he's is starting school he will be no help at all
FirstLightFarms
09:31:28 puck
I think the jumpers I could do lower, and there's a few open flat classes that I'm hoping to do Lux in next year, but nothing really in the hunters unless I exclusively did warmup classes and didn't actually compete. Which. Meh. 😂

That's still pretty damn cool!
Transformers Acres
09:30:50 Geek, Eek
Lady

I understand that my sister wants our brother over at her place, considering he starts school in August, but that kid ain't gonna help her with the damn baby. I help her with everything, literally. He always used to get to go out, I rarely get to go out as it is.
Savannah Stables
09:29:32 Dusty
For just your local org? Im also a professional but they have some classes where i can do under 2'6
I did our long stirrup until this year cause its our under 21 class for some reason 😭 ours is also 2'3 i dont know what we're on
and they just like will let me do green horse classes depending on the vibes and also maybe large pony who the fuck knows

no theyre evil but they like me lol
ive somehow convinced everyone i know how to ride after my horse came around and theres another evil pony that behaves exclusively for me and no one will believe me its just because im really quiet
Lady ranger
09:28:59 
Geek
Okay wow that's crazy like if your relationship is like that the I see no reason to flip out about the joke
Yeah I would be too I'm sorry

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Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:38 AM

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Emilie
7 Days before the incident.
Ring, ring, ring. "Oh for god's sake." I pull the blankets off my bed as I get up, still groggy from the night before, and slightly angry because of the news I was given. Both my parents had told me that in two weeks they were going on a seven day long cruise on a big, fancy cruise ship, while I got stuck with my aunt at her house. While I made my bed and brushed my teeth, I thought about what I was going to do at my aunt's house. Sure, my aunt and two cousins who live there are nice and all, but there's nothing really interesting to do. Unless I bring my laptop and phone. I grab my laptop and my phone, along with the appropriate chargers, my toothbrush and sensitivity toothpaste, my blanket, my purple pillow, and an extension cord so I can charge my phone and my computer at the same time. Feeling prepared for when my parents leave, I finish making my bed, I go down the stairs, and feed our fish. After the fish are fed, I open the door to the pantry and grab a mini box of Rice Krispies cereal. The sugar is sitting where it always is, beside the kettle, so I grab that and a spoon too. I sprinkle a little sugar on my cereal (okay, fine, a lot), pour in the milk, and begin to eat. Once my cereal is done, I place the empty bowl beside the sink and head back up to my room.I forgot to turn off the light in my closet. I open the closet door a crack and peep through the gap, I hate my closet. The place creeps me out. My closet is a big, square, walk in closet with many shelves and bins. On the very top shelf, there is a set of Five china dolls, all still in the original packaging. Three of them, all in boxes, are stacked one on top of the other, the other doll in a box is propped up on the wall facing the outside so you can see her, the last doll, a large collectors doll sitting on a miniature version of a childrens rocking horse is in a clear foil bag. That doll was haphazardly tossed up there when we moved in, so it lays face down.I open the closet door the rest of the way, and look around. The closet is big enough for me to stretch out my arms completely, and still have an inch or two left on both sides before I touch the walls. I stick my head in and turn to face the inside, since the light switch is on the left side of the door when you come in, you have to bend around the door to hit the switch. Once the light is off, I take one more look, and shut the door.I enter my brothers bedroom and nearly choke on the scent of fresh paint. My brothers bedroom walls have just been repainted, the white sideboards retouched. A large Oilers mural stared at me, I left the room, I was getting a headache from that stupid paint smell. My mother called from downstairs, “Em, would you grab me a Pepsi from the fridge in the basement please? It's in the bar.”Great. I hate the basement. My dad is a hunter, and because of that he decided to put the cured head of his first deer on the wall behind the bar. Our basement has a weird layout, one you go down the stairs you turn to your left to get into the main hall. After you step over a bump that signals the change from tile to hardwood, you can see that the bar is to the left in front of you, and to your right there is a large couch that folds out into a guest bed. Then, when you get to the bar there is a small hallway with a door to my father's “Hunting room,” that is the place where he keeps his bows and rifles, we also have a meat freezer in there. At the end of the hall is a door leading to a very creepy spare bedroom, the lights in there have been dimmed with years worth of dust, and the mirror is caked with smudges and fingerprints. We have a lot of moving boxes in there, and the bed has been striped of blankets and sheets. There is another walk in closet, this one about half the size of mine, and the closet in this room is an odd triangular shape. There is a single metal bar across the top half of the closet, probably for clothing hangers, I decided.As I examined the closet, I noticed that all the water pipes in the small space were visible, whereas in the rest of the house the pipes are hidden beneath the house and in the walls. I left the room to explore the bar. My dad had a large bunch of deer skulls in the room, including a deer that was intact from the shoulders up. That thing creeped me out, the eyes on the deer seem to follow you as you move about the room. I swear sometimes I see his muzzle moving.I grab the Pepsi for my mom and turn off the lights as I dash up the stairs. I hand the Pepsi to my mother. “Thanks, Em.” She says, but I am already back in my room. I flip through my Social Media accounts, and decide to plug in my phone. Once my phone is charging, I head back into the basement. I grab what I need to make some cake for myself, and I head back upstairs. I put the ingredients out on the counter, and begin to mix the batter. Once the batter is done, I grease the pans with butter, and pour the delicious mixture into the baking trays. I then slip them into the oven, and watch them bake.

The acctual book has paragraph indents, spaces after periods, and proper novel format, the forums just wont let me post that here though xD

Tell me what you think <3

Edited at May 22, 2019 08:34 PM by Golden Meadows
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:48 AM

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Golden, this was absolutely amazing to read! Fun fact, I hate reading lol. I decided to read a couple of sentences of this and ended up reading the whole thing since it caught my attention so much! I can't wait to read more, great job!
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:49 AM

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Wanderlusts Dream said:
Golden, this was absolutely amazing to read! Fun fact, I hate reading lol. I decided to read a couple of sentences of this and ended up reading the whole thing since it caught my attention so much! I can't wait to read more, great job!


Awwe, thank you so much <333

This is based off my real experiences, even the basement in the story is a real description of my actual baswment :D
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:51 AM

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Golden Meadows said:


Wanderlusts Dream said:
Golden, this was absolutely amazing to read! Fun fact, I hate reading lol. I decided to read a couple of sentences of this and ended up reading the whole thing since it caught my attention so much! I can't wait to read more, great job!


Awwe, thank you so much <333

This is based off my real experiences, even the basement in the story is a real description of my actual baswment :D


Oh wow, that's super cool! This is such a unique story :D
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:53 AM

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Wanderlusts Dream said:


Golden Meadows said:


Wanderlusts Dream said:
Golden, this was absolutely amazing to read! Fun fact, I hate reading lol. I decided to read a couple of sentences of this and ended up reading the whole thing since it caught my attention so much! I can't wait to read more, great job!


Awwe, thank you so much <333

This is based off my real experiences, even the basement in the story is a real description of my actual baswment :D


Oh wow, that's super cool! This is such a unique story :D


<3333

Another thing,

The book flips between 2 characters (representing me and my real life friend) and their experiences with the doll :DD

Edited at May 16, 2019 08:55 AM by Golden Meadows
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 08:59 AM

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Basement isle after the stairs:
https://i.postimg.cc/3RbS9STL/20190516-080530.jpg

Mr. Deer:
https://i.postimg.cc/DZyf1Zvr/20190516-080544.jpg

And, le dolls:
https://i.postimg.cc/0N1bKPKn/20190516-080414.jpg


Edited at May 16, 2019 09:16 AM by Golden Meadows
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 09:14 AM


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I LOVE that! I wish there was more, as I am an avid reader, and hate not being able to finish good stories 0^0
Love the photos to XD

Edited at May 16, 2019 09:15 AM by in memory of sugar
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 09:15 AM

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So cool! Will you be adding more to the book here on this forum?
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 09:15 AM

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in memory of sugar said:
I love that! I wish there was more, as I am an avid reader, and hate not being able to finish good stories 0^0


:PPP

I will probably post more chapters as I finish them :D
Glass Eyes - Sneak Peek May 16, 2019 09:16 AM

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Wanderlusts Dream said:
So cool! Will you be adding more to the book here on this forum?


As I do the chapters, yes :D

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