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Sunset River Arabian
08:33:31 Athena - AAs
I don't like how they dont spook. It makes the LB a mess
Sunni
08:33:29 Sunni bunny
Can I just say, I love apple juice.
Anytime I feel sick and drink it I feel better.
Sunni
08:30:57 Sunni bunny
Cove my WC hasn't been spooking at all so far.
Love this update.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:29 Arctic Katz
I don't even bother training them unless they are premium, Elite or World Class bravery
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:54 Athena - AAs
usually to Angels lol
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:46 Athena - AAs
Even the chimmie and brindle ones who arent get tosses out
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:22 Athena - AAs
I only keep pretty E braves or Ws
Sunni
08:26:46 Sunni bunny
I only keep bravery is they are P or higher.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:25:49 Arctic Katz
The sub par and average ones
Glacier Bay Cove
08:25:26 Arctic Katz
The next barn I purchase will be for my lousy brave horses
Legacy Leagues
08:24:52 Alyssa (Future Vet)
This RO and last RO were my most expensive in a while.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:24:37 Arctic Katz
Cool, Athena
Sunni
08:23:15 Sunni bunny
Athena nice,
Sunset River Arabian
08:22:42 Athena - AAs
I decided to start a new barn lol
-HEE Click-
For when I feel like wasting money
Sunni
08:20:23 Sunni bunny
Plus I got a ton of anti nausea.
Sunni
08:19:54 Sunni bunny
Cove don't be sorry, things happen.
Best thing you can do is keep going on.
It only hurts me because I couldn't do for my kids.
Plus am better than I have been.
And when flares up do happen my husband makes things easier.
He does everything for the kids, but am the working one so XD
I hope they call me tomorrow about that job.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:28 Arctic Katz
Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:23 Arctic Katz
Oh, my goodness, I am so sorry, Sunji
Sunset River Arabian
08:17:21 Athena - AAs
Just a multitude of diffent things. Some minor some that hinder my life at times but they're all so broad or not bad enough to be anything
Glacier Bay Cove
08:16:52 Arctic Katz
I bought some cookbooks and I use them a lot

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Sunset River Arabian
08:33:31 Athena - AAs
I don't like how they dont spook. It makes the LB a mess
Sunni
08:33:29 Sunni bunny
Can I just say, I love apple juice.
Anytime I feel sick and drink it I feel better.
Sunni
08:30:57 Sunni bunny
Cove my WC hasn't been spooking at all so far.
Love this update.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:29 Arctic Katz
I don't even bother training them unless they are premium, Elite or World Class bravery
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:54 Athena - AAs
usually to Angels lol
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:46 Athena - AAs
Even the chimmie and brindle ones who arent get tosses out
Sunset River Arabian
08:27:22 Athena - AAs
I only keep pretty E braves or Ws
Sunni
08:26:46 Sunni bunny
I only keep bravery is they are P or higher.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:25:49 Arctic Katz
The sub par and average ones
Glacier Bay Cove
08:25:26 Arctic Katz
The next barn I purchase will be for my lousy brave horses
Legacy Leagues
08:24:52 Alyssa (Future Vet)
This RO and last RO were my most expensive in a while.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:24:37 Arctic Katz
Cool, Athena
Sunni
08:23:15 Sunni bunny
Athena nice,
Sunset River Arabian
08:22:42 Athena - AAs
I decided to start a new barn lol
-HEE Click-
For when I feel like wasting money
Sunni
08:20:23 Sunni bunny
Plus I got a ton of anti nausea.
Sunni
08:19:54 Sunni bunny
Cove don't be sorry, things happen.
Best thing you can do is keep going on.
It only hurts me because I couldn't do for my kids.
Plus am better than I have been.
And when flares up do happen my husband makes things easier.
He does everything for the kids, but am the working one so XD
I hope they call me tomorrow about that job.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:28 Arctic Katz
Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:23 Arctic Katz
Oh, my goodness, I am so sorry, Sunji
Sunset River Arabian
08:17:21 Athena - AAs
Just a multitude of diffent things. Some minor some that hinder my life at times but they're all so broad or not bad enough to be anything
Glacier Bay Cove
08:16:52 Arctic Katz
I bought some cookbooks and I use them a lot

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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