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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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