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Rose Trails Barn
01:25:14 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Kittens*
Rose Trails Barn
01:24:57 Echo/ Eco Friendly
These little are crushing my legs.
~Emerald Acres Stud~
01:24:20 |Swifty|
@Dogwood:
Wow he's beautiful!
Dogwood Hill Stables
01:22:51 Dogwood/Lady
-HEE Click-
Pretty boy has been many years in the making. I squealed when I rated him.
Pinkmocha Stables
01:20:33 
-HEE Click- pretty girl <3
Wolf Dancer
01:18:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Zebz
Nice!
Dash and Duchess
01:15:59 DD | ~Squizard~
i wear a lot of random jewelry and it stains me a bunch xD
Dash and Duchess
01:15:43 DD | ~Squizard~
echo, use an alchohol wipe or rubbing alchohol, it removes the green with no hassle!
Rose Trails Barn
01:13:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'm wearing a ring and it's made of copper but it always leaves a green mark.
Rose Trails Barn
01:13:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I don't like copper..
Purely Painted
01:05:38 Zebz SA
So. This is cool… guess the game decided to give me a welcome back present! -HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
12:56:05 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I like sharing :3
Rose Trails Barn
12:54:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Of coucourse doll
Pinkmocha Stables
12:49:24 
Thank you so much T-T
Pinkmocha Stables
12:49:07 
I didn’t deserve that!
Pinkmocha Stables
12:48:52 
I’m going to cherish this beautiful girl ;pink heart;
Pinkmocha Stables
12:46:47 
What is the pastureland thing
Imperial Topaz Farms
12:46:37 
Can someone explain to me why she didn't rate EWE or EEW? I thought I matched her parents pretty well, considering she's my 1st ever homebred, so did I do something wrong while matching, or was I just not lucky?

-HEE Click-
Pinkmocha Stables
12:46:35 
Alr :p
Rose Trails Barn
12:45:37 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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Rose Trails Barn
01:25:14 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Kittens*
Rose Trails Barn
01:24:57 Echo/ Eco Friendly
These little are crushing my legs.
~Emerald Acres Stud~
01:24:20 |Swifty|
@Dogwood:
Wow he's beautiful!
Dogwood Hill Stables
01:22:51 Dogwood/Lady
-HEE Click-
Pretty boy has been many years in the making. I squealed when I rated him.
Pinkmocha Stables
01:20:33 
-HEE Click- pretty girl <3
Wolf Dancer
01:18:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Zebz
Nice!
Dash and Duchess
01:15:59 DD | ~Squizard~
i wear a lot of random jewelry and it stains me a bunch xD
Dash and Duchess
01:15:43 DD | ~Squizard~
echo, use an alchohol wipe or rubbing alchohol, it removes the green with no hassle!
Rose Trails Barn
01:13:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'm wearing a ring and it's made of copper but it always leaves a green mark.
Rose Trails Barn
01:13:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I don't like copper..
Purely Painted
01:05:38 Zebz SA
So. This is cool… guess the game decided to give me a welcome back present! -HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
12:56:05 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I like sharing :3
Rose Trails Barn
12:54:52 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Of coucourse doll
Pinkmocha Stables
12:49:24 
Thank you so much T-T
Pinkmocha Stables
12:49:07 
I didn’t deserve that!
Pinkmocha Stables
12:48:52 
I’m going to cherish this beautiful girl ;pink heart;
Pinkmocha Stables
12:46:47 
What is the pastureland thing
Imperial Topaz Farms
12:46:37 
Can someone explain to me why she didn't rate EWE or EEW? I thought I matched her parents pretty well, considering she's my 1st ever homebred, so did I do something wrong while matching, or was I just not lucky?

-HEE Click-
Pinkmocha Stables
12:46:35 
Alr :p
Rose Trails Barn
12:45:37 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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