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Sweet Valley
12:45:45 Anna/Jewel
Good for you C. I'm pretty sure I did around 100. Who else here are West? I am and so is C
Sunset Hills Ranch
12:45:35 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Holy crap. I'm not even done and I have 1,287ebs. I can't capture anymore :'(
Transformers Acres
12:45:18 Geek, Eek
My first PEE this capture party!

-HEE Click-
CWY country
12:44:53 C
After doing 300 captures, I am done.
Two Trees Stables
12:44:38 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Yes!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
12:44:35 Fish
going to try with capture passes now but that EEE is probably going to remain the best
Two Trees Stables
12:44:10 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
That's rude
Sweet Valley
12:44:08 Anna/Jewel
Nice!



Who all here are Westies?
Fantasy Horses
12:43:26 Fantasy
First adv. map is a failure...
-HEE Click-
Now to wait for an upgrade to rate the rest >>
Two Trees Stables
12:43:03 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
No way!!!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
12:41:43 Fish
So im all out of maps and it's not great so far... Here are my best captures, all mares:
-HEE Click- EEE palomino
-HEE Click- WEP with lace
-HEE Click- white PEW
-HEE Click- PEE perlino
Rainbow
12:41:10 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Not the worst rating, and also very pretty lady
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
12:41:08 Stalker of Chat
Ohh nono I LOVE rabi XD
Two Trees Stables
12:40:38 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Willow
I mean, if you don't want her
Willow Grove
12:40:32 Stalker of Chat
And my only other win
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
12:40:00 Stalker of Chat
Rabicano 🥹
-HEE Click-
Watercolour
12:38:44 
-HEE Click-

Well that is just rude lol
Two Trees Stables
12:38:39 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Cappuccino
Watching him
Rainbow
12:38:30 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Capp
Woo!

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Sweet Valley
12:45:45 Anna/Jewel
Good for you C. I'm pretty sure I did around 100. Who else here are West? I am and so is C
Sunset Hills Ranch
12:45:35 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Holy crap. I'm not even done and I have 1,287ebs. I can't capture anymore :'(
Transformers Acres
12:45:18 Geek, Eek
My first PEE this capture party!

-HEE Click-
CWY country
12:44:53 C
After doing 300 captures, I am done.
Two Trees Stables
12:44:38 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Yes!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
12:44:35 Fish
going to try with capture passes now but that EEE is probably going to remain the best
Two Trees Stables
12:44:10 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
That's rude
Sweet Valley
12:44:08 Anna/Jewel
Nice!



Who all here are Westies?
Fantasy Horses
12:43:26 Fantasy
First adv. map is a failure...
-HEE Click-
Now to wait for an upgrade to rate the rest >>
Two Trees Stables
12:43:03 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
No way!!!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
12:41:43 Fish
So im all out of maps and it's not great so far... Here are my best captures, all mares:
-HEE Click- EEE palomino
-HEE Click- WEP with lace
-HEE Click- white PEW
-HEE Click- PEE perlino
Rainbow
12:41:10 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Not the worst rating, and also very pretty lady
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
12:41:08 Stalker of Chat
Ohh nono I LOVE rabi XD
Two Trees Stables
12:40:38 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Willow
I mean, if you don't want her
Willow Grove
12:40:32 Stalker of Chat
And my only other win
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
12:40:00 Stalker of Chat
Rabicano 🥹
-HEE Click-
Watercolour
12:38:44 
-HEE Click-

Well that is just rude lol
Two Trees Stables
12:38:39 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Cappuccino
Watching him
Rainbow
12:38:30 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Capp
Woo!

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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