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Rainbow
Yay! Let's go! I have a few I want to try if you're down
Rainbow
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Red
Yeah I'm down for racing :D
MakeEm Fancy
10:17:11 Ally 💜
Woah
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:08:45 Arctic Katz
That is a gorgeous stallion, Louise
Red Horizon Ranch
09:53:21 Red
Anyone down for some races?
DearBorn Ranch
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then my best boy pops her out -HEE Click-
DearBorn Ranch
09:36:43 Louise
sometimes testing freshmen pop a good one lol
Nightingales Ridge
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Wowweeee Louise
DearBorn Ranch
09:33:19 Louise
wow -HEE Click-
The Old Gods
09:28:47 Void Malign
It's wild that I'm now using AI for work. At least it's useful
Jazzyb23
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-HEE Click- such a shiny 1/1 foal and an e in jumping too
Transformers Acres
09:22:54 Geek, Eek
My family: Find God/Jesus.

Me, a HelPol: Um... I found other deities though.

True conversation. :')
Mythological
09:18:57 Crowley
Ven
Oh gods lol
Stormsong Manor
09:17:57 Ven
We had a meetup planned like... twelve years ago? It never materialized because the people who were planning it had some not so great ideas
Mythological
09:17:25 Crowley
Geek
My mom's dog never listens lol
Glacier Bay Cove
09:16:47 Arctic Katz
Unpopular idea of mine. What would it be like meeting you in person and talking about HEE
Transformers Acres
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Crowley

Nice. My dog, Sassy, growls whenever she's told to go join the living. She stays with me in my room, I hate socializing.
Mythological
09:04:56 Crowley
Told my mom's dog to come out and join the living and she actually came out from under the chair. 💀
The Night Circus
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Red Horizon Ranch
10:27:09 Red
Rainbow
Yay! Let's go! I have a few I want to try if you're down
Rainbow
10:25:54 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Red
Yeah I'm down for racing :D
MakeEm Fancy
10:17:11 Ally 💜
Woah
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:08:45 Arctic Katz
That is a gorgeous stallion, Louise
Red Horizon Ranch
09:53:21 Red
Anyone down for some races?
DearBorn Ranch
09:46:02 Louise
then my best boy pops her out -HEE Click-
DearBorn Ranch
09:36:43 Louise
sometimes testing freshmen pop a good one lol
Nightingales Ridge
09:35:25 Issy
Wowweeee Louise
DearBorn Ranch
09:33:19 Louise
wow -HEE Click-
The Old Gods
09:28:47 Void Malign
It's wild that I'm now using AI for work. At least it's useful
Jazzyb23
09:26:18 
-HEE Click- such a shiny 1/1 foal and an e in jumping too
Transformers Acres
09:22:54 Geek, Eek
My family: Find God/Jesus.

Me, a HelPol: Um... I found other deities though.

True conversation. :')
Mythological
09:18:57 Crowley
Ven
Oh gods lol
Stormsong Manor
09:17:57 Ven
We had a meetup planned like... twelve years ago? It never materialized because the people who were planning it had some not so great ideas
Mythological
09:17:25 Crowley
Geek
My mom's dog never listens lol
Glacier Bay Cove
09:16:47 Arctic Katz
Unpopular idea of mine. What would it be like meeting you in person and talking about HEE
Transformers Acres
09:09:13 Geek, Eek
Crowley

Nice. My dog, Sassy, growls whenever she's told to go join the living. She stays with me in my room, I hate socializing.
Mythological
09:04:56 Crowley
Told my mom's dog to come out and join the living and she actually came out from under the chair. 💀
The Night Circus
09:04:53 Columet
Thanks
Sunfeather Stables
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The Official Art Critique Forum March 11, 2021 10:03 PM

Former Stable
 
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Good start - the horse's painted/textured quality does not match the crisp background. Either make both of them textured like the horse, or work on the horse prep so it's more clear. A hard eraser will help with clear, defined outlines. Also, when crediting, you need to put the Unsplash photographer's username, not just Unsplash.com. Example, the author is Kevin Smith, you'd put kevinsmith@unsplash or something similar.

Nutmeg Ranch said:
Okay. So, I was thinking of maybe starting an art shop on HEE.
Here's one of my latest pieces. Is there a market for this kind of thing, and if so how much do you think it'd be worth?


The Official Art Critique Forum March 11, 2021 10:06 PM


Allspice Equine
 
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Good start - the horse's painted/textured quality does not match the crisp background. Either make both of them textured like the horse, or work on the horse prep so it's more clear. A hard eraser will help with clear, defined outlines. Also, when crediting, you need to put the Unsplash photographer's username, not just Unsplash.com. Example, the author is Kevin Smith, you'd put kevinsmith@unsplash or something similar.

Nutmeg Ranch said:
Okay. So, I was thinking of maybe starting an art shop on HEE.
Here's one of my latest pieces. Is there a market for this kind of thing, and if so how much do you think it'd be worth?


Okay! Thank you so much, I was a bit confused about the unsplash thing.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 12, 2021 02:56 AM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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CC Knabbstruppers said:

Aylesbury Manor said:
I'll be brutally honest here, so prepare yourself: I love this piece xD
Anyways, there's a few little things that I would have done differently. I would lower the brightness on those highlights; they're a tad much. I would do a slight vignette, especially around the bottom, and make it blurred around the edge too. I am not a master of dust, but the dust in this looks a little blocky and dark at the front, but the back is super well done.
overall, I hecking love this thing. Those horns? Fucking gorgeous.


Ahhh! Thank you so much! ^^ I'll definitely keep those in mind! :D

Also, was hoping for a critique on this one too XD

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so the first thin i notice about this piece is that the BG and horse don't quite match. the horse's dark roan parts like the head are wa too red and need to be covered in light from the BG. i also notice that the horse's lower legs look a bit too briht, maybe darken them just a little. i love love love the tail, but the mane needs some work. the ends look a bit clumped, like you used a round brush. maybe smudge it just a little? oh and maybe add some lighter bits around the de because of the sun. despite all that i love this piece and would definitely buy it.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 17, 2021 08:55 PM


White Oak Manor
 
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Apprehensive about posting this here because I think I probably could've done better. But I feel like I've hit a wall here and would like some pointers.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2021 03:49 PM


Foxfeathers
 
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My art pales in comparission to the beautiful art I see here, to the point where I'm just about ashamed to even ask what people think of mine. I don't and can't use a tablet, just gimp and a mouse, so when critiquing please keep that in mind when offering advice.

But I'm pretty proud of this and consider it one of my best recolors/pretty good. Any thoughts?

Click Meh


The Official Art Critique Forum March 19, 2021 12:21 PM


Allspice Equine
 
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WysperedMythos Manor said:
My art pales in comparission to the beautiful art I see here, to the point where I'm just about ashamed to even ask what people think of mine. I don't and can't use a tablet, just gimp and a mouse, so when critiquing please keep that in mind when offering advice.

But I'm pretty proud of this and consider it one of my best recolors/pretty good. Any thoughts?

Click Meh




Okay, so I think this is pretty good. I'm assuming you took some stock and cute out the horse. The horse cut-out (if it was cut out) looks a little bumpy and uneven. A hard eraser can help with that. Also; lighting. Lighting is pretty hard for me, but you can find some good tutorials and examples. This is a good start!
The Official Art Critique Forum March 19, 2021 01:48 PM


Foxfeathers
 
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Nutmeg Ranch said:

WysperedMythos Manor said:
My art pales in comparission to the beautiful art I see here, to the point where I'm just about ashamed to even ask what people think of mine. I don't and can't use a tablet, just gimp and a mouse, so when critiquing please keep that in mind when offering advice.

But I'm pretty proud of this and consider it one of my best recolors/pretty good. Any thoughts?

Click Meh




Okay, so I think this is pretty good. I'm assuming you took some stock and cute out the horse. The horse cut-out (if it was cut out) looks a little bumpy and uneven. A hard eraser can help with that. Also; lighting. Lighting is pretty hard for me, but you can find some good tutorials and examples. This is a good start!
While I normally do do my own cutting-I didn't do this one. It seemed fine before, so I think I fucked up while recoloring it and THAT'S what caused the unevenness.

Lighting is the bane of my existence. >.>

Thank you!

Edited at March 19, 2021 01:48 PM by WysperedMythos Manor
The Official Art Critique Forum March 20, 2021 08:18 AM


Nightshade Stables
 
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I'm pretty proud of this one and think it's one of my best ones yet but of course I still have tons to improve on, so if someone could give me some ideas of what parts still need work that would be much appreciated :)
(ignore the little transparent bit in the bottom left corner, I somehow accidentally did that when exporting the full image lol)

Edited at March 20, 2021 08:19 AM by Night Shadow Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum March 27, 2021 06:34 PM


Zomb
 
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I am yet to finish this (brighter eye + blue hair tintish to come) but just wondered what ya'll thought to these!
**I also plan on making a premade shop, so any pricing help would also be appreciated*



The Official Art Critique Forum March 28, 2021 12:38 AM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Plan on getting consistent....I think I'll stick with my process with this one! I'm in love with it! What could I do better for my next piece(s)? (I definitely plan on cleaning up the blur process even more, I had a heck of a time with it XD

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