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Mythological
09:34:58 Crowley
Chey
I have anxiety when Tim gets hurt so I tend to over react. The sick dog is my moms.
Angels angels
09:34:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chey
Do you know his final height?
ShiningStar Stables
09:33:17 Chey / Star
Ari & Angel

Thanks! My retired mare finally decided to give me something decent
ShiningStar Stables
09:32:18 Chey / Star
Myth
Damn. I'm sorry. Hopefully things start looking up
I've been good recently, for the most part
Mythological
09:30:10 Crowley
Autocorrect strikes again
Mythological
09:29:25 Crowley
Chey
Not good...Got a dog that might possibly die and my own dog skinned his ear today... You?
The Joker
09:28:45 Ari <3
*Chey
The Joker
09:28:41 Ari <3
Oh he's cool They 👀
ShiningStar Stables
09:27:48 Chey / Star
Hey Myth!
How have you been?
Angels angels
09:27:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohh I like him Chey!

I think after RO I am going to try to thin out my breeding stock. 20 is a little much xD
Mythological
09:27:07 Crowley
Hey Chey!
ShiningStar Stables
09:26:24 Chey / Star
I have to test this dude with barely any training so that's gonna be fun xD
-HEE Click-
The Joker
09:26:07 Ari <3
Made quite a lot of headway on an apricot program too :P
Angels angels
09:26:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ari
Yoloing is fun lol
The Joker
09:25:33 Ari <3
I'm just going to YOLO this year I think, I got some really nice babies last year doing that
Angels angels
09:25:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You helped me even more!

I wonder if anyone is going to prove themselves enough to deserve a sven next RO lol
MakeEm Fancy
09:23:47 Ally 💜
Oh no you already did so much 🥺
Angels angels
09:23:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ah
Can't help there xD
MakeEm Fancy
09:23:14 Ally 💜
Another sven
Angels angels
09:23:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Mythological
09:34:58 Crowley
Chey
I have anxiety when Tim gets hurt so I tend to over react. The sick dog is my moms.
Angels angels
09:34:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chey
Do you know his final height?
ShiningStar Stables
09:33:17 Chey / Star
Ari & Angel

Thanks! My retired mare finally decided to give me something decent
ShiningStar Stables
09:32:18 Chey / Star
Myth
Damn. I'm sorry. Hopefully things start looking up
I've been good recently, for the most part
Mythological
09:30:10 Crowley
Autocorrect strikes again
Mythological
09:29:25 Crowley
Chey
Not good...Got a dog that might possibly die and my own dog skinned his ear today... You?
The Joker
09:28:45 Ari <3
*Chey
The Joker
09:28:41 Ari <3
Oh he's cool They 👀
ShiningStar Stables
09:27:48 Chey / Star
Hey Myth!
How have you been?
Angels angels
09:27:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohh I like him Chey!

I think after RO I am going to try to thin out my breeding stock. 20 is a little much xD
Mythological
09:27:07 Crowley
Hey Chey!
ShiningStar Stables
09:26:24 Chey / Star
I have to test this dude with barely any training so that's gonna be fun xD
-HEE Click-
The Joker
09:26:07 Ari <3
Made quite a lot of headway on an apricot program too :P
Angels angels
09:26:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ari
Yoloing is fun lol
The Joker
09:25:33 Ari <3
I'm just going to YOLO this year I think, I got some really nice babies last year doing that
Angels angels
09:25:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You helped me even more!

I wonder if anyone is going to prove themselves enough to deserve a sven next RO lol
MakeEm Fancy
09:23:47 Ally 💜
Oh no you already did so much 🥺
Angels angels
09:23:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ah
Can't help there xD
MakeEm Fancy
09:23:14 Ally 💜
Another sven
Angels angels
09:23:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
What do you need the credits for?

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Critiques and Pricing Help? October 9, 2024 02:38 PM


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Okay I am finally on my computer on my lunch break, so I have been able to actually open the picture haha.
So here are my thoughts on what currently sticks out to me.

1. The eye, to me it does look slightly unnatural. Of course you can do what ever color you want but making a round eye doesnt exactly like a horses real eye.
I am going to attach a picture of my 2 recent pieces just as an example as you will be able to open it up to full detail.
I mainly would just love to see a more realistic eye, i feel like that really makes a difference :D
Floresta Pastel Bio Pic 09-26-2024 Kepler Wings - Serotonin Bio Pic

2. Shading and Highlights in the main and tail.
Your shaping of the hair is amazing and you absolutely have the right idea but light tends to catch on a harsher level. Again you can look at mine (the floresta one would probably be a good example), of course I too am still improving on the hair shadows etc
Basically it the shading and highlights need to be slightly more crisp.

3. Body highlight and shadows.
Again kind of similar to the hair, im not sure what your body prep process is. I myself have just started to do major shadow and highlight improvement on stock. I can see that you most likely do some as well which is amazing, i feel like it changes a piece entirely, however again light does hit thing more crisp. The main example i can give is on the last pieces face, the highlights are almost too blown out. Making the size of your brush smaller will help this, adding the highlights and then using a smudging tool (im assuming your app that you use has this as its usually fairly standard). It helps you soften the edges and keeping the center more consentrated.


These are the main things I can comment on. Im still improving on my own stuff as well even in Tier 1 so some things i mention are also things im working on for myself too haha

I hope this helps!

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