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Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:34 Arctic Katz
My barns are completely disorganised
Lilac Fields
11:47:29 Lillie
Angel
same, its gotten to the point I have 2 100 stall barns just for sorting lmao
Snitches' Stitches
11:47:12 Snitch
Angel
I kept a lot more horses from capture day than I thought I would and now I'm just trying to save up enough money to buy a couple more barns and not be wiped from it lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:06 Arctic Katz
Super excited about my peacock horse
MakeEm Fancy
11:46:53 Ally 💜
I atill have one barn thats a mix of geldings and quest horses but have no more spaces lol
Angels angels
11:45:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I keep my barns organized for the most part, except my sort barn lol. Those are horses I bought or was given that need to be put away. I normally procrastinate that
Fire_Rescue
11:45:19 
What should I name my rider? and what gender?
MakeEm Fancy
11:44:15 Ally 💜
Yes lol
Snitches' Stitches
11:44:04 Snitch
Ally
Currently have a barn full of horses I'm gonna FR next RO and my barns are still a mess from capture day
Fire_Rescue
11:42:49 
ok thanks
Angels angels
11:42:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
Yay lol Doesn't it feel good?
I am entering shows ;-;
Angels angels
11:42:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Send me a message through mail (personal message)
Fire_Rescue
11:41:59 
what dose pm mean?
MakeEm Fancy
11:41:55 Ally 💜
20 horses FRed and barns sorted
Angels angels
11:41:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fire
Careful asking things like that in main, you could get in trouble ;)
Just pm me
Pegasus Lane
11:41:19 Peggy (or) Peg
Well, not convinced I love this new set, considering I threw it together in 20 minutes 🙃
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:49 Arctic Katz
Banana bread smell, so yummy
Fire_Rescue
11:40:27 
Hey Angel Can I please get (C) Library Hunter?
Angels angels
11:33:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol DD

Damn it smells good in here with the banana bread baking
ShiningStar Stables
11:33:20 Chey / Star
I have entirely to many colts for someone who hates testing freshies... lol

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Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:34 Arctic Katz
My barns are completely disorganised
Lilac Fields
11:47:29 Lillie
Angel
same, its gotten to the point I have 2 100 stall barns just for sorting lmao
Snitches' Stitches
11:47:12 Snitch
Angel
I kept a lot more horses from capture day than I thought I would and now I'm just trying to save up enough money to buy a couple more barns and not be wiped from it lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:06 Arctic Katz
Super excited about my peacock horse
MakeEm Fancy
11:46:53 Ally 💜
I atill have one barn thats a mix of geldings and quest horses but have no more spaces lol
Angels angels
11:45:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I keep my barns organized for the most part, except my sort barn lol. Those are horses I bought or was given that need to be put away. I normally procrastinate that
Fire_Rescue
11:45:19 
What should I name my rider? and what gender?
MakeEm Fancy
11:44:15 Ally 💜
Yes lol
Snitches' Stitches
11:44:04 Snitch
Ally
Currently have a barn full of horses I'm gonna FR next RO and my barns are still a mess from capture day
Fire_Rescue
11:42:49 
ok thanks
Angels angels
11:42:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
Yay lol Doesn't it feel good?
I am entering shows ;-;
Angels angels
11:42:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Send me a message through mail (personal message)
Fire_Rescue
11:41:59 
what dose pm mean?
MakeEm Fancy
11:41:55 Ally 💜
20 horses FRed and barns sorted
Angels angels
11:41:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fire
Careful asking things like that in main, you could get in trouble ;)
Just pm me
Pegasus Lane
11:41:19 Peggy (or) Peg
Well, not convinced I love this new set, considering I threw it together in 20 minutes 🙃
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:49 Arctic Katz
Banana bread smell, so yummy
Fire_Rescue
11:40:27 
Hey Angel Can I please get (C) Library Hunter?
Angels angels
11:33:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol DD

Damn it smells good in here with the banana bread baking
ShiningStar Stables
11:33:20 Chey / Star
I have entirely to many colts for someone who hates testing freshies... lol

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So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:06 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Long ago, it was prophecised that Auspren would fall, become but a whisper of ashes on the wind, nothing but a shadow.
It was at this moment that Lady Ellia, Hand to Queen Layla Briareigh of Auspren, kicked the star reader out of the palace.
"And don't come back," she snarled, silver locks flying, the moonlight shining on the sharp, wickedly beautiful lines of her face.
Being Fae, Lady Ellia had seen many centuries. She had been one of the founders of Auspren, along with the queen and a small group of loner Fae, whom she and Layla had lost contact with. Ellia assumed they had simply erased all traces of their identity, though it was a possibility they were dead. She shuddered at the thought.
Ellia did wonder for a minute if what the star reader said was true. No. Layla was a strong queen, Auspren was a strong country, and on top of that, they had a few million soldiers simply waiting for a battle.
Which was why it was an enormous shock when, two centuries later, Auspren was shaken to the ground in a single night.
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So I wrote a prologue for my new book.
Two assassins, Rowan and Rhiannon Evangeline, are the daughters of a lost kingdom. They only know of it from stories. It was prophecised that they would be the ones to bring it back.
When Lielle, their mother, dies, they decide, hey, why not? All the Vaenian nobles already hate us, so let's go for it.
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Characters (names subject to change):
Emberlyn Starbough (phoenix)
Melanie Kortez (courtesan)
Arahan Hantemira (heir of Hantemira witches)
Emmaren Corverra (heir of Corverra witches)
Clara Corverra (Corverra witch)
Ren Gaevil (Lord of Sunlake)
Sylon Meradon (Lady of Eadlyn)
Lexren Emaratin (Lord of Evelly)
Talina Emaratin (Daughter of Lord of Evelly)
Skylen Aratoridin (Lady of Rosehill)
Ashlyn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Amryn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Azyah Zellenian (Queen of Djinn)
Archen and Acorn Thornfye (human siblings, trained to fight)
Sarlena Ansel (Soul Catcher)
Lainee Ansel (Daughter of the Soul Catcher)
Layla Briareigh (first Queen of Auspren)
Ellia Evangeline (Hand to the first queen of Auspren)
Lielle Evangeline (Mother of Rowan & Rhiannon)
Rowan Evangelin (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
Rhiannon Evangeline (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
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Extra Stuff:
There is one phoenix every thousand years. When a new phoenix is born, the old one dies.
The Witch Kingdom is going to be called Cormira.
Sprytes are mischevious creatures that cause trouble. They mostly live in Sprytewood.
Arah is named after the Ocean of Arahan.
Infinity Wood causes anyone not Fae or with Fae to go insane, lose all sense of direction, and eventually die.
So far there are four territories in Auspren- Eadlyn, Evelly, Sunlake, and Rosehill.
Auspren is bordered by Amenrey, Vaenia, Hartlen, and the Ocean of Arahan.
The capital of Auspren is Starfell.
The largest kingdom in the continent of Amethia is Elitenn, and it is bordered by Sprytewood, the mountains, the swamps, Hartlen, and Vaenia.
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So. Thoughts?
This all came from a dream I had. I don't even remember the dream. But I guess it was pretty good.
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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It's AMAZING! It takes utterly refined sensibilities to use such form of creativity! Good job!
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 12:02 PM


Tanglewood
 
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Absolutely adore the concept so far! One thing that confused me a tad was the prologue's length - it's a large amount of information in very few words, so I'd suggest bulking it up a little. But that's up to you, just my opinion <3

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