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RFS Thoroughbreds
01:12:37 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tobi- imma pull a 'its 8am freedom time.' *silence* '....what?'
KPH Equestrian
01:11:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I didn't want to have to use this, but...
-Click-
KPH Equestrian
01:11:38 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
*eagle screeches magestically*
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:11:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Alternative options include a grill
Tobiano Lady
01:11:05 Tobi 👻
lmao Fern. Freedom time right lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:10:42 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
well darn. we could use a flamethrower and have bbqd coon for dinner
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:09:28 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tobi- i about said america when you asked for my time lmao
KPH Equestrian
01:08:55 Rapcoon | Jester
naur! never! I see your magic eraser and retaliate with my scrub daddy!
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RFS Thoroughbreds
01:07:03 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Scubbi scrubbi
KPH Equestrian
01:05:53 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
No! Not my mortal nemesis! Dx
-Click-
Tobiano Lady
01:05:31 Tobi 👻
Sounds about right. The witching hour for shower thoughts lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:04:50 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph - youd be like a stain so theyd get a mr cleany sponge - tobi - 1:04 am
Tobiano Lady
01:03:09 Tobi 👻
How late is it over where you are Fern lol
KPH Equestrian
01:02:33 Rapcoon | Jester
xD very true

they'd start burning white sage, and unfortunately while my eyes may water a bit, this demon has evolved and is very stubborn
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:01:32 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Theyd be like 'words now leave' and you'd be like 'NARR-' 'Didnt expect that to work'
Tobiano Lady
01:01:14 Tobi 👻
Bye bye Fanta.
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:59:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Probably
KPH Equestrian
12:59:34 Rapcoon | Jester
considering how I haunt, I would definitely be exorcised, not evicted lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:58:55 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Wait if a excorsim cast out a demon then getting evicted is getting cast out wouldnt eviction be a excorsism for where you were staying
Fantasy Horses
12:50:39 Fantasy | Fanta
Byeee

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RFS Thoroughbreds
01:12:37 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tobi- imma pull a 'its 8am freedom time.' *silence* '....what?'
KPH Equestrian
01:11:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I didn't want to have to use this, but...
-Click-
KPH Equestrian
01:11:38 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
*eagle screeches magestically*
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:11:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Alternative options include a grill
Tobiano Lady
01:11:05 Tobi 👻
lmao Fern. Freedom time right lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:10:42 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
well darn. we could use a flamethrower and have bbqd coon for dinner
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:09:28 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tobi- i about said america when you asked for my time lmao
KPH Equestrian
01:08:55 Rapcoon | Jester
naur! never! I see your magic eraser and retaliate with my scrub daddy!
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:07:03 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Scubbi scrubbi
KPH Equestrian
01:05:53 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
No! Not my mortal nemesis! Dx
-Click-
Tobiano Lady
01:05:31 Tobi 👻
Sounds about right. The witching hour for shower thoughts lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:04:50 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph - youd be like a stain so theyd get a mr cleany sponge - tobi - 1:04 am
Tobiano Lady
01:03:09 Tobi 👻
How late is it over where you are Fern lol
KPH Equestrian
01:02:33 Rapcoon | Jester
xD very true

they'd start burning white sage, and unfortunately while my eyes may water a bit, this demon has evolved and is very stubborn
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:01:32 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Theyd be like 'words now leave' and you'd be like 'NARR-' 'Didnt expect that to work'
Tobiano Lady
01:01:14 Tobi 👻
Bye bye Fanta.
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:59:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Probably
KPH Equestrian
12:59:34 Rapcoon | Jester
considering how I haunt, I would definitely be exorcised, not evicted lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:58:55 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Wait if a excorsim cast out a demon then getting evicted is getting cast out wouldnt eviction be a excorsism for where you were staying
Fantasy Horses
12:50:39 Fantasy | Fanta
Byeee

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So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:06 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Long ago, it was prophecised that Auspren would fall, become but a whisper of ashes on the wind, nothing but a shadow.
It was at this moment that Lady Ellia, Hand to Queen Layla Briareigh of Auspren, kicked the star reader out of the palace.
"And don't come back," she snarled, silver locks flying, the moonlight shining on the sharp, wickedly beautiful lines of her face.
Being Fae, Lady Ellia had seen many centuries. She had been one of the founders of Auspren, along with the queen and a small group of loner Fae, whom she and Layla had lost contact with. Ellia assumed they had simply erased all traces of their identity, though it was a possibility they were dead. She shuddered at the thought.
Ellia did wonder for a minute if what the star reader said was true. No. Layla was a strong queen, Auspren was a strong country, and on top of that, they had a few million soldiers simply waiting for a battle.
Which was why it was an enormous shock when, two centuries later, Auspren was shaken to the ground in a single night.
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So I wrote a prologue for my new book.
Two assassins, Rowan and Rhiannon Evangeline, are the daughters of a lost kingdom. They only know of it from stories. It was prophecised that they would be the ones to bring it back.
When Lielle, their mother, dies, they decide, hey, why not? All the Vaenian nobles already hate us, so let's go for it.
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Characters (names subject to change):
Emberlyn Starbough (phoenix)
Melanie Kortez (courtesan)
Arahan Hantemira (heir of Hantemira witches)
Emmaren Corverra (heir of Corverra witches)
Clara Corverra (Corverra witch)
Ren Gaevil (Lord of Sunlake)
Sylon Meradon (Lady of Eadlyn)
Lexren Emaratin (Lord of Evelly)
Talina Emaratin (Daughter of Lord of Evelly)
Skylen Aratoridin (Lady of Rosehill)
Ashlyn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Amryn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Azyah Zellenian (Queen of Djinn)
Archen and Acorn Thornfye (human siblings, trained to fight)
Sarlena Ansel (Soul Catcher)
Lainee Ansel (Daughter of the Soul Catcher)
Layla Briareigh (first Queen of Auspren)
Ellia Evangeline (Hand to the first queen of Auspren)
Lielle Evangeline (Mother of Rowan & Rhiannon)
Rowan Evangelin (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
Rhiannon Evangeline (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
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Extra Stuff:
There is one phoenix every thousand years. When a new phoenix is born, the old one dies.
The Witch Kingdom is going to be called Cormira.
Sprytes are mischevious creatures that cause trouble. They mostly live in Sprytewood.
Arah is named after the Ocean of Arahan.
Infinity Wood causes anyone not Fae or with Fae to go insane, lose all sense of direction, and eventually die.
So far there are four territories in Auspren- Eadlyn, Evelly, Sunlake, and Rosehill.
Auspren is bordered by Amenrey, Vaenia, Hartlen, and the Ocean of Arahan.
The capital of Auspren is Starfell.
The largest kingdom in the continent of Amethia is Elitenn, and it is bordered by Sprytewood, the mountains, the swamps, Hartlen, and Vaenia.
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So. Thoughts?
This all came from a dream I had. I don't even remember the dream. But I guess it was pretty good.
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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It's AMAZING! It takes utterly refined sensibilities to use such form of creativity! Good job!
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 12:02 PM


Tanglewood
 
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Absolutely adore the concept so far! One thing that confused me a tad was the prologue's length - it's a large amount of information in very few words, so I'd suggest bulking it up a little. But that's up to you, just my opinion <3

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