TopGun Elites
10:16:52 mav/maverick
oh bernard...please do not be angered with me as i MUST add another housing facility for my equine friends.
White_thundacat
10:16:50 Thunda/Cat/Mom
But on the other hand, I love it and it comes in handy for capture days!
White_thundacat
10:16:19 Thunda/Cat/Mom
I downsized from 1300 barns/pastures ;)

Sometimes the long list of barns/pastures gets annoying. And horses get lost.. that's where the horse search comes in handy.
Willow Springs Ranch
10:16:04 Lace / FC
buckeye
i've read the game guide. i wasn't sure if the same steps applied for every crop etc
Full Stride Farm
10:14:35 Buckeye!
I do not think I would call thundas barns and horses a problemmat all.
Full Stride Farm
10:13:23 Buckeye!
Willow, the game guide pretty much tells you all you need to know about crops and hay
Snowfall Stables
10:13:10 ♧ Snow ♧
Star
i looked and she has 97349 open stalls lol
~solar stables~
10:12:46 moldy bread / ghost
Buckeye

thundas horses and barns are a problem
Full Stride Farm
10:12:24 Buckeye!
Well star, like others have said, showing wisely, and many horses, makes the ebs.

If you focused on that for a while , you can afford barns.
Showing is how I got all my barns
Willow Springs Ranch
10:12:02 Lace / FC
so i've been looking for a guide on growing hay/crops and i can't seem to find one. anyone know if there is one?
*Rising Stars TBs*
10:11:34 Star / Sarah
Blue diamond, you must be premium
TopGun Elites
10:11:29 mav/maverick
blue

you need to be a Premium account
Blue Diamond
10:11:09 
how do i make a brand?
Snowfall Stables
10:10:58 ♧ Snow ♧
Buckeye
so true!!! she has like 48 million barns LMAO
*Rising Stars TBs*
10:10:45 Star / Sarah
Buck, If I remember correctly thunda has over 77 thousand emty stalls/pastures, I think that is insane, I wish I would have 10 barns, then I would be happy :) I really want to know how thunda got all those barns!
Blue Diamond
10:10:05 
oh. my. goodness.
BEAUTIFUL!!
-HEE Click-
Full Stride Farm
10:09:19 Buckeye!
I need to focus on my little break here and get shows entered.
Need those ebs flowing in!
Full Stride Farm
10:08:37 Buckeye!
Can never have too many barns, unless you are Thunda
Hahahahaha
Full Stride Farm
10:06:05 Buckeye!
Gypsy, that is so cool about your Hot Sauce horse! Congrats!
Mystic Ryver
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So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:06 AM

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Long ago, it was prophecised that Auspren would fall, become but a whisper of ashes on the wind, nothing but a shadow.
It was at this moment that Lady Ellia, Hand to Queen Layla Briareigh of Auspren, kicked the star reader out of the palace.
"And don't come back," she snarled, silver locks flying, the moonlight shining on the sharp, wickedly beautiful lines of her face.
Being Fae, Lady Ellia had seen many centuries. She had been one of the founders of Auspren, along with the queen and a small group of loner Fae, whom she and Layla had lost contact with. Ellia assumed they had simply erased all traces of their identity, though it was a possibility they were dead. She shuddered at the thought.
Ellia did wonder for a minute if what the star reader said was true. No. Layla was a strong queen, Auspren was a strong country, and on top of that, they had a few million soldiers simply waiting for a battle.
Which was why it was an enormous shock when, two centuries later, Auspren was shaken to the ground in a single night.
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So I wrote a prologue for my new book.
Two assassins, Rowan and Rhiannon Evangeline, are the daughters of a lost kingdom. They only know of it from stories. It was prophecised that they would be the ones to bring it back.
When Lielle, their mother, dies, they decide, hey, why not? All the Vaenian nobles already hate us, so let's go for it.
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Characters (names subject to change):
Emberlyn Starbough (phoenix)
Melanie Kortez (courtesan)
Arahan Hantemira (heir of Hantemira witches)
Emmaren Corverra (heir of Corverra witches)
Clara Corverra (Corverra witch)
Ren Gaevil (Lord of Sunlake)
Sylon Meradon (Lady of Eadlyn)
Lexren Emaratin (Lord of Evelly)
Talina Emaratin (Daughter of Lord of Evelly)
Skylen Aratoridin (Lady of Rosehill)
Ashlyn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Amryn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Azyah Zellenian (Queen of Djinn)
Archen and Acorn Thornfye (human siblings, trained to fight)
Sarlena Ansel (Soul Catcher)
Lainee Ansel (Daughter of the Soul Catcher)
Layla Briareigh (first Queen of Auspren)
Ellia Evangeline (Hand to the first queen of Auspren)
Lielle Evangeline (Mother of Rowan & Rhiannon)
Rowan Evangelin (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
Rhiannon Evangeline (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
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Extra Stuff:
There is one phoenix every thousand years. When a new phoenix is born, the old one dies.
The Witch Kingdom is going to be called Cormira.
Sprytes are mischevious creatures that cause trouble. They mostly live in Sprytewood.
Arah is named after the Ocean of Arahan.
Infinity Wood causes anyone not Fae or with Fae to go insane, lose all sense of direction, and eventually die.
So far there are four territories in Auspren- Eadlyn, Evelly, Sunlake, and Rosehill.
Auspren is bordered by Amenrey, Vaenia, Hartlen, and the Ocean of Arahan.
The capital of Auspren is Starfell.
The largest kingdom in the continent of Amethia is Elitenn, and it is bordered by Sprytewood, the mountains, the swamps, Hartlen, and Vaenia.
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So. Thoughts?
This all came from a dream I had. I don't even remember the dream. But I guess it was pretty good.
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:14 AM
Former Stable
 
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It's AMAZING! It takes utterly refined sensibilities to use such form of creativity! Good job!
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 12:02 PM

Tanglewood
 
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Absolutely adore the concept so far! One thing that confused me a tad was the prologue's length - it's a large amount of information in very few words, so I'd suggest bulking it up a little. But that's up to you, just my opinion <3

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