Santana Rising
12:46:51 San
-HEE Click- at least she's a filly, I would have been super mad about a colour dodging colt like that!
Starleaf Stables
12:44:11 Flare <3
-HEE Click-
Starleaf Stables
12:43:57 Flare <3
-HEE Click-
who to send her too?
Full Stride Farm
12:39:41 Buckeye!
In the end itnisnall up to you, Destiny 😉😊

There are lots of WWW stallions out there these days, just gotta figure put what is most important for your goal in any given breeding
Full Stride Farm
12:38:27 Buckeye!
There are a number of famous TBs in the past that had linebreeding to very popular or famous sires, for sure.

Not every sire is great for line breeding tho, some had great decedents using that method, others had those descendants end up less quality than expected.
The trouble is it takes time to figure that out
Destiny Sport Horses
12:37:20 Destiny / DSH
Buckeye
Ah okay. It's also hard finding an all around WWW sire to breed to
Full Stride Farm
12:35:09 Buckeye!
Destiny,
Well I am not sure about the racehorse analogy you give. But yes, if you see the same sire 2 or more times in generations beyond the first 1 or 2, it is line breeding
Full Stride Farm
12:34:01 Buckeye!
Her mom is. Also weakest in movement, and a little down in scope and strength, so you may have issues with movement affecting her entire Dressage rating, and maybe have some trouble with the jumping end too
Full Stride Farm
12:32:41 Buckeye!
Destiny, you have time to wait and see on that filly, keep trainig her, she is only 1.

Her sire does have slight weak ess in movement and scope, so if she shows that as well, be more careful 😉
Destiny Sport Horses
12:32:08 Destiny / DSH
And other amazing race horses
Destiny Sport Horses
12:31:50 Destiny / DSH
Buckeye
So like how basically every TB has Secretariat and Seattle Slew multiple times
Destiny Sport Horses
12:31:02 Destiny / DSH
Azi
Yeah I'm waiting to see how she trains up
Full Stride Farm
12:31:01 Buckeye!
Ven, sibling to sibling also counts as inbreeding.

Half siblings bred together gets a little more of a grey area, but I personally would still consider that inbreeding.

Linebreeding is more like, you see the same sire in the pedigree, for instance, as grandsire, but with that generation removed, it goes more to linebreeding.

That is the easiest way I can explain it in text
Aeronautica
12:29:57 Wixy / Azi <3
She's untrained, wait until she has her week 4 onwards to see if they even match.
Destiny Sport Horses
12:29:16 Destiny / DSH
And she carries Prl Champagne Dun Creme and basically everything to make a foal flashy
Hidden Lake Farm
12:28:11 Ven
In RL, I was going to cross my holland lop back to her sire for her first litter, but she was bred accidentally by my english spot
Wraithcry Farm
12:27:44 Celeste 🌕
lol for real Amber. He is clinging extra right now. I think it is the weather.
Destiny Sport Horses
12:27:41 Destiny / DSH
-HEE Click- This is the filly I'm planning on breeding to her sire because so far he has produced outstanding off spring for me
Hidden Lake Farm
12:27:01 Ven
Oh, really? I thought inbreeding was sibling x sibling. But you definitely know better than I do
Full Stride Farm
12:25:38 Buckeye!
Technically sire to daughter is inbreeding.
Linebreeding is a bit different.
But the main issue in game is the weak traits, if any.
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So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:06 AM

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Long ago, it was prophecised that Auspren would fall, become but a whisper of ashes on the wind, nothing but a shadow.
It was at this moment that Lady Ellia, Hand to Queen Layla Briareigh of Auspren, kicked the star reader out of the palace.
"And don't come back," she snarled, silver locks flying, the moonlight shining on the sharp, wickedly beautiful lines of her face.
Being Fae, Lady Ellia had seen many centuries. She had been one of the founders of Auspren, along with the queen and a small group of loner Fae, whom she and Layla had lost contact with. Ellia assumed they had simply erased all traces of their identity, though it was a possibility they were dead. She shuddered at the thought.
Ellia did wonder for a minute if what the star reader said was true. No. Layla was a strong queen, Auspren was a strong country, and on top of that, they had a few million soldiers simply waiting for a battle.
Which was why it was an enormous shock when, two centuries later, Auspren was shaken to the ground in a single night.
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So I wrote a prologue for my new book.
Two assassins, Rowan and Rhiannon Evangeline, are the daughters of a lost kingdom. They only know of it from stories. It was prophecised that they would be the ones to bring it back.
When Lielle, their mother, dies, they decide, hey, why not? All the Vaenian nobles already hate us, so let's go for it.
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Characters (names subject to change):
Emberlyn Starbough (phoenix)
Melanie Kortez (courtesan)
Arahan Hantemira (heir of Hantemira witches)
Emmaren Corverra (heir of Corverra witches)
Clara Corverra (Corverra witch)
Ren Gaevil (Lord of Sunlake)
Sylon Meradon (Lady of Eadlyn)
Lexren Emaratin (Lord of Evelly)
Talina Emaratin (Daughter of Lord of Evelly)
Skylen Aratoridin (Lady of Rosehill)
Ashlyn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Amryn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Azyah Zellenian (Queen of Djinn)
Archen and Acorn Thornfye (human siblings, trained to fight)
Sarlena Ansel (Soul Catcher)
Lainee Ansel (Daughter of the Soul Catcher)
Layla Briareigh (first Queen of Auspren)
Ellia Evangeline (Hand to the first queen of Auspren)
Lielle Evangeline (Mother of Rowan & Rhiannon)
Rowan Evangelin (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
Rhiannon Evangeline (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
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Extra Stuff:
There is one phoenix every thousand years. When a new phoenix is born, the old one dies.
The Witch Kingdom is going to be called Cormira.
Sprytes are mischevious creatures that cause trouble. They mostly live in Sprytewood.
Arah is named after the Ocean of Arahan.
Infinity Wood causes anyone not Fae or with Fae to go insane, lose all sense of direction, and eventually die.
So far there are four territories in Auspren- Eadlyn, Evelly, Sunlake, and Rosehill.
Auspren is bordered by Amenrey, Vaenia, Hartlen, and the Ocean of Arahan.
The capital of Auspren is Starfell.
The largest kingdom in the continent of Amethia is Elitenn, and it is bordered by Sprytewood, the mountains, the swamps, Hartlen, and Vaenia.
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So. Thoughts?
This all came from a dream I had. I don't even remember the dream. But I guess it was pretty good.
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:14 AM
Former Stable
 
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It's AMAZING! It takes utterly refined sensibilities to use such form of creativity! Good job!
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 12:02 PM

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Absolutely adore the concept so far! One thing that confused me a tad was the prologue's length - it's a large amount of information in very few words, so I'd suggest bulking it up a little. But that's up to you, just my opinion <3

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