gone with the wind
08:06:17 
no, honestly
Windsor Stables
08:06:12 Quinn
I don't think its bad
Wings Of Glory
08:05:15 O Great Potato Wing
-Click-
Can you guys tell very easily that I fucked up on this or no? It's for my own horse so thank God but it's kind of a bad mess up because I can't fix it
Painted Perfection
08:02:03 Luna The Gene Queen
I feel bad for Watercolor lol. They're getting spammed by me with breeding messages XD
gone with the wind
08:02:00 
lol manchado
Eyrie of the Stars
08:01:41 Eyrie
Chimera is totally random. When ever it appears to be passed on, you just got extremely lucky.
Sun Rain Stables
08:01:18 Sun
Chim is random and you cannot breed for it. same with brindle and machitto (or whatever the random white pattern is)
WRSMisty2
08:01:10 
Ah okay thank you
gone with the wind
08:00:42 
there is a chance but its really random just like brindles and flaxen
Windsor Stables
08:00:26 Quinn
Hi holly! Didn't know you had a PON sa
WRSMisty2
07:59:40 
Can chimera be passed on or is it totally random?
Silver Linings
07:59:39 Silver🐾
I mean the wrong breed👈😁
Silver Linings
07:58:57 Silver🐾
-HEE Click-
Noooooo he is the wrong bree I just wasted 850 ebs!
Hot 2 Trot *PON*
07:56:55 Holly
Oo interesting mane and tail
-HEE Click-
Windsor Stables
07:56:46 Quinn
thanks eyrie
Eyrie of the Stars
07:56:19 Eyrie
Quinn yes, though capturing with a map is still luck of the draw. It can make a capture that would have been PPP+ EEE+. However, if the horse was only going to be AAA it'll probably be SSS.
Pony Loving Pons
07:46:02 Peep/sam
Yay all of my stallions have their remarks done
Windsor Stables
07:38:44 Quinn
Is a sherpa map worth using?
Summer
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I really need some new hobbies.
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Title in Progress - Id love suggestions! March 29, 2019 11:08 AM

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Title to Be Decided!

The shapes of furniture are a blur as I race through the house, my long legs carrying my faster than I could imagine.

The familiar house morphs, melting into a desert. The barren landscape stretches for miles, the sand making it harder to run. I'm panting, unable to control the labored breathing. My body erupts in pain and I fall, hugging my stomach.
I remove my hand to find blood. Crimson and red, red and crimson, drops slowly making their way down my arm. I look down, the familiar cut throbbing as the landscape changes again.
A female voice, almost distant and quiet, echoes through the wind, begging me. It sings, chanting a forgotten name from a forgotten time.
Rhia.... Rhia.... Rhia
The voice warps, suddenly deeper as it continues to chant. A figure in white robes appears out of the sand, his violet eyes captivating. I step forward, expecting to be met with scales... And fall.


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The clash and rumble of the growing storm reflect in the girl's swirling eyes, giving her an almost crazed look. She whispers, silently singing a song in an ancient tounge. The enchanting words flow smoothly from her full ruby lips. <div align="left"> The table in front of her is rough, the stone platform disrupted by the shaking and thrashing of a young boy, no older than fifteen. The boy's sandy hair is stuck at odd angles, and some strands stuck to his sweaty forehead. His violet eyes portrayed an unknown emotion.
Fears, maybe? Guilt? Regret? What is it!
He screams in agony, the heart-wrenching sound echoes through the cavern chamber. It was only then that I noticed the chanting people surrounding him and the lone woman, the shadows reciting an ancient spell.
Is this what they feared? The Nobels?
I could hear one thing repeat through the boy's mind, Maybe it won't be as bad as they say.
I lunge for the boy, the dark chains and shadows stopping me before consuming my frustrated cry. And the world goes blank.


Edited at March 29, 2019 11:48 AM by Adasona Elites
Title in Progress - Id love suggestions! March 29, 2019 12:00 PM
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More please :O

Lol

Maybe call it Rhia??
Title in Progress - Id love suggestions! March 29, 2019 12:02 PM

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Golden Meadows said:
More please :O

Lol

Maybe call it Rhia??



I was thinking that, but so wanted to incorporate a light theme. The original title of the draft in WattPad is Photine, which means light. I'll probably update a lot lol

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