Mythological
10:00:45 Crowley | Myth
Attalla
My yearling is my stable banner.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:00:03 Hummer
I leave for Hawaii tomorrow, but I am anxious about leaving my pets behind. >.< MY cousin is taking care of them and I'm sure she will do a great job, but I still feel anxious.
AttallasImpalaStable
09:59:50 
lol i used to have a few morgans they were some of my favorites but didnt work for our programs sadly and my hands were too full so our friends bought them
Mythological
09:59:38 Crowley | Myth
A WWW is world class is all disciplines.
Dutch Manors
09:59:32 July/Dutch/ace
hello finally everyone
AttallasImpalaStable
09:58:12 
Tbh i have no idea what a WWW is lol i feel like an idiot
Mythological
09:57:32 Crowley | Myth
I have Morgans.
AttallasImpalaStable
09:56:53 
IRL mainly quarter horses but i have a few quarter horse arabians among some mixes
Mythological
09:56:16 Crowley | Myth
Is your goal a WWW?
AttallasImpalaStable
09:55:28 
I've been putting them in whatever level was highest in their ratings once i got them rated
Mythological
09:53:27 Crowley | Myth
What breed(s) do you have IRL?
Mythological
09:52:36 Crowley | Myth
Attalla
You are going for all disciplines right?
AttallasImpalaStable
09:52:21 
lol One of my personal horses IRL is Attalla as in Attalla Alabama where we bought her from
AttallasImpalaStable
09:51:14 
Right now I'm enjoying breeding for rarity ect but trying to figure out how to get my horses training ratings up
Mythological
09:48:38 Crowley | Myth
Whoa! Why so many ts?
Mythological
09:47:48 Crowley | Myth
Atttallas
What are your goals?
Aussie Stables
09:46:45 Aussie - Golden
Myth - lol!
Mythological
09:46:07 Crowley | Myth
Rocket
Oh good...no comment at this time.
AttallasImpalaStable
09:45:16 
well would anyone mind looking at my stable and let me know their opinion and what they think i should do
KPH Equestrian
09:45:07 Rapcoon | Jester
better than piss on some dogs
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM

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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM

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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM

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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM

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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM

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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM

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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM
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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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