Aussie Stables
12:01:47 Aussie - Golden
Thunda, if i sleep i wake up 5 minutes later thinking i can't breathe due to coughing...
Spana, choose ISH. if you do i can give you some pretty good help to get started...
broods, EEE+ ISH mares...
Painted Perfection
11:59:57 Luna The Gene Queen
Thunda, but I don't want to XD
The Undercity
11:59:48 Dory
I cant believe that one of her babies made it to the ABLB
-HEE Click-
Cheese
11:59:47 Cheesy KNNs
Spana's gonna do WB lol
White_thundacat
11:59:39 Thunda/Cat/Mom
Go get some sleep!
Aussie Stables
11:59:01 Aussie - Golden
Thunda, you wanna sharie some ABLB mares LOL
god i am not thinking now, who would have thought about 10 hours sleep in 4 days would make me tired and stupid?
White_thundacat
11:57:18 Thunda/Cat/Mom
I have or am getting embryos to all 5 of those numbers. I just didn't know which ones I'm using first 🙃
Aussie Stables
11:56:36 Aussie - Golden
whatever's higher i guess Thunda
White_thundacat
11:56:03 Thunda/Cat/Mom
#9 & #25 ABLB
Aussie Stables
11:56:01 Aussie - Golden
just checking LOL
Aussie Stables
11:55:52 Aussie - Golden
i haven't advertised my recruitment contest for a few days... oopsies.
White_thundacat
11:55:37 Thunda/Cat/Mom
Looks like I'm using Yes to Heaven's and Atris'.
Cheese
11:55:29 Cheesy KNNs
Yeahh Spana's my friend lol
Aussie Stables
11:55:22 Aussie - Golden
Thunda show me matchies
White_thundacat
11:55:04 Thunda/Cat/Mom
I was trying to figure out which ABLB mate's embryo I'm using next yr.
Aussie Stables
11:54:15 Aussie - Golden
wait you are Oak's friend right? LOL
Aussie Stables
11:52:52 Aussie - Golden
oh hi Spana,
i'm Oak's random friend :P
Spanakopita
11:52:47 
INSANE...oopsies
Aussie Stables
11:52:29 Aussie - Golden
nice Oak!
Cheese
11:52:27 Cheesy KNNs
Ugh...
Spana, if you call me insane again. I will have you banned ;)
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Story line help January 18, 2021 10:53 AM

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Alright so there isnt much I have to say here but Im writing a story about Hell's Reapers, basically its my own take on the seven sins which I know is overused but its just for some practice, my rough idea was that seven demons act as servants to Death and collect the souls going down but apart from that I have no idea where to take it, so any suggestions?
Story line help January 18, 2021 08:08 PM

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So what you have right now is a premise, but in order to create a story, you need to develop a plot. I like to tie my plots to character development- who are my characters now, and what do I want them to learn and how do I want them to change throughout the story? Then I figure out how to make that happen for them, through the plot.

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