Glacier Bay Cove
06:16:43 The Brindle Princess
@DD,
@Rapcoon,
How did you change the colors on your stable pages. I can't figure out how to do that for my stable page
KPH Equestrian
06:16:39 Rapcoon | Jester
fey
okay fair xD
Velaris Stud
06:16:02 Fey
Maybe tomorrow. Pm me the link and I'll look in the daylight xD
KPH Equestrian
06:15:36 Rapcoon | Jester
fey
aw c'mon, all I did was finish the greyscales and do most of the pattern work xD
Velaris Stud
06:15:01 Fey
I am not looking KPH
Dash and Duchess
06:14:58 DD
beautiful jester, just beautiful xD
Velaris Stud
06:14:47 Fey
No I definitely agree. It's just something I've picked up on over the years if you want to avoid it thats all.
KPH Equestrian
06:14:40 Rapcoon | Jester
fey
hehe mission accomplished then xD
KPH Equestrian
06:13:58 Rapcoon | Jester
hold on, I have a better screenshot-
-Click-
Darklove Stables
06:13:17 Gold(en) | Sun
-HEE Click-
Why do I have a soft spot for Duns ;-;
The Old Gods
06:13:16 Void Malign
Well, when the paragraph is descriptive and includes dialogue, it's not always going to be active tense
Velaris Stud
06:12:31 Fey
Ok KPH that is seriously creepy and I'm just about to go to bed >.<
calais
06:11:52 
rip I asked a question then went afk :")
Velaris Stud
06:11:52 Fey
Just generally but it was aimed at you Void.

I had a really bad habit of writing actively and formally for far too long xD
KPH Equestrian
06:11:50 Rapcoon | Jester
mythy
quick question: in what way would you like the hell to be creeped out of you?
gory/typical halloweeny stuff or something like these guys?
-Click-
The Old Gods
06:10:57 Void Malign
Unsure if you're meaning me or using the general 'you'.
Velaris Stud
06:07:38 Fey
Lol, I'm extremely lucky that my many years as working as a marketer has lead me to those AI detectors scanning all my work as 100% human. Its definitely the way you write. You have to write passively with a mixture of grammar. Short words as well :D
KPH Equestrian
06:07:31 Rapcoon | Jester
eury
pfft. wow. AI accusing people of using AI to write feels like that one spider-man meme
-Click-
Mythological
06:07:16 Crowley | Myth
KPH
Gaaah! 🤗😆
Mythological
06:06:35 Crowley | Myth
-HEE Click-
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Reese Farms Writing March 15, 2021 11:53 AM

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Hello everyone!

On here I'll be posting chapter of a book I'm writing. If you have ideas, comments, or questions please post them here. Thanks!
-Reese Farm-

Edited at March 16, 2021 11:40 AM by Reese Farm
Reese Farms Writing March 15, 2021 05:28 PM

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Sunrise Satble~Chapter 1
Natalie and Audrey Jackson walked slowly up the hill to see their horses. Well they weren't their horses, but they liked to think of them as theirs. They actually belonged to the owner Lisa Jones. She was a young woman who was soon to be a famous equestrian.
"I can't wait to see Rosie and Carrie!" said Natalie.
Rosie and Carrie Watson were their best friends and also students there.
"Hey you two!"
"Hi Miss Lisa. How are you?
"I'm good. Are you excited for the lesson later?"
"Yes we are!"
"Good! Better go tack up!"
After Natalie's short conversation with Lisa, they went to the barn and stepped inside. The smell of horses and hay filled their noses.
Where's Rosie and Carrie? Audrey thought.

Edited at March 15, 2021 05:28 PM by Reese Farm
Reese Farms Writing March 15, 2021 05:29 PM

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If you notice any errors or want me to change something please let me know in this forum. Thanks!
Reese Farms Writing March 16, 2021 03:28 PM

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Sunrise Stable~ Chapter 2
Rosie and Carrie Watson pulled on their booots and grabbed their gloves and hemets.
"Let's go girls!" said their Mom.
"Just a sec..." said Rosie as she finished pulling on her boot.
Once they arrived at the barn they ran up the hill and and found Natalie and Audrey mucking out stalls.
"Yes you two are here!!" said Natalie.
"Hey! How are you?" said Carrie.
"We're good. Miss Lisa said there's going to be a lesson later and should get tacked up. We cleaned your guys stalls so you can just go tack up." said Audrey.
"Thanks so much!" Rosie and Carrie said together. "Let's go tack up."
Reese Farms Writing March 16, 2021 04:09 PM


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what exactly is this? like a very very short story or a RP thin or what?
Reese Farms Writing March 16, 2021 05:29 PM

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Olive Tree Equine said:
what exactly is this? like a very very short story or a RP thin or what?

It's short chapters of a book I'm writing.

Edited at March 16, 2021 05:29 PM by Reese Farm

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