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Midnight April 15, 2022 01:10 AM
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Midnight


A truck pulls in a driveway with a trailer hooked to the back. When the truck parks outside of a huge stable the driver gets out and opens the trailer door. He brings out a beautiful black mare with a white star on her face in the space between her eyes. The driver hands the horse’s lead rope to a man that works at the stable. The black horse who is named Midnight is taken to a dirty stall. When the man puts her in the stall with windows that lets her see in the other stall next to hers and takes off her halter he leaves to get the other two horses Princess and Snowfire. As Midnight waits in the stall for the other two horses, she begins to pace in her stall. Finally, the man comes back with the two other horses. He puts both the horses in the stall next to Midnight’s. And then he leaves.


Midnight-(Begins to paw the ground and rears. And neighs getting nervous)


Snowfire-(Sees Midnight getting nervous and restless. The stallion tosses his head and looks at Midnight in the stall next to him through a huge window) Midnight…. Midnight. (Midnight ignores him and continues her pacing. Snowfire gets irritated and neighs really loudly trying to get Midnight to acknowledge him.) MIDNIGHT!!!!


Midnight- (After stomping her hoof and flicking her tail in irritation turns to the old stallion) What!


Snowfire- I need you to relax.


Midnight-(Snorts and tossing her mane) No. This place doesn’t feel right. It’s musty and not clean. And the smell of this place burns my nose.


Snowfire- Midnight! Please! I need you to calm down.


Midnight- Not until I figure out where we are!


Snowfire- (Already knowing where they are because he has been in a place like it before that he has escaped once before) Midnight I can tell you where we are but you need to relax and listen to me. (When Midnight finally relaxes Snowfire tries to explain where they are.) Listen! We are in a bad place. I know because I have been in a place like this before.


Midnight-(Ears pinned against her head and stomps her hoof) Ok that’s not telling me anything!


Snowfire- We are in an auction. A lot of animals leave in a huge loud truck and they are never seen again. (Sees Midnight getting nervous again)


Midnight- (Rears and hits the stall door with her hooves) OH NOW I CAN RELAX!!!! HOW CAN I RELAX WHEN YOU TELL ME HORSES LEAVE THIS PLACE AND ARE NEVER SEEN AGAIN!!!!


Snowfire- (In a calm voice) Midnight please listen to me! We can escape this place. There is a way to get out of this place.


Midnight- Oh ok. (Sarcastically rolls her eyes) How do you expect to escape this place!


Princess- (Gets scared because of all the arguing and because of what she heard Snowfire say about the place they are at. Starts crying.)


Snowfire- (Looks at Princess) Princess it’s ok we will figure out a way out of here.


Princess- (winnys)


Snowfire- (Looks back at Midnight) Don’t worry about that. Just leave it to me.

Hi. Just so you know this story is not complete. I am trying to figure out more of the plot of the story. Tell me what you think of it so far but please be kind and supportive about it don't say any mean comments. And I will be very glad to here any ideas you have for this story so don't be afraid to put some ideas just please be kind about it. I am new in trying to wright my own storyline. Everyone has to start somewhere right. So this may not be perfect but that is ok.

This story is supposed to be about a mare and her friend (Snowfire) and her sister (Princess). They are stuck in a terrible situation and there lives are in danger. Will they be able to escape? Or will they be forced to meet a terrible fate that so many animals are forced to go through? Stay tuned to find out.

Midnight April 15, 2022 01:14 AM
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Please please please be kind. I am new at making something up so I would apreciate it if you are kind in the comments. You can give me some ideas or critisizem but please be kind about it.


Edited at April 15, 2022 01:15 AM by Lucifer Morningstar

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