Horse Eden : Critique? And advice?

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Sat 01:54am

Stables Online: 71

Maco Stables

01:39:48 Maco

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Beauchamps

12:57:54

-HEE Click-
Oooo

Poppy Land

12:48:05 Poppy

No no, I'll take it lol he's perfect.
Maybe I can name him a fruit or something.

Pandemonium

12:46:23 Pan's RID Mess

Poppy,
Couldn't even give you an Ee to darken him up

Poppy Land

12:43:36 Poppy

I also find it amusing that he's literally orange.

Poppy Land

12:43:00 Poppy

Pan
And both PATNs. Its ok. Ill work with him. I did say my goal was a WWW colt so I cant complain too much lol

Directa

12:40:51

What is the standard of breeding approvals in the moment?

The Old Gods

12:40:40 Void Malign

I couldn't tell you the last time I bought fireworks.

Pandemonium

12:40:30 Pan's RID Mess

Poppy, he got one copy of silver at least but damn he really did his best to dodge it all

DSD Training Center

12:38:38 Spring <3

I didn't buy fireworks this year. Figured I wouldn't spend $300 and let my friends family do it instead, since I just go over there for the fourth

Poppy Land

12:36:19 Poppy

Thanks :)

Pink Mocha

12:35:01 Pinky 🎀

Omg poppy your stable set is so cute

Ambrosia

12:32:19 Amb

Oh wonderful my Holy Crap straw gave me a svenned EEE. I hate it here

Ambrosia

12:28:46 Amb

Crying in the club ✊😔

Thornwood Manor

12:24:37 Caal

Amb, omg me too 😭

Poppy Land

12:21:47 Poppy

-HEE Click-

He dodged everything possible...

NeverGonnaTrivYouUp

12:19:07 The Mane Brains

We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it

Ambrosia

12:18:37 Amb

Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already

Blue Diamond

12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^

void
Literally

The Old Gods

12:14:57 Void Malign

Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.

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Maco Stables

01:39:48 Maco

'You have logged in 100 days in a row.
You earned: 300 Eden Bucks
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Cool

Beauchamps

12:57:54

-HEE Click-
Oooo

Poppy Land

12:48:05 Poppy

No no, I'll take it lol he's perfect.
Maybe I can name him a fruit or something.

Pandemonium

12:46:23 Pan's RID Mess

Poppy,
Couldn't even give you an Ee to darken him up

Poppy Land

12:43:36 Poppy

I also find it amusing that he's literally orange.

Poppy Land

12:43:00 Poppy

Pan
And both PATNs. Its ok. Ill work with him. I did say my goal was a WWW colt so I cant complain too much lol

Directa

12:40:51

What is the standard of breeding approvals in the moment?

The Old Gods

12:40:40 Void Malign

I couldn't tell you the last time I bought fireworks.

Pandemonium

12:40:30 Pan's RID Mess

Poppy, he got one copy of silver at least but damn he really did his best to dodge it all

DSD Training Center

12:38:38 Spring <3

I didn't buy fireworks this year. Figured I wouldn't spend $300 and let my friends family do it instead, since I just go over there for the fourth

Poppy Land

12:36:19 Poppy

Thanks :)

Pink Mocha

12:35:01 Pinky 🎀

Omg poppy your stable set is so cute

Ambrosia

12:32:19 Amb

Oh wonderful my Holy Crap straw gave me a svenned EEE. I hate it here

Ambrosia

12:28:46 Amb

Crying in the club ✊😔

Thornwood Manor

12:24:37 Caal

Amb, omg me too 😭

Poppy Land

12:21:47 Poppy

-HEE Click-

He dodged everything possible...

NeverGonnaTrivYouUp

12:19:07 The Mane Brains

We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it

Ambrosia

12:18:37 Amb

Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already

Blue Diamond

12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^

void
Literally

The Old Gods

12:14:57 Void Malign

Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.

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March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/411yx0ki9/CONTEST2.jpg

This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!

Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses

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March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

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March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD

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March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isnÂ’t really standing out and itÂ’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

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March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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