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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 204 Season: Spring

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Morning Showers then Cooling

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Sat 07:03am

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07:01:54

Ah darn my 1/1 boy is no longer 1/1 lol Well hopefully he trains decent, he’s the only good thing I ended up with this RO -HEE Click-

06:58:15 Emani

I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol

Thornwood Manor

06:55:22 Caal

I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃

06:54:26 Emani

She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol

06:52:47 Campbell AD

Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

06:51:44 Hails

I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies

06:51:30 Emani

-HEE Click-

Excited about her!

Campbell Equestrian

06:42:36 Hails

-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!

06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire

Blue
That's gorgeous.

Bluegrass Racing

06:33:50 Blue

so pretty
-HEE Click-

Red Willow Stables

06:18:49

I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it

06:16:47

Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper

06:16:36 Centura

yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time

Red Willow Stables

06:10:10

That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol

06:09:19 Centura

I can't do well with either lol.

Red Willow Stables

06:09:04

Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils

Red Willow Stables

06:08:49

it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw

06:07:43 Centura

red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol

Red Willow Stables

06:07:03

Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip

Thunderbolt Park

06:06:18 Bolt

Not sure sorry

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07:01:54

Ah darn my 1/1 boy is no longer 1/1 lol Well hopefully he trains decent, he’s the only good thing I ended up with this RO -HEE Click-

06:58:15 Emani

I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol

Thornwood Manor

06:55:22 Caal

I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃

06:54:26 Emani

She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol

06:52:47 Campbell AD

Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

06:51:44 Hails

I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies

06:51:30 Emani

-HEE Click-

Excited about her!

Campbell Equestrian

06:42:36 Hails

-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!

06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire

Blue
That's gorgeous.

Bluegrass Racing

06:33:50 Blue

so pretty
-HEE Click-

Red Willow Stables

06:18:49

I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it

06:16:47

Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper

06:16:36 Centura

yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time

Red Willow Stables

06:10:10

That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol

06:09:19 Centura

I can't do well with either lol.

Red Willow Stables

06:09:04

Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils

Red Willow Stables

06:08:49

it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw

06:07:43 Centura

red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol

Red Willow Stables

06:07:03

Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip

Thunderbolt Park

06:06:18 Bolt

Not sure sorry

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they donÂ’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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