Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 204   Season: Spring   
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All Breeds
10:47:29 Fawn
Tasi, did you see the filly I got?
Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
-HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-

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All Breeds
10:47:29 Fawn
Tasi, did you see the filly I got?
Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
-HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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